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Asha

@ashakavyam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Hi;

Read till part 6. Very nice work. But still unbelivable plot what about geets relatives? and what about the society? I wonder how she is leaving there ?

Good part : the plot is very nice and story level but the role of other characters are not given its just in maan's and Geet's POV.

After reading all these parts I really look forward to read the next parts. please send the pw.

Regards

Asha

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Fantastic updates

maan came to meet amu with chocolates and toys

geet is angry

maan poured his feelings to geet

maan is proud of geet for taking care of amu

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

Part 6. Fabulous update. Maan brought sweets and toy car for Amu. He indirectly tells Geet that he was looking for them . Dev came to know about the cafe deal which Maan did and was not happy and expressed his concern. Maan has a long way to go to win back Geet's trust. Superb.

Pw for part 7 pls.

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#524

Important about plot check

Originally posted by: ashakavyam
Hi;
Read till part 6. Very nice work. But still unbelivable plot what about geets relatives? and what about the society? I wonder how she is leaving there ?

Good part : the plot is very nice and story level but the role of other characters are not given its just in maan's and Geet's POV.

After reading all these parts I really look forward to read the next parts. please send the pw.

Regards

Asha

1 : ur view

But still unbelivable plot

My answer

I have already told its a fiction not any real life story.But yes reality moulded in creativity . Liberties are requirement

I don wanna take any name . But you know even today world's most intelligent person.. The top most scientist .He can't even smile but just on the base of little sensation in face.. he does whole work. Even talking about 1000 years ahead.

He has kids from 2 marriages

A paralysed man can think in full senses..Can share normal relation with partner..I also researched little .A paralysed person can fell this relation which I don wanna discuss further. As our body has totally different system for this which link body to brain.

So Maan n Geet's relation is based there..

2 : Ur View : Geets relatives

My answer

Check whole story in detail every relation is clear from Geet's side..Who she had in family..Even why she is dumb an uneducated

3: Ur View : and what about the society? I wonder how she is leaving there ?

My Answer : Society Oh come on..this is short story..Some times writer leaves it on readers to think... Story is still in progress..Many questions are yet to be answered

4 : Ur View : maan's and Geet's POV.

My Answer

It is a yawner ..a type of literature .. Even Maan Geet's POV are just like any story narration ..Not like dialogues.. For short story this much of detailing is not possible...Okey just tell me ..When there is no need of other people from where I bring forcibly..I am mentioning as per flow then..

Even I explained some one else. How feeling works without seeing any one Let me tell you .When u call some one ..some office , call centre etc anywhere...for some inquiry...u never saw that person totally unknown..If representative over there talk to u nicely ..u feel great ...but if on same line u dial again n u got some arrogant b rude person..U gave lots of galian..I mean in mind ...This is simple example of feeling..

Babies can't think like developed persons , can't say something...but they smile..cry.. touch of mother or close one satisfy baby that he/she is not alone..even kids getting warmth of parents never get scared..

Same with pets who understood language of touch n its love

What about Maan ? Who was in full senses..He felt someone..And slowly slowly same acts of Geet came in front of him n he recognized Geet that she is same..He some where knew she couldn't speak..She had child..so its not reality...fiction main aise he hota hai..

When all things got connected then Tu Tu Hai Wahi became a fiction.

If u want a story where society , characters...bla bla is needed in detail go n read Kahe Toh Se Sajna..Link is below..U can find that ff in that..Usme society ka full drama hai..😆

I write stories on facts not on just fantasy...Science..Society..Law..Medical terms..I do research may be on internet before writing...

My stories

Kahe Toh Se Sajna (FF) : Based on like this story's theme reason behind given in starting

Mere Papa Maan Season Two : Based on Surrogacy facts are given

Saath Koi Bhula Yaad Aaya : Based on 2013 North East severe floods n land/ mud slides which left no trace of towns n villages..

Kis Morrh Pe Miley Ho : Based on Heart Transplantation n how that person goes through emotional phase

Many more n the themes why I chose given in each story ...I don start without research..My running fictions Kya Tumhe Haq Hai is almost plot of my very close ones' life...n Baabul Geet's condition is based on two facts ...

And on SS " Post Depression " I m planning today it is based on a kind of depression moulded in Maan Geet's story..

I don like to give explanations. But I can't bear that some one say my theme is unbelievable...If u don wanna read..U can leave...

Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago