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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

I'm glad that Gurmaan spoke to her family and even more glad that they all believed her but what has just happened why did her brother suddenly come home why is Armaan there is it because though her family believed her but also wanted to hear Armaan's side or did they all just pretend
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Part 2

I'm glad that Gurmaan spoke to her family and even more glad that they all believed her but what has just happened why did her brother suddenly come home why is Armaan there is it because though her family believed her but also wanted to hear Armaan's side or did they all just pretend


No dear. Gumaan's family love both kids equally. In case you din't notice their names carefully.

Armaan means an ambition, a desire. But gumaan means the honor, the pride of the family.

Gumaan's name holds more weight and importance. And about armaan being home, i'll only say this much, family members weren't aware of his plans.

You'll understand the whole plot in the next update. I promise, the next part will keep you glued to your seat.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes yaar... Reading your story and loving it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Wow this story is realistic and something that brings great awareness

Gurmaan daughter of Maan and Geet loved dearly by her parents and grandparents however this teenager decides to study away from home staying in a hostel to experience a different life but what she never expected was her very own brother selling her out to his friends for the sake of friendship

Gurmaan overhears her brother Armaan talking with his friends the manner in which his friends talk about his sister the lustful way where a brother is always the one to put a dead end to such devious talks here Armaan himself suggest to video his sister's naked self so his friends can have a full view at leasure

Gurmaan felt betrayed she felt cheated of not been protected by her very own sibling she started withdawing herself into a shell as fear of her diginty and self respect would be out in the open for all to see against her will

for me its the same like forcing yourself on someone

Armaan comes home and hugs his sister as if there is no guilt in what he has done

Will there be a confrontation between the family and Armaan about his wrong doings to his sister will the family still stand firm with Gurmaan or will they side with Armaan

I'll wait for the next chapters that will reveal the entire truth
Edited by taahir004 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is a very sensitive topic and yes it is truth of the society where relations are made a mockery by own relatives and it is very very hard for a girl when ur own brother has so much disgusting feelings towards her...

from the clues in the story I assume Armaan as Geet's child from before she married to Maan...so it means Armaan and Gumaan are half-siblings...Gumaan consider him as her brother but may be Armaan must have known that she is not his real sister so he don't have such strong feelings as brother towards her that is why he can stoop so low...

I am very curious to read whether he is really a culprit or he is framed by his friends to create misunderstandings between him and family...or if he is a culprit then how Maan and Geet will handle him...in this age children easily get distracted by bad company so it is very important to handle them carefully so that they don't get spoiled further and can understand that they did wrong...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here comes part 3 plz read and comment yaar, please.


Part Three




Gumaan just removed armaan's arms from her body. She moved back, as if trying to protect herself against the dirty feeling his touch was giving her.
As she went back inside, armaan followed his sister, his smile a bit faded due to her reaction.


Dadaji noticed Armaan and gumaan's expressions. Adi and Pinky too weren't told about this latest shocking incident. Deciding to sort out matters carefully, he cleared his throat and Dadi ma got up followed by maaneet. They started going upstairs when coming forward, the shameless lad bent down to touch Dada-Dadi's feet. "Khush Raho!" Both just gave him a curt answer and went away with gumaan. Maan and geet decided to go out with adi and pinky.


Arpit got up to greet Armaan when he remembered Gumaan's expressions a little while ago. She din't seem too happy to see her brother. Otherwise, she would hug him with a lot of noise. Sensing that something was amiss, arpit simply welcomed armaan with, "Long time no see, buddy!" Then he too followed everyone to the second floor.


"Lagta hai sab busy hain, koi nahi baad mei dekh loonga apni "Pyaari" si behen ko." Smiling with these evil thoughts, armaan went to his room for some rest.


Inside Dadaji's room:

"Bade dadaji, ab to woh aa gaya. Ab main kya karungi? Kya hoga mera is tarah se?" Gumaan asked Dadaji with tearful eyes. Her worst fear was standing right in front of her. Perhaps there was no way for her escape now.


"Don't worry puttar. I am sure hum logo ke hote wo besharam ladka aap ka baal bhi baanka nahi kar sakega. Hum usko apke paas aane hi nahi denge." Dadi ma assured her baby while cuddling her. Dadaji too cradled his doll in his arms as she leaned on their shoulders for support.


"Any problem folks? Aap sab yaha kyu aa gaye? Everything is fine, I hope!" Arpit was standing near the door. Beckoning him inside, Dadaji asked him to sit down. Gumaan handed him the green tea and sat down upon the warm hearth-rug. The cold afternoon was freezing and coffee was helpful for warming up.



"Kya baat hai chhotu? Uncle-aunty, Dadaji-Dadiji, yaha tak tum ne bhi Armaan se theek se baat nahi ki. Kya kar diya usne? Has he hurt or offended you in any way?" Arpit had noticed the sadness in Gumaan's eyes and wanted to help his lil' sister if she had any problem.


For a moment Gumaan hesitated and looked at Dada-Dadi for support. As if on the cue, Dadi ma began by saying,"Hum aap ko kya bataye bete! Aaj humei wo sach pata chala hai, jisne humari masoom beti ki duniya hi badal di hai. Humara apna khoon hi, apne rishto se bewafa ho chala hai. Sab kuch khatam ho gaya hai beta." She sighed in defeat as Dadaji gripped her shoulders in a light and comfortable hold, trying to soothe his love.



After listening to the entire story, Arpit couldn't understand how to react. He was utterly disgusted to think his friend could stoop so low. Tears were again running down innocent Gumaan's cheeks. Looking at his sister, Arpit sighed in a determined way and wiping her tears, lowered himself upon the adjacent beanbag. Holding gumaan's little hands carefully he said, "Chhotu, agar humara koi bhi apna, humara bharosa tod de, humari bhavna ki kadar na kare, to uska sirf ek hi jawab hai. Usko uske gunaah ki kadi se kadi saza dilwao. Teach them such a bitter lesson that they remember never to make relations a mockery ever again."



Gumaan realized that he was right. Then they exited the room and went to Armaan's room. Approaching the closed door, they lowered themselves and gluing their ears to the door, listened carefully. Armaan was talking to Rony just then. The cell was on the speaker mode.



"Lekin yaar I wanted to enjoy soon. Ab tu bolta hai ki kal tak wait karni padegi. You know it dude, maine jab se Gumaan ko uss x-rated position mei dekha hai, I can't control myself. What a pity uss time par wo hostel se chali gayi. Warna mai to raat ko hi usko kidnap karwa leta."


"Don't worry my friend! Tum dono zaroor Gumaan ko enjoy kar sakte ho. Par location hostel ki jagah wo purana hillside cottage hoga. And the theme is your B'day party. Kal raat ko theek 9 baje. And mai khud meri pyari si behen ko lekar aaunga, to kisi ko shaq nahi hoga. Bas tu video camera ready rakhna." Armaan shamelessly advised his friend.



"But why video cam? Ye to secret affair hoga right?" Rony was puzzled as to why Armaan wanted a recording. Because you duffer, wo video main apne liye rakhunga. It is obvious ki Gumaan hum teeno ki complaint karne ki koshish karegi. Uss waqt wo video usko khamosh karne ke kaam aayega. Jab main uska video family members ko dikhane ki dhamki dunga, wo apne aap darr ke chup reh legi. This way, tum log usko jitna chaho, enjoy kar sakte ho. She'll be all yours then." Armaan finished gleefully.



Anger was visible on every face as the group withdrew and went to the study. Now their doubts were confirmed. Armaan had indeed planned to destroy his sister completely.



On the other side, Maan and Adi met up with the C.I.D chief. Explaining the entire scenario, they sought his help. The chief was the family friend of khuranas and ever ready to extend his help. Quickly forming a plan, he gathered everyone in the mansion inside Dadaji's study. Gumaan was there too, trembling with fear. She was really pale and looking weak, perhaps her mind was unable to bear such a big jolt.



Narrating the whole plan to the family members, the commissioner took Gumaan aside and assured her full safety and co-operation. Feeling safe and secure at last, the little girl agreed with a twinkle in her eyes. Then they waited for Armaan to return, as the commissioner had left by afternoon to ready the whole situation favorably.



At lunch time:


Armaan returned and sat with everyone. Adi and family were eating with everyone and staying on for a week. It was to provide support for Gumaan. Armaan noticed his sister wasn't sparing him a single look. She sat as far away from him as possible. Even when he asked her to pass any dish, she would just ask the servants to pass on the bowls. Not once did she raise her head to look at him. Thinking she was not interested, he finished and went outside to catch up with her deadly nemesis.



But now Gumaan was determined to punish her wrongdoer. Armaan had insulted their relation this time, and wasn't going to get away with it. She was ready to show him his rightful place. The whole family was with her and she wasn't scared a bit now. Sighing confidently she turned to her parents and leaned on their shoulders, awaiting the expected moments.



People, here's part three. Please like it and comment. I need to complete this one quickly and begin my new story. So please give me good and looong comments.





Edited by turbulence - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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How disgusting can a person be... Guman has the support of her gamily and she just needs to play along to get her so called bro and friends behind bars!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Long back u updated dear.thanks for update..oh no moron back to km .gurman scared and disgusting his lustful eyes looking in her body. Elders assured they will never near him with her. Arpit sensed something why everyone less response to armaan..after knowing arman evil things about gurmaan.he felt bad for little sis.arman such cheap, monster charcter.he spoke her own sis about his friend.how shamless person yaar..if iam in gurmaan place..i surely kill him with my hand or if it no possible I mixed poison in his food. He want enjoy his sis with his friend.how disgusting and cruel thought..even he want blackmail to record everything in camera..khurana talk with commissioner and tried plaaned against armaan..he deserve more punishment ..

Thanks for pm and continue soon dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shocking update armaan came back and gumaan was hell scared of him but armaan had no clue that his sister told his deadly secret whole family hated him maan went to take help of commissioner arpit was confused why armaan was treated coldly but when dadi told him truth he supported gumaan all heard armaan disgusting plan to ruin his own sister by making her go to his friends party where his own friends will ruin her gumaan avoiding armaan who is all ready to implement his disgusting plan whereas maan has his own plan to save his daughter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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shocking update! Armaan is disgusting! Feeling 4 Gurnaam! update soon

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