Mg do kinare ya humrahi ..last update,on page 85/27nov - Page 40

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Posted: 7 years ago
Eagerly waiting on next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please try and update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Please try and update




app log muje fasate ho yaar


u want this n kwahisfan want wo jo adhoori bolo


mahi kya kare
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Posted: 7 years ago
part 21


Geet really don't want to trouble maan so she say ...its will take time Khurana apko pareshani hogi ...but maan cut her and called driver with another car ...In car only Vicky is talking and maaneet plying roll of lessoned ...maan don't know why but he want to spend time with them or geet till his mind not accepting the face that his heart start to lose for miss geet handa . or may be her support making heal his wound ...and pain which create on his heart by sudden deparchar of DEV ...

After 20 min they stop near Khurana Hospital ...Vicky run inside and come back with his luggage. Car start to run to HV ..where Mohinder waiting for them ... Triro reach there ..Maan ask for bye .

Mohinder - kuch der dehare jae to acha lagata muje betaji .

Maan eyes start to fill with Mohinder soften word ...maan somehow control his emotions and nodded in yes ...

All settle in living room Mohinder informed servant for coffee ..

Mohinder - maan beta office kab se ja rahe ho app...maan open mouth to reply but Vicky get called he excused himself and went to outside to took call.

Maan - bas ajj kal main ..

Mohinder took maan hand in his hand and say softly kal hi joined kar lo betaji ...work help u to keep memory away from you ...

Maan with shock look to Mohinder like how could he read his mind ...he mummer papaji ...

Mohinder - we face this all beta maan we face this ...

Maan once look to geet whom face turn hard like stone maan want erased that pain but before he say anything geet went away from them she went to outside ..

Ek baar fhir I hurt her Mohinder mummer ...

Maan say softly don't worry wo thik ho jaayyegi papaji ..

Mohinder - I am waiting form last more that 20 year that she come out from her shell her pain her hurt ...

Maan - main baat karke dekh leta hu papaji ...wiase hum log abhi nikalte hai we will meet in office TOM ...a soft smile appear on Mohinder face ...he press maan palm firmly and say that's like my boy ..

Maan come out for looking geet ...there she seat near water fountain her gaze on moon like she searching something in it ...

Maan come near her and say ...ghar chale miss handa ...dont know why but maan so much want to call geet her with her name ..but he stop himself .

Geet give confused look ...

Maan KM mian ...

Geet nodded ...and start took step to car ...

Maan - don't u want to say bye to papa...

Geet give hard look to maan ...main kya hamesha ke liye ja rahi hu ...

Maan take back with her rude ans ...he shut himself and took step to car side ...

Geet closed her eyes in frustration she heard him ..without reason ...she come and settle in car ...

Maan hard face showing that her word hurt him ...

Geet - I am sorry Khurana wo main ...kuch cheeze hai jo main face nahi karna chahati ...jo muje sirf dard deti hai ...

Maan get that she is still holding that pain which make her hard like this ...maan nodded

Geet dadi must be waiting for us ...

Maan heart want to spend more time with her he once watch time and say do u want to meet my some friend its help us to change our mood if you are comfortable .thou geet want to say no but maan face make her stop and she nodded in yes ...

A soft smile touch to maan lips ...he play radio there the song is running ...

Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori

Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori

Sufi iska rang haaye

His heart smile on songs but poor soul away from realization that his heart start to fall for this robot Handa ...

Ismein jo tera khwaab piroya

Ismein jo tera khwaab piroya

Neendein bani patang

Dil bharta nahi

Aankhein rajjti nahi

Dil bharta nahi

Aankhen rajjti nahi

Chaahe kitna bhi dekhti jaaun

Waqt jaaye main rok na paaun

Maan eyes went to side mirror where he can see the image of geet ...geet yes give happiness to him ...maan took car to very special place ...

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja sohneya

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja...

Ha...

Haaye din tere bin ab jee na paaye

Din tere bin ab jee na paaye

Saans na leti raat

Ishq kare tere honthon se

Ishq kare mere honthon se

Bas ik teri baat

Teri doori na sahun

Door khud se rahun

Teri doori na sahun

Door khud se rahun

Tere pehlu mein hi reh jaaun

Tu hi samjhan jo main chaahun

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja sohneya

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja...

O...

Nahiyo lagna, nahiyo lagna

Tere bin dil mera (x4)

Dil minnate kare

Na tu ja na pare

Dil minnate kare

Na tu ja na pare

Tere jaane se jee na paaun

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja sohneya

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja..

Maan stop near orphan and geet eyes winded in shock yes this is place where she saw that muddy man palying with children ...her mood change to happy from sad .

Both come out ...till they entered inside watchman informed about his arrival ..and within few min so many every aged children come outside thou they want to go to maan side but all stop with geet ...

Maan get that all stop because of geet now maan come to teasing mood ...kya why u all stop ...

Thodi darvani hai wo maan pointed to geet ..but don't worry app logo ko kha nahi jaayegi . I took experience she only look like Robot ...all giggle on maan word and poor geet mouth open in Perfect O shape ...geet found a naughtiness after so many days on maan face which brought soft smile on her face. Which is way to clever brain don't get why her heart is clam with maan happiness

Geet make face like so what I am like this ...

All children run to maan side he come there after so many days .they asking so many questions a innocent questions ...

Geet feel really good after meeting with maan special friends .. both souls which are poll a part like other parts of kinare ...but enjoying each other happiness ...they are away of awareness that their heart start to get bounded with each other.

Precap -

Meera seated on bench of garden one middle age lady come to her and ask about her ...meera found that lady is good and say about her ...two pair of eyes wtching this from away and that person getting negative vibe form that lady ...

That lady give a cholate to meera and meera eat that and in few min ...meera lost her hosh ...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update little sad mohindar support maan he knows what pain he is going through he just wish geet would come out of her pain maan took geet to orphanage geet for the first time after Dev departure could see happiness on maan face he even teased geet both had fun with kids precap seems dangerous as someone gonna kidnap Meera
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Posted: 7 years ago
From chapters sixteen to twenty one fantastic updates dear. But you have not cleared our doubts about dev leaving soon suddenly. I think in all this commotion maaneet will become one. And where is maan n Dev's little sister? Maaneet have jelled up so we with each other's families. I love how Meera is being looked after by everyone. Is Vicky falling for her?
Why have you separated dev and Meera girl? Maan plays with kids but is such a bhondu Lal himself. Tonto Chico. I seriously love this naive maan.

Geet is a hard hearted robot. Mohinder is a very good cool and understanding adult. I like his character. But would still advise you to change the person. I mean, that photo in the character sketch.

So now Meera has been harmed by that lady! Who is she? Are these the same people who kidnapped dev? I cannot help feeling that dev is alive somewhere.

Please update soon so we can know the secret. Continue writing and PLEASE READ MY WORKS, LADDOO.
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 da pm!

emotional update!

Mohinder advises Maan! Maan tells Geet to speak to her dad! Geet is rude! Maan upset! Maan is falling 4 Geet!

he takes her to the orphanage! love the bond btwn Maan and the kids!

Geet enjoys her time there!



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Posted: 7 years ago
interesting precap! hope nothing happens to Meera's baby!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan




app log muje fasate ho yaar


u want this n kwahisfan want wo jo adhoori bolo


mahi kya kare


Update both stories
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Posted: 7 years ago
I feel so sad about Mohinder he is a father and all he can do is watch his daughter in pain
watch her just living her life as if she is doing some duty
the little moment between Mohinder and Maan was so beautiful it held so much warmth
Geet still gets so angry and she is filled with such deep pain that it has become part of her persona now
Maan taking Geet to the orphanage that was lovely as both feel happy when the other is in happiness
yes it will take both a long time to realize this

Precap
who is the elder lady with Meera and what is her intentions

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