Working with Tycoon [Part 3 pg.5]updated

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sree10
I liked it and I like your style very much. Thanks

Thank you so much for reading😃

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: deep002
Awesome update dear

Thanks for reading😊

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Lovely update

Glad you liked it

Thanks for reading😊

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Hmm maan appoint pinky but which irritate him that they share good bonding may be adi jealous mera boss sirf mera hai haha but sad to see maan became formal with adi that man truely respect and care for him oops pinky has a smart mouth thnx 4 update

Pinky is smart lets see how she helps the situation😉

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
Maan is so mysterious yaar n willing to do anything fr the ppl he love... Adi hurt unintentionally trying to help him... Love to see geet soon.. M

Geet hmm i don't think you would see her soon😕

Let's see pinky in action for a while😉

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Junglebee
simply amazing
loved it-

Glad you liked it

Thanks for reading😊

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Lovely story 👍🏼

Waiting for geet's entry

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

loved the way Adi's emotions have come in the update.
he was already annoyed the way her appointment was done..and the reason to dislike her increased even more, when she like a storm came and disrupted the bond he shared with Sir..
though it was not actually her and he also knew that, but could not help to link everything to her..
Pinky is smart enough to word it.

howsoever they fight now, one thing is common that they both noticed Maan Sir is isolating himself away from everything..what's the reason? Geet?

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -padmarao-
Lovely story 👍🏼
Waiting for geet's entry

Geets entry!😲

umm ok😕

thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
loved the way Adi's emotions have come in the update.
he was already annoyed the way her appointment was done..and the reason to dislike her increased even more, when she like a storm came and disrupted the bond he shared with Sir..
though it was not actually her and he also knew that, but could not help to link everything to her..
Pinky is smart enough to word it.

howsoever they fight now, one thing is common that they both noticed Maan Sir is isolating himself away from everything..what's the reason? Geet?

Its not Adi if he put up a fight with someone for long hai na😉

and as far as his Sir is concerned its altogether a different story and someone else to narrate it ... defiantly not adi 😆

Glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading!😊