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Posted: 9 years ago
emotional update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan didn't even question Tara once just happy that she wants him back but what he did the very same that Tara did to him he did to Geet
so now he and Tara will marry and poor Geet once again alone to live her life
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm. i think maan is going to get second time heart break due to tara as do not able to see changes in the behaviour of tara. may be in past she was attaracted towards maan but this time her proposal is clearly a way for making her future secure. in all this poor soul geet is getting punished. waiting for more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
painful update
felling bad for geet maan what you have done to poor soul
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Saddy update poor geet was shattered ad maan abandoned her for Tara she did so much for him but maan just used and left her he isn't realizing what he did to her geet locked herself trying to get away but maan is just lost in wooing Tara who I think is pretending Tara is so selfish she is just thinking abt herself at least maans conscious is trying to make him realize how he used geet and left her
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan went back to Tara like Geet never existed.

Can someone be any more selfish than Maan and Tara?! They are back together, getting married not caring about Geet even once, what she must be going through seeing them like this. Well, somewhere Geet is to be blamed too, she kind of knew what she was getting herself into, but still.

Tara has changed a lot from what Maan knew about her, I just hope Maan is jilted again, the sadist in me wants him to suffer for what he did to Geet. At least his conscience is poking him, Tara is absolutely beyond redemption.

Waiting to know what turn the story takes, continue soon please.

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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update loved it ...

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Posted: 8 years ago

PART 24

So you are saying you didn't use her? Used her for your own selfish means, slept with her and left her. You were devastated when Tara left you and you did same to Geet. Take revenge from the innocent girl, huh. Geet...a girl who did so much for you, every day. What a way to pay up!! Take every last thing from her...then leave her like a hot potato'

Maan pagal sa ho gaya

Sar pakad ke zameen pe baith gaya

He knows he just knows he is being unfair to Geet

He hates himself for doing this to her

He hates himself more...when she instead of complaining and calling him names...takes it all silently

But her eyes which once had hope and happiness are now empty

Her eyes kill him from inside

Maan got himself severely drunk

He lands up in Tara's plus Geet's place drunk

Tara was eeewww as she opened the door

He fell on his face

She was shouting at him...ki how dare you drink..blah blah blah... says how dare you come to my place this drunk...! You are so uncivilized!

Geet went to hold him but...stopped herself...seeing Tara

But then again this maybe the last time she may be able to touch him, even if it's just to help him up

She knows he is heavy and Tara can't pick him up alone

Maan wahan gira pada hai...

Tara-Eeek! He is passed out...oh my it's late! I might have dark circles...I am going to sleep...tu bhi so jaa...ja

Geet gives Tara a blank look

Now here is Geet's dilemma; she only knows fairy tale version or wild version of love. She doesnt get Tara's indifferent version of love, but is this really what everyone loves? Is she only different? She doesnt know

Tara ne kaha Geet ko ki she can sleep with her tonight as Maan bahar hai

Geet jaake let to gai par neend kahan aayi

Chinta khaye jaaye, kabhi idhar twisting to kabhi udhar turning

Udhar raat ho rahi thi to thand badh rahi thi

Geet ne socha usko idhar itni thand lag rahi hai, Maan bechara uss thandi zameen pe

She shivered...feeling the cold

Geet khudko rok nahi paai

Uthi

She got up but only after sneaking glance at Tara

She looked asleep besides it wasn't as if Geet was doing a crime, she simply felt hungry! or she was thirsty and she went out that's all

Geet dheere se uthi dabe pawn, gate band kiya

Phir dekha waha Maan fetus ki tarah pada hua tha

Geet felt like beating a fist against her own chest coz it did just hurt a much

He was shrinked

Geet gai Maan ke paas leaning down shivering a little

She whispers -Maan' laying a warm hand on his cold cheek

M-umm...

A sleepy smile spears on his lips as if his heart felt loved again, felt the familiar warmth again

G- Utho

She says close to his ear

G-Chalo uth kar palang tak chalo

She says rubbing his hand to warm him a ltittle

His eyes are droopy and heavy

He uses all his strength and opens his eyes looking into her eyes dreamily

Geet gives him an equally dreamy smile back feeling her heart breaking all over again, maybe this was the last time he would ever look at her like this

Maan leans on the floor and pukes

Geet pats his back trying to sooth him, rushing to get him water and wet towel

Maan crawled away from his mess and held the wall to stand straight

She helps him crawl and stagger to the single sofa as the bed Geet slept on is now shifted Tara's room

His body isn't supporting him fully, so holds her and digs his face on her shoulder with closing eyes

He loops his hand over her shoulder feeling the comfort and looping her hand around his back

The familiar warmth. It was a comfortable routine touch

M-G...ee...t

G- Hmm? I am right here

She says pulling him slowly along the wall towards the sofa

His eyes are fixed on her and his gaze directed on her

He falls on the sofa taking her along

His face dug in her hair and his arms tightly grabbing her

Ek bar Geet panicked ki nahi ye kya, Tara aa gai to!!! Nahi ye sahi nai hai.

He is getting married to someone else but then she thought of the horrible afternoon, who cares about anything else

She wanted to hug him. She needs to hug him

So she gave into the embrace

Maan too hugs her tightly, feeling comfortable...than he felt in days

Maan ko ab achchi wali gehri wali neend

Geet bhi thoda khiski thoda shift hui getting comfy

Wo bhi so gai tucking her head into his shoulder and closing her eye

Maybe this was the last time...she wasn't going to live with regrets

But whenever she used to look at his face and think about how life changed her eyes would betray her and some tears would escape

He is so close yet so far from her, a dream that she wouldn't have ever

Geet so gai thi gehri neend mein ki she heard a distant hateful voice call her name

The voice came closer and became harsher

Geet ne ankh kholi

Saamne tara

Geet is shocked

Tara pulls Geet by her hair and slaps her tighttt

Geet is just too surprised and in defensive mode to really do anything

Besides she was half stuck under Maan and him holding her, she didn't have much place to maneuver and avoid the slaps

Geet puts her hand over cheek

k- You...slapped...me?!

Her best everything slapped her?

Tara made a hue and cry over everything ki Geet wants to snatch Maan

G- Look...this isn't as it looks di...I was helping him to sofa and he fell over me

Tara-It's all you plan!

G-He is heavy I can't move out!!

Tara-You are so despo about Maan

Aur ye sab hue and cry ke beech ussi din din Geet ke mom dad aane wale the Tara ki shaadi ke liye...unko sab namak mirch lagake bol deti hai Tara

Geet ke parents shuru se hi coz of Geet's powers, they are a bit vary of her and try and avoid her

They rather wish that Tara was their child instead of Geet and things got much worse after that accident when Geet made her powers public

They don't take Geet's side over the mater not that Geet was expecting them

Till date only two people have accepted her ability- Tara and Maan

The parents say that they are disappointed very much with Geet and she should move out of Tara' place, that is the only right thing to do

Geet nods ki haan

Parents Geet ko apne hotel mein rakh lete hain

Geet also decides ki ab wo Maan se kabhi nahi milegi

Bass kuch din ki baat hai...she would just act like a guest

Geet ne sab pata kiya, ticket mili bhi to shaadi ke din ki

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear, hate tara 😡 , hope maan realised his love for geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lo pouche woh phir say daru pi k
Jab pRa reality say samna
Par honey wLi bwi ko tho neend pyari
Chali gye woh jaan chora k
Aye phir geet dil say hokey majbor
Kya khayal aur khaya tahpar
Par yeh toh sotey rahey bister tor k

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