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Teaser 1


maan tu kha hai adi cried in fear
He fish out his cell phone and Dial maan number
Other side maan who was giving order to his sect about some work he see his mobile vibrate because of silence mode it didn't ring he finished his work said to his sect to move then he picked his phone seeing adi called " bhag gye teacher gya tu maan " he thought and received call before he speaks any thing adi blast at him
Adi Abey ghadey itna time lagta hai phone received karney mein he yelled maan move his phone far from his ears but still heard Adi voice
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teaser 2
They were fighting with each other ,when his hand hited something all of sudden he felt chill water over him making him shivered down he yelled pari !!!!! Who hided from them under the table ""ohh no sab garbar ho gye ""pari speak to herself biting her nails with cute expression hearing his angry voice , she slowly move out from her hiding place without making any sounds she walk to other side when her eyes went on Dadi who looked at her with stern face Dadi she sheepliy said but Dadi didn't change her posture
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

amazing teasers! shall wait



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Both Teasers are Awesome
I'll be waiting for the chapter
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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

Ignored any kind of mistakes fingers crossed


Part 25


Before Adi tell her about geet being her teacher Pari went to meet geet ,maan tu kha hai adi cried in fear of his life
He fish out his cell phone and Dial maan number
Other side maan who was giving order to his sect about some work he see his mobile vibrate because of silence mode it didn't ring he finished his work said to his sect to move then he picked his phone seeing adi called
" bhag gye teacher gya tu maan " he thought and received call before he speaks any thing adi blast at him
Adi Abey ghadey itna time lagta hai phone received karney mein he yelled maan move his phone far from his ears but still heard Adi voice

Adi who were yelling when didn't get reply say Hello ??? Maan tu hai Maan sun raha hoo bol he replies calmly

Adi came here as Soon as possible he demanded

Maan pagal hai Kiya office mein meeting hai Nahi asakta bath Kiya hai he knew the matter but still choose to ask

Adi sun yeh new teacher he was cut by maan

Maan I know bhag gye hai he said with grinned

Adi Huff baap beti suntey q nahi hai he mummer inside
Maan Kiya bol raha hai

Adi yeh k pray Kar k teacher na bhagey nahi toh pari aur Dadi dono tujhe nahi chodey gee he replied and made him confused

Maan teacher ko pari bhaga rahi hai he asked

Adi new teacher Jo hai woh Kon hai yeh Teri soch hai beta tum baap beti ko sawa sherni mil hai jaldi AA nahi toh Meri toh band baje g tujhe bhi nahi chodey gi he threatens him

Maan yeh Kon hai Jo Meri band Baja dey he thinks in nervous a bit adi cut called

Maan ja Kar dekho he asked to himself then shove that thought concentrate on his work thinking to go in lunch time

Here in mansion

Pari met with geet hug her tightly Dadi went to bring something for them

Geet Kasey ho AP pari she smiled at her and ask

Pari I am. Fine but angry with you she said with pout making geet look at her

Geet woh q she asked about her angry

Pari AP Mujhe say milna nahi aye she said make her aware about her anger

Geet ohh Kiya hai na beta Dadi strictly told not to came and take rest I got hurt you knew na she explained her

Pari with concerned asked ab Kasey hai AP k wound she asked

Geet ab thek hai aur mein pari say milna bhi agai she said with chukkled

Dadi came with juice and milk give both of them to drink both made faces but drink seeing Dadi glared at them

Pari chaley mein AP ko apna room Dekho pari said in excited

Geet ok

Dadi excuse herself let them enjoy together

Pari took geet to her room show her toys

Geet like her princess room wow really amazing room princess room for princess she ruffles her hair

Pari you like it

Geet no she said pari look at her questioning i love it
Pari smile

Then she show her scrap book , disha pic , yeh mama hai
Geet beautiful hai AP ki mama, toh bilkul AP k jaisey she said pinched her nose

Pari winch Sachi am I look like her she said happily which get noded

Adi poor soul only hiding himself from pari when he saw them happily talking each other he sighed relief went from there thinking everything ok

Geet who was worries about pari reaction ask her slowly about teacher
Geet beta woh apki teacher nahi ayen she thought to know what pari think about teacher

Pari nahi Abhi Tak nahi ayen she said frowned

Geet ohh

Pari hope ayen nahi , she said but Meri planning waste hojai g she said thinking for while making geet ears shot up she understands why Dadi didn't tell her about her being teacher

Planning what planning pari geet ask

Pari grinning at her said in hush tuned we made plans teacher ki bhaganey ka

Geet eyes widen she thanks to God for saving her

Geet we mean she asked to know who helped her

Pari me and dada she takes maan instead of maan because every time he helped her pari forget this Tim maan away from planning

Geet frown to heard his name bachi ko glat chezey sikha rahey hai aney do maan ko she furiously thinks

Pari unknowingly told geet her plans what ever she done geet listen everything calmly

Pari aur woh store room mein ek puppet ko string k sath hang kardiya ab jaisey door open hoga puppet nechey ayen ga teacher dar jeye get she laughed evil think about teacher but don't know her all planned bake fire her only

Geet grin evilly asked AP k dada aj lunch par ayen gey na baby she asked grin inside

Pari noded msk you are gone geet thought

At lunch maan step inside Mansion seeing Dadi sitting there waiting for him

Maan babu bach k he gulped hard

Maan hi Dadi he greet her thinking she must be angry

Dadi hi maan she greetings him normally make him confused why she didn't scolded him yet

Dadi Jaye fresh hojye hum nakul say khete hai lunch ready karney k liye she said with smile

Maan look at her Dadi normal hai he forget what adi told him about teacher

Dadi maan AP khadey q hai Jaye Dadi said loudly bring him back

Maan woh hah. He step up but stopped asked where is pari Dadi

Dadi room Mei. Apni teacher k sath hai she inform hiding her smile know about his shocked

Maan who shocked to know teacher still there went from there
In corridor maan thought how that possible he decided to check by himself

In room geet pari play together laughing on something , maan who was coming towards pari room heard he amusing by pari being so care free with strangers he tip inside to see who is there with pari

He Saw a figure sitting beside pari her back towards maan ,

maan Kon hai yeh he thought but he heard pari winch voice he at once step inside hold her hand tightly how dare you geet who get started by someone holding her hands tightly ouch she cried in pain pari too get shock by maan presence

He looks geet so he loosen his hold , geet glared him for holding her tightly

Maan oh tum yeh Kiya Kare rahi hoo he asked hiding his embarrassment

Geet bhotey bhoon rahi Hoon she replied sarcastically make maan
irritated

Maan tum sidha koi jawab nahi de saktey , mujko Tere jawab dena tumhari hobby hai , he asked irrikly

Nahi am k tree par charna she replied teasenly pretend to be innocent

Maan shut up he said and geet pari both put their fingers on mouth Maan glared them for nutanki

Maan miss hoshiyar por what are you doing here , And pari where is your teacher Dadi told me she is with you then where is she he asked both of them
, pari who forget about teacher look at maan confuse , that when teacher didn't came then why Dadi say to dada she is with me , when geet aunt with me ,pari thought to herself then she looks at geet who were grinning

, pari eyes goes wided to realise that it geet who is with her and Dadi told dada that teacher is with her , than it means geet aunty is .my teacher ohh no she looks geet again with pout making her fool with dadi

Geet winked at her said to maan uff .msk AP itney barey stupid duffer ho yeh nahi pata Tha mujhe ,,

maan glared her for calling him stupid duffer

Geet or nahi toh Kiya when Dadi told you that teacher is with pari then why you ask me about my visit here

Maan geet gol gol bath mat Karo

Uff AP itna bara business chalatey hoo abhi Tak samaj nahi Aya k Mein hi pari k teacher Hoon she disclose her being teacher

Maan what ??? While pari look away with pout

Geet laugh a loud see their faces

Maan ohh toh tabhi pari madam itni khush hai

Pari made face geet look at her giving her side hug she too smile get Happy to know geet her teacher ,

After breaking hug geet look maan frowned point her finger at him

Geet sharam ani chaheye AP ko bachi ko asey chezey sikha rahey ho

Maan who shock to get scolded

Maan kiya sikhya mein nai he too asked same way

Geet yehi teacher ko bhagana

Ohh hello mein todhi sath Diya Tha he said clear dined

Acha yeh planning Jo ki thi bhaganey k pari k sath mil k she said angerly
,
pari who remind about her prank slowly without getting caught run away leaving .maaneet there to fight

Maan confused kon si planning

Geet acha Abhi bhol gye AP , jhoty ab jhot bhi bolna skha do

Maan mein koi jhhot nahi bol raha samjhi he didn't know why he get accusing

They were fighting with each other ,when his hand hited something all of sudden he felt chill water over him making him shivered down , remember his devil daughter

he yelled pari !!!!!

Who hided from them under the table ""ohh no sab garbar ho gye ""pari speak to herself biting her nails with cute expression hearing his angry voice ,

she slowly move out from her hiding place without making any sounds she walk to other side when her eyes went on Dadi who looked at her with stern face Dadi she sheepliy said but Dadi didn't change her posture

Care to explain Dadi ask with serious face

Pari gulped hard and told her what happened inside her room


To be continued

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I didn't check
Sorry for mistake
Edited by maankijann - 7 years ago

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