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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Chapter 3

Maan was telling his sibling, bauji and buaji.

Flashbacks
Mama why are you dressed like it's hot while it's raining asked Ansh. Ansh you such a tubelight. Oh God why do you hate me so much to make Ansh my twin said Palak has she face palmed herself. Shut up i wasn't talking to you humpty dumpty said Ansh.
Monkey.
Gorilla.
Pig.
Turkey ass.
Ansh language Geet scold Ansh. Sorry ma it's just that your daughter is annoying. She's a plain in the ass. Ansh!!! Geet exclaimed and Maan chuckled a little. Well you see the reason ma is dressed like this is because she want charm papa, even a blind person can see that said Palak. Enough you to go to bed now said Geet totally embarrassed. No ma we are not sleepy said Ansh. Your ma is right go to bed has i have to go back to my hotel said Maan. Papa don't be such a tubelight. It not safe for you to return back to your hotel now because it's raining cats and dogs outside. Hmm now i know why Ansh is such a tubelight it's because he gets his stupidity from papa said Palak in a duh tone and Geet burst out laughing. Oh good Palak you are just like your mother with a big mouth said Maan. No papa my my mouth it's not big said Palak pouting. Papa means you talk too much dumdum. Now who is a tubelight said Ansh with a smug and Maan chuckled.
Shut up you idiot snapped Palak. Okay enough you two. Now of to bed you two said Maan. Hmm Palak didi do you see what am seeing said Ansh. Yeah bhai i see what you are getting at and you are right. Mama and papa want us to go to bed so they can play mummy and daddy said Palak laughing along with Ansh. Ansh and palak left their parents embarrassed and in an awkward silence.

Maan want Palak said it's totally nonsense. I didn't know you were coming said Geet. Geet just relax said Maan smiling sweetly at Geet and Geet smiled in return. A beautiful tall slim elderly lady walked in the house all drenched from the rain. Ma you should have called me to came and get you. Geet you know how i hate that motor bike of yours. Hello beta i hope she has being a good host to you. Am Radha said Radha. Hello aunty nice meet you and am Maan Ansh and Palaks father. Well let me change before i get sick. I always catch a cold easily said Radha has she excused herself.

Sorry for the spelling error mistakes i will correct them soon hopeful.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Chapter 4

Maan was just lying in his bed missing his two beautiful babies. He decided to call Geet and check on the kids.

Phone call (Conversation)
Hello answered Geet after 5 rings. Hi Geet it's me. I just called to check on the kids. How are they and Radha aunty. Ooh they are fine. They are just missing you said Geet hurt that Maan didn't asked how is she. Geet are you okay. Yah am fine why are you asking. You seem a bit down. Oh am fine i just have headache that all because of your son and daughter. What did they do. I was called at school again. Oh he played pranks again. Yah he sure did and after all he is your son.

Flashback about Ansh.

Ansh poured Radha ma massaging oil of the floor and placed a duster on the top of the door has a decayed. When the teacher opened the door the duster fell on the floor. Who did this asked the annoyed teacher and noone said anything so he walked in the class room and he tripped. Hahahahaha i knew you will fall for that. I used the duster has a decoyed hahahahaha said Ansh. Ansh go sit down. The teacher started teaching. Teacher it already after school said Ansh. Oh i didn't notice said the teacher living the class. Hahahahaha he fell for that to said Ansh fixing the watch to correct time. Ansh follow me to the principle office now.
End of Ansh flashbacks.

Palak flashbacks.
Mama please can i have R200,00. Why do you want R200,00. I want buy make-up. Palak you are 6 years old you don't need make-up sweety. I do need make-up mama. Why because every girl in my school use make-up. But Palak you are not every girl. You are you and you are special there way you are. Just the way you are even Bruno Marss said so sweety. I knew you wouldn't understand. Help me understand then. If i use make-up i will look beautiful and when GOT7 to our school to perform Mark Tuan will marry. Palak Mark Tuan is 23 and you're 6.
So.
So.
Yah so mama.
He is 17 years older than you. Age it's just a number said Palak rolling her eyes.
End of Palaks flashbacks.

Geet's flashbacks.
Ansh did you bath the dog that your papa bought you and Palak. Why Palak doesn't bath it said Ansh playing King of fighters 98 in PC2/PS2. Because she bathed the dog yerstaday and today it's your day. Hmm said Ansh picking up the ball throwing it into the pool and the dog jumped into the pool to Fetch the ball. There i have bathed the dog and please don't step on my toes ma said Ansh. Argh!!! This two kids will be the death of me thought Geet.
End of Geet's flashbacks.
Sorry for the spelling grammar mistakes guys i will correct them soon hopefully so please try to enjoy the update with my flaws

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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Madhu..

<font color="#CC00FF">Superb parts!!
I always longed to see GurTi in PV too😆
Didn't see PV too much..as can't see GurTi with smbody else
You are fulfilling my wish by giving PV version of Maaneet..thank you soo much for that!!
Fabulous update!!
Maan's mom and Arpita planned such things and now Maaneet r separated :(
Aww...Maaneet having twins😃
Finally Maan took a strong decision👍🏼
Plzz continue soon...

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thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Madhu..

<font color="#CC00FF">Your DP is cute😃
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thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@ part 3
Nyc update
Loved it!!
Ansh and palak are such a mischievous kids!!
Loved their cute bickerings
Both the kids are hell bent in embarrassing their parents!!
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
@part 4
Lovely update
Loved it!!
Flashbacks are really cute
Ansh and palak are such a naughty kids
Ansh played prank on teacher and came under principal's notification for pulling prank on a teacher
Palak wants to buy make up kit just to marry mark!! Lol!!
Geet asked ansh to give bath to their dog!! Ansh really out smarted geet with his cute way of making dog bath in the pool
😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Thank you for both the updates!!

Pls try to send pm when ever you update ur stories
Will be waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: anu5

@ part 3

Nyc update
Loved it!!
Ansh and palak are such a mischievous kids!!
Loved their cute bickerings
Both the kids are hell bent in embarrassing their parents!!
😊

hmm yes they are mischievous kids. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
maan telling his family about kids
he missed them n called geet
the kids n their pranks
lolz..i loved their cute fights
nice parts
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

@part 4

Lovely update
Loved it!!
Flashbacks are really cute
Ansh and palak are such a naughty kids
Ansh played prank on teacher and came under principal's notification for pulling prank on a teacher
Palak wants to buy make up kit just to marry mark!! Lol!!
Geet asked ansh to give bath to their dog!! Ansh really out smarted geet with his cute way of making dog bath in the pool
😊

thank you. He is a smart kids.

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