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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#541

Chapter 6

Awesome update

Dev was worried for maan

First he was not interested to go out and now

He is always staying outside and now this

Cafe deal something changed after coming

To the cafe Maan shifted to the cafe rest house

And said dev to leave but dev cannot go against

His dadima and said he will stay in Chandigarh

And take care of mohali project

Dev was being a sandwich between the two

Maan brought chocolates and a toy for Amu

But geet she didn't like it and maan 's outburst

Gave her hints that he knows everything and

How he feels lonely

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#542

Chapter7

Geet could join the riddle words of maan

And understand that it is related to her but

Again she is thinking it may be of someone

Else but maan gave her one night time to

Think she knows he love her and their son

Geet had taken the risk of getting close to

Maan as it is cold she wants to protect him

Their love had formed a tiny life inside her

She helped maan to write on a paper but the

Preeti wants all the credit of maan responding

And to make her job permanent she had stopped

Geet to meet maan and later found out she is

Pregnant and brij wants to abort the baby so

She ran away and found a kind lady who

Helped her and also taught her to read and write

Geet went through a lot at the same time she

Was there for Their son

Waiting for the next update

Thanks for the pw

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#543

Superb parts ..

Both memorising their past and Maan did what his heart wanted ..

He too goodies for Amu and Geet didn't liked that ..

Well her concern is absolutely right ..

Maan indirectly hinted Geet and now Geet too guessed that he knows the truth ..

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#544

Lovely update dev so worried cant blame him he is witnessing maan's activity and there maan also told him to leave ...maan brought gifts for amu but his bad luck she didnt like it liked the way indirectly he told her the truth

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no name

@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#545

Lovely part liked their past both became one but her sis and that brij tried to harm her good that she ran away hmm now geet also know that maan is aware of everything now lets see what will she do thnx 4 pm

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#546

Thank you but you have already given clarifications

I'm waiting for next chapter 😆

POV given actually makes the story interesting I like that so for me its just great

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#547

amazing concept di...well written...clarifications not required...always excited for next part...!!!!

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myrah shaikh

@myrahluvsk

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#548

Thanks for the note
your story is best

waiting for update

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#549

waiting

really why copy others work

don't write if you can't imagine any thing

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turbulence

@turbulence

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

updating

I have already started to pen down ...

But there is something I want to tell I used term 'Mumma ' my word is getting directly copied ... Even I know Amu ka Manu banna diya real name rakha hoga Armaan yet to be disclosed..When I asked she is not replying

Why people copy others if they don't know how to write ..

Even some one asked me why I am narrating story from Maan Geet's point of view ? I think that person is not aware..this a yawner/type of writing first person narration
...

So before copy n before questioning about useless questions think once what r u doing 😆

Yaar tu koi tension na le. You just relax and cool your mind. Think calmly, then write out your superb marvellous update. Me really love all your stories to the core.