Working with Tycoon [Part 3 pg.5]updated

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Rechecking the file and making sure of the figures were right he closed it shut with sleep taking over him. The clock was about to strike eight and he was sure every one might have already left for the day... usually it was our MD who left late, but at times when he was out of station or busy with other branches he wouldn't be available in the office... anyway he didn't have anyone to go home to his sister lived with him till a year back until she got married and settled with her husband and his parents were too materialistic to be bothered about his wellbeing...

Locking his cabin and sir's cabin he made his way to the security room to double check with things before he called it a day!

Not having much an appetite, he thought he would grab a burger in the nearby joint and head home but then he found himself looking for an empty table when he found one where a girl was alone and the rest of the chairs were unoccupied and she seemed almost done so without thinking much he walked to the table and the made himself comfortable.

Usually he wasn't very comfortable around girls but the one opposite to him didn't seem to bother about him so he just shrugged and started having his burger

" Umm... Hi" the girl opposite to him said meekly feeling oddly embarrassed for some reason

He cleared his throat before replying her and decided to continue his meal and walkaway quickly maybe she was waiting for someone and wanted him to leave the table...

"Well I was thinking if you didn't like the potato wafers much I could share yours..." the girl said doubtfully making him chocked... the strange girl sitting opposite him wanted to share his meal!

Maybe she was hungry not wanting to embarrass her more he pushed the try towards her which brought a huge smile on her face

"Hi... I'm Priyanka Manchanda"

"Aditya Kasyap" he answered with a genuine smile "sorry if you are waiting for someone I'll finish up quickly and leave..."

"No no that's ok I wasn't waiting for anyone the table is free... please enjoy your meal" she said looking through her phone and eating in between... boyfriend may be.. anyway he kept silent and finished his meal while she still kept tapping on her phone... when he thought to have a conversation with her his phone started ringing and seeing the caller id he could never ignore calls from this particular person he picked up

"Hello sir.."

"I've mailed you the details sir..."

"They would be around this Friday sir.."

"I'll get it done sir.."

The words from the other end must have shaken him that he shuttered before replying his eyes have gone almost glassy with a layer of tears forming

"It's my duty sir... Good night sir.."

When he cut the call he noticed the girl opposite to him was long gone with a "Thank u :)" written on the tissue... he just shrugged and left... nothing was important to him than taking that call... it's not because of the huge pay he was getting but he knew his boss from the day he stepped in to business... both of them started their career at the same time... they were there for each other without making their presence known...

The next day there was a business party he was attending with sir... who was sitting in a lone corner with a drink in his hand... while he was waiting for waiting for their client to show up so that they could head for office as they had other important things to deal with

"Adi??" The guy in his best designer clothes called him without turning his back

"Yes sir?"

"The girl was beautiful right!"

"Sorry sir ... Girl? Who sir?"

"Oh come on Adi the one you were with yesterday..."

A gasp escaped his lips in shock how did he know... he wasn't there right...

"So I was right... hmm... it was a girl..."

"Sir.." before he could continue he was cut off by him

"The client has arrived ill meet you in the office in an hour or so you head back and see if everything is under control.. I don't want any silly mistakes in the presentation..."

"Yes sir"

Few days went by and he didn't understand how was it even possible or did they know each other that well... when he walked into the office that day after his business tour with sir he was more than stunned to see her

The girl from the other night busy at the reception desk

What is happening around me!


To be continued...


INDEX

Part # 2

Part # 3



Hay pep,

the above story will have three more parts and it is of adi and pinki

it would complete before monday😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start yaar.. In the beginning i was thinking the guy was maan..ad usual.. Yr stories always come with surprise package.. Can't wait for next part..
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Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

Lovely start yaar.. In the beginning i was thinking the guy was maan..ad usual.. Yr stories always come with surprise package.. Can't wait for next part..

😳
glad u liked it
and the next part is on the way😃


thanks for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aditya- Pinky story! That's great!!
So this Mr.Adi is uncomfortable around girls, leaves late and I am assuming that he is workaholic.
And madam Pinky is foodie. So she is interested in not in the man but in his potato chips. :D
Lovely start.
Would be looking forward to it. :)
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L&U 🥺

WWT 😃
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

L&U 🥺

WWT 😃


Monday😃
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Originally posted by: Commelina


Aditya- Pinky story! That's great!!
So this Mr.Adi is uncomfortable around girls, leaves late and I am assuming that he is workaholic.
And madam Pinky is foodie. So she is interested in not in the man but in his potato chips. :D
Lovely start.
Would be looking forward to it. :)


Glad u liked it!
thanks for reading!😃
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First of all aap dekhke khushi hui :-) hmm adi n pinky first time as main and its quiet interesting and surprising socho geet or maan ko donda aur cute couple adi and pinky mil gaya two thing i liked which was also in ghsp adi's royality and pinky's eating habit haha
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congrats on the new story! superb start! well written! Adi is hard working! they meet! she is more interested in food! Adi n Pinky's love story! looking forward 2 the updates! hope 2 have some Maaneet as well! 😉 update soon

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Adi and Pinky..after Maaneet, this is my fav jodi in GHSP.
A story on these two as leads, and from the viewpoint of Adi is something unique and different..😃

Adi, as the most trusted colleague-cum-friend to Sir..most sincere towards his work..
I liked the way they are for each other, no need to explicitly spell it around when the actions speak more than words.

and the Aditya and Priyanka first meeting as strangers, it was close to characters and reality.
Pinky ki nazar sabse pehle potato chips pe gayi..she might even forget to whom she asked for sharing the food.

Maan Sir to superman hai, for he knows everything that is going around. 😆

I am loving it.



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