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Posted: 7 years ago

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read all parts today again

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so hilarious when Maan make himself laughing in front Meera and Yash

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Interesting...

Maan helping geet...

Geet helped him treat dadi

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Amazing updates

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Lovely chapter

Maan doing everything for Geet's treatment
and it was nice to see how she helped him with Daadima
sorry for been extra late

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Part 14

After settling dadi in his bed maan went to his room followed by geet,geet looked at maan who was walking ahead without bothering about her,when he landed himself on bed her patience gaveup

Geet:maan

Maan who was pretending just smirked:haan geet

Geet:aap bhul gaye toh yaad dhilavon mein bhi hoon yeha

Maan :geet muje neend aarahi hai

Geet:muje bhi..aur mein soungi kaha

Maan:kya tum sothi bhi ho

Geet:maan yeh kya sawal hai,ofcouse mein soungi

Maan :nahi geet tumhe toh jungle mein ghumne khi aadath hai na,remember maine doh baar tumhe beech rath koh jungle mein dheyka toh muje laga tum aaj bhi wahi javogi apni walk par aur subah wapas avogi..

Geet :ji nahi,tab khi bath alag thi,tab mein akeli thi ,abh muje kahi nahi jana aapko chod kar

Maan :accha muje chod kar nahi javogi,kyun!!?

Geet:kyun ka kya mathlab hai,sirf aap hi hai muje dhek sakthey hai,toh mein kaha jao

Maan :aur jab tum teek hojavogi muje chod kar chalijavogi kya geet!!?

Geet looked at him surprised at his words but his eyes were so intense which carried a strange emotion for her,maan took a step towards her and raised his hand slowly to touch her cheek,but geet voice brought him back

Geet :kya hua maan

Maan :geet tum yeha so jao ,mein couch par so jaonga

Geet nodded still looking at him confused,while maan cursed himself for loosing his control on his feelings,she did occupied his mind with her mystery from few days ,and now his heart too was in her control,he knew he felt something for her,but he couldn't risk his feelings now,not when she is in trouble,mayb he can come clean with his feelings once she was normal .still thinking about geet maan too dozed off

Next morning when maan wokeup he didn't see geet in bed panick took over him for a moment, but he relaxed seeing her enjoying herself ,she seated on a table palced before sofa folding her legs and enjoing the morning with a beautiful smile,

Maan :good morning

He wished taking seat opposite to her on the sofa,geet just smiled at him,they both were disturbed by a knock ,nakul entered with maan black coffee ,he was about to place the tray on table ,when maan stopped him starteling him

Maan :nakul ruko,table par nahi ,tray koh yeha sofe par rako

Nakul looked at maan confused

Nakul:par

Maan :maine kaha na.. he roared

Geet who was looking at confused nakul and a roaring maan coukdnt help herself from giggling

Geet:maan kyun bechare par gussa karrahe ho,mein uth rahi hoon unhe table par rakne doh

Maan :nahi tum beito

Nakul:beiton,kaha beiton maan sir,muje kaam hai,break fast banana hai

Maan looked at nakul :tum yeha rak kar jao

Geet laughed out making maan red,while poor nakul confused seeing his maan sir,

Nakul:par abhi toh aap ne kaha beito,aur abh bol rahe hai jao,mein beiton ya Javon

Geet was still laughing looking at both maan and nakul making him irk,maan shouted

Maan :chup

Nakul:maan baba

Maan :nakul chup,aur jao yeha se,aur tum he said turning towards geet aur hasna band karo

Nakul:par maine kab..

Maan didn't even let him complete and roared nakul,poor nakul ran out of room ,dadi who heared maan shout saw a scared nakul running out of room mumbling,maan sir pagal hogaye hai,dadi nodded her head with everyday drama

Inside room geet was still laughing at maan ,he gave alook to her and went in washroom to get ready for his day,even after coming out refreshing maan ignored geet and went to select his dress ,geet who was looking at maan pouted seeing him and went behind him.when he took his dress geet gave her input

Geet :nahi maan yeh wali nahi white pehno ,aap par bohoth accha lagega

All his anger flew away hearing her words still he maintained his straight face,but he did took her choice of clothes making geet grin

Geet :maan uss khey sath yeh tie accha jayega and yeh watch,she pointed at the particular things in his collection and he took those without any word making her frown...

Geet:maan

Still he didn't look at her but inside he was grinning seeing her efforts making him cool .

Geet:maan sorry

Geet:maan sorry maan jao na

She pleaded making puppy face,finally maan gave in

Maan :teek hai geet maaf kiya,par ek shart hai

Geet:kya

Maan :aaj khi tarah humesha tum mera kapde select karoge

Geet:bas itnisi bath manzor

Maan :teek hai chaloh chalthey hai

Geet:kaha

Maan :office geet,muje office jana hai aur tum yeh akya karogi chalo,meri ek important meeting hai ,dher horahi hai chaloh jaldo

Geet too noded and followed him,when dadi saw maan was rushing outside,she was about to remind him of breakfast

Geet:maan breakfast toh kariye

Maan :nahi mein late hojaonga

Dadi looked ta him confused while looked nakul looking scared

Geet:maan khali peth bahar nahi jathey,aap ne coffee bhi nahi liya subah

Maan :nahi time nahi hai,mera important meeting hai bola than a maine..

Maan replied looking at his mobile,making not only geet,but dadi too frown at his words

Geet:maan ,maine kaha na bas doh minute lage ga kha lijiye

Maan finally gave up:tum nahi manogi

He took his seat and was about to start when his eyes landed on dadi who was looking at him worried and at nakul who looked at him scared,he raised his eyebrown in question,while finally looking at a giggling geet verything made sense...dadi thought he was talking to himself and she was concered for her ,while nakul was sure maan had gone mad.maan cleared his throat

Maan :kya hua dadi

Dadi:maan aap teek hai

Maan:haan dadi,mein bilcul teek hoon aap bf kijiye

In recorded time maan finished his breakfast and left for office leaving a worried dadi behind.maan choose to drive himself,he couldn't risk with driver when geet was with him,there were only two persons now who thinks he was mad,he couldn't risk to add more to the list,he saw geet who seated beside him and was glum,he didn't like her dull face ,few moments before she was smiling at him but now she seems in thoughts,he didn't knew what bothered her but he wants her to b safe free of what ever is eating her with in,he owed to protect her with his life,he talked with doctor again who assured him they will give her best treatment possible ,and after the surgery she will b normal but the question is the surgery itself is risky,she was in coma from months,and operating coma patient is always a bit risky,when doctor said this words he almost threatened doctor to save her.

Maan :kya hua geet

Geet:maan,muje lagtha hai muje yeha se jana chahiye..

Maan :what!!??

Edited by SANJANA9167 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
hi dear, just finished reading from start, its really a super concept... first maan is ghost and geet helped him, now geet is more or less like ghost and maan is helping her...

i love maan being ghost part soo much.. so maan getting his past as dream but he doesn't know why

do geet know her past? and she dint see maan in past so how she will recognise him now if she remember her past?

geet helping maan with medicine for dadi nice.. do this birth also have arnav sameera and dev? maan already feeling for geet... its so good.

i guess i know from where u got inspiration for this ff... am really enjoying it... along with suspense and comedy.
Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update Maan talking to geet but dadi and Nakul thinking he is talking to himself and has gone mad hehe...Maan has developed feelings for her and waiting for her to be normal and here geet is talking about going away which shocked Maan...thnx for pm update soon...

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