MYSTIC CONNECTION- Part 54 Page109 - Page 72

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Maan got interested in listening Geet dream and imagining him self venkat
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Nice update..
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So sad.. Sundara died in temple.. those people were do heartless 😡
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Originally posted by: Vaidhumom



Oh ho 😲

I will..

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I will read it for sure as writing an emotional ff is highly challenging and great effort from the writer 👍🏼


@Vaidhumom: Thanks for liking the fic...hope to see you as a regular reader

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Part 51

G-They take out their swords and cuts her throat...with it and throws her on Venkat's helpless hands

Maan gulps finding it hard to breath for few seconds

Maan holds Geet close and buries his face in her hair

Geet looks at Maan with misty eyes

G-What happened to you? Sundara died centuries ago

M-at least Zen and Miara were happy...we'll be happy too... no ones gonna take you away form me

G-They got married but a war happened and Zen asked Miara to flee with all the woman as she was expecting

M-oh Geet...

Maan moans regret filling his voice

G-Hmm?

M-Don't tell me more... not for a while let me be with you for now...we'll have kids...lots of kids...as many kids as we want

Maan says kissing her stomach

Geet chuckles...

G-Yes...but...why are you so eager on kids...kids can wait

Maan kisses his way up to her lips

He looks shaken but not frightened or weird out more like shaken with realization and knowldge

Geet cups his face...

G-What's wrong? Are you ok?

Maan kisses her long and hard until they had to break away for a breath

M- I am not going to let anything...anything take you away...I'll be a coward we'll run away but I am not going to let you go

She chuckles...

G-Run away from what?

M-From war from relatives from anything that wants to break us up

G-Maan...it was just a weird psychic dream...may be its not true even...forget it

Maan looks at her holding her hands in his

M-It isn't just a dream

G-You know...I never saw Tara there in my dreams...if I would have known...I would have...not gone all the way...it was always Sundara-Venkat or Miara-Ze... no third character

Maan frowns at Geet

M- You didn't see Tara?

She shakes her head

M-She was there

G-Where?

M-She was there. She was the father, the soldiers, the war; that's where she was. This time she got me before I could even meet you... but she can't touch us now

She looks at him with her huge eyes

He rubs his nose against her

M-That's what the truth is

Geet smiles

Maan smiles back

M-So how many kids are going to have?

G-Pervert

She pushes his forehead playfully

G-How many do you want?

M-Hey look Venkat didnt get any ok...that guy is long overdue for some of Sundara...so three!

G-Stop it. We are getting 3 if you are the one whose gonna carry them

M-I will if I can...unfortunately all I can do is be your mattress every night...no matter how pregnant you get

Next morning:

Maan ka phone baja

It was his mom asking ki unki flight kitne baje land karegi; to yaad aaya ki ohh aaj to wapas jana hai aur dono pade hue hain

Geet uth gai...sheet wrap karke picking her clothes

Maan bhi uth gaya getting into his clothes

Dono taiyar hue bhgate bhagte

Dono ne bhag ke flight pakdi

Flight mein baithe to saans li ki haan miss nahi hui

Flight mein baithe to Maan ne poocha if Geet is comfortable? Whether she wants anything? Bataya ki itne time tak pohonch jayenge blah blha

Geet nods lost in her thoughts

Maan ne poocha ki what are you thinking about?

G-Nothing...just...can I ask you something...like really honest...and all

M-What do you wanna know?

G-You are all 'Geet Geet' now coz things haven't worked out in past...and if things would have worked out that day...and Tara wouldn't have been the way she was...Geet would not exist...hai naa. I want an honest answer, not something to please me

M-If I had been married to her before I met you...then I wouldn't have been with you today no matter how Tara turned out to be; after I met you and Tara came back...I was getting married to her but frankly it didn't feel real...I wouldn't have been with her

She frowns

G-I don't understand

M-What part you don't understand?

G-You wouldn't have been with her?

M-Coz I met you... I couldn't be with her

She smirks

G-You were getting married to her

M-I know it doesn't make sense with the fact that I was getting married

G-Yes...getting married to her after throwing me out of your life, isn't it?

M-No, it is not like that

G-Then what's it like?

She looks angry...very angry

M-When I say I wouldn't be with her I mean it

G-Sorry I don't catch that...you were mad to get married to get married to a woman with whom you didn't mean to be together?

M-Yes I am mad...I guess...as I am saying getting married to Tara the whole deal was surreal...it was like going through motion of what seemed right by the world ... but it won't right...I can't make you understand..I was marrying her coz I thought.. it made sense.. to do that...but it didn't feel right to do that...yes I was marrying her and if her truth hadn't come out at that time would I have married her?

G-But you didn't have the nerve to do the right thing but you had the nerve to deny me zillion times...even if we got married. You wanted piece of everything..Tara and Geet both...wanted Tara with commitment as she could have left like earlier...but Geet was always there. Thing is you never loved any of us...just wanted them

Geet is looking at him for answer

G-I guess...you don't have any answer

M-It seemed wrong to go back on my word therefore I did not say no to marrying Tara even after that night and what I said to you that night said coz I was drunk coz I really wanted to say that but couldn't say that coz I was already engaged

G-And it was ok to go back on my commitment?

She looks away disgustedly

M-As far as I remember I made no promises. I wasn't in hurry to make promises like I did all those years ago with Tara. I wanted to take my time with you, heal myself first


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Author's note:

This story is so special to my heart as it is so unique and different and also specially as I am a Past life healer so these experiences are part of my healings and all...so adding a piece of my life here

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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the pm!

superb update! wonderfully written!

Maan explains why he was marrying Tara!

Geet upset!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update
geet told every dream those she see
geet still not convince by answer of maan n very much angry on him
maan don't know how make geet understand his stand with whatever happening with them
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanku for the pm
Indeed its a special ff
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan understand her dreams n also finds out d meanings n links...

Conversation between two is so mature n much needed...
Will geet try to grab wat maan trying to explain.

They both r right in their own place


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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..

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