MG FF- Riyasat- Part 19-Page 66-29/05/2018 - Page 15

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SUPERB UPDATE
MAAN FATHER IS NO MORE
AND GEET DID NOT GET JOB
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Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Maan went to meet his dad
But his dad's demise came as a shock to maan that he fainted
On being questioned his uncle managed with his words
On other hand yet again geet lost her job and could not make through
Tej's demeanor after maan's dad's demise seems odd
Is tej behind maan's property and maan's dad's death!!?
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nice part
oh maan's father dead
i think tej is behind his father's death
poor geet did not get job
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RIYASAT

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Recap

Maan looked at Tej in surprise; there was lot of change in Tej after his father's death. Maan was very close to Tej, but now he was not same. Maan used to spend most of the time with Tej. He wanted to know hear problem of workers has his father always used to say him to take care of AE. Maan waited for them for no one came and when he asked about this with Tej , he informed Maan that he has taken care. Maan was not able to do anything he was confused with all happenings

Part-5


Geet went to railway station and sat in waiting room, no one was there in that room, she thought to change her dress has she was fully sweat walking from Diamond Estates towards railway station she opened her bag and saw a visiting card of Maan Singh Khurana, then she thought "pata nahi kyun mera mann Maan se milne ke liye keh rahi hai, aisa kyun lag raha hai ki Maan ko mera zarurat hai...he is just my friend. Ek bar jake use mil leti hoon, I am not going to lose anything, ghar jake bhi mujhe karne ke liye koi kaam nahi, phir PG mein khana banana padega, let see whether Maan remember me or not" thinking that she closed her bag again and then called Maan. The phone was ringing but no one answered from other side. Then she looked at his home number and called after few rings someone picked the call and said "Hello"

Geet: Hello...can I talk to Mr. Maan Singh Khurana

Person: there is no one by this name, who are you?

Geet: is it AE?

Person: yes

Geet: if I am not wrong AE belongs to Mr Raj Singh Khurana and his son Mr Maan Singh Khurana...who the hell ask about this? Tumara aukat mein raho...mnaukar malik banne ke koshish mat karo...mere se panga mat lena, you donno who I am?"


The person trembled listening to her and disconnected the call immediately. Tej was sweating furiously. Geet smirked and called landline again. She was sure that this time the person will not take a chance to fool her... Maan who came back from out was about to go inside at that time landline ring again and he picked up call looking at Tej who was standing like statue said "Hello"

Geet: Hai Maan, this is Geet, don't tell my name if anyone is next to you

Maan was confused with her talks but just said Hi

Geet: woo sab badh mein batavungi...I am in railway station now just thought to meet you once if you are free and then go to Bangalore...Agar tum busy ho toh I will go back

Maan: I am not busy you...

Geet interrupted him in middle and said "will talk to you in person Maan I will come there, you no need to worry about that. Meet you soon"


Without waiting for his response she disconnected the call. Tej was looking at Maan, he wanted to know who called him, Maan just kept the receiver back saying "ajeeb hai" saying that he went to room without saying anything to Tej who was gaping at him. He closed the door and then checked his mobile and saw missed call from unknown number. He dialed the number and came to know that's from railway station PCO. Then thought "Geet might have tried to reach me first and when I did not respond to her she called landline number...but I dunno why she said to not to say her name in front of anyone? What's the matter? Only Geet can clear the confusion...it's good that she is coming, I will get some peace if I talk to her...Geet pls come soon I need my friend very badly" saying this took magazine and started reading it

Here Tej looked at Maan confusingly...he wondered who called Maan and why he did not talk anything in front of him...he wanted to know what is running in Maan's mind. He went to his room and saw Maan who was busy in reading and then asked "kiska phone tha Maan? No one called on landline till today" Maan raised is eyebrow and lied to Tej for the first time in his life saying "Pata nahi Chachu...I was not able to hear anything there was lot of noise in the background...if it is urgent they will call us back...or might be some marketing calls, they didn't say anything to me. So I disconnected the call". Tej looked are Maan intensely to check whether he is lying with him. But did not find anything on his face so he walked out from the room without saying anything. Maan was looking at Tej questioningly "why he was so much interested to know about the call? What's going on here?"



Geet took ticket and board the train; she got down from the train within few minutes and took auto to AE. Geet got down and paid for auto and then she walked towards the gate and saw security guard their and then she asked "mujhe Maan se milna hai?" security looked at her surprisingly and said "aise naam mein koi nahi hai...tum jao hayan se" Geet was angry listening to the same line again and said "agar tum nahi bulav hogi toh mein tumare saab se complaint karungi" he didn't say anything to her and did not even called Maan. Geet took her phone and called Maan...seeing this security said "ek minute madam, mien bulavunga" saying that he called

Security: Saab ek ladki hayee hai chote saab ko milen ke liye

Person:*****

Security: jee saab...woh khe rahi hai chote saab ko call karegi

Person:*****

Security: I will tell her to wait

Person:****

Security: jee saab

Geet waited for the person to come and she was sure that it was not Maan. May be the person who talked to her in phone she wanted to see him. After few minutes one middle aged men came near gate and said "koun ho tum?"

Geet: mein kyun batav...aap Maan ko bula lejiye wahi aap ko bataheyenge ke mein koun hoon

Person: Maan yahan nahi hai

Geet: teek kai...koi baat nahi mein Maan ko call karungi ...saying that she started searching phone in her bag


The person got scared and was trying to stop her at the same time Maan came out talking on his phone and saw Geet near gate. He immediately disconnected the call and rushed towards Geet and said "I am waiting for you inside and what are you doing here?"

Geet looked at the person and security guard sharply and pointing fingers towards them said "if these people allow me to come in then I can enter right?"

Maan glared at security guard and looked at the person and angrily asked "why you did not allow Geet inside chachu?"

Edited by misty_drastifan - 8 years ago

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