Maaneet SS : My Time For You ! Updated (19/8/16)

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Maan : I'm missing you so much.

Geet : Hmmm...ok Maan I got to go now. Talk to you later, bye.



Maan left a sigh ! Here he is missing her so much & madam doesn't have any time to even talk to him. Well that's not new...she didn't have time for him ever. It was only him...who was ready to give all his time to her, he still is but the question is, does she want his time ? Will she ever willingly give him her time ?
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Geet : Oh Maan...u know he was sooo handsome...ahh I just wish we could...forget it!

Maan : Geet baby, u r drunk. Come, let's go home.

Geet : Nooo...i want to stay here, I want to enjoy. Anyway I've meeting in the afternoon tomorrow, so I can party all night...woohooo !

Maan : Baby, no...no more party, let's go. Maan had to pick her in his arms, she was completely drunk.

Geet : U know Maan, Rohit Roy was the most handsome & talented boy in our college. All the girls used drool on him...But...but he chose Me. He went on his knees and proposed Me not any other girl.

Maan : He was just listening to her while carrying her to the car.

Geet : Actually he wasn't perfect...it's good I didn't accept his proposal, because he was not MSK, he was not you Maan.

Maan : He smiled but it got vanished when he heard her next words.

Geet : You came between Me & Rohit. No, not you, your money came between us. Rohit isn't as rich as you. My MSK is the richest man of this city...saying this she dozed off.


When finally Maan came to his room, after dropping Geet to her house, he laid down on his bed and started to think about whatever Geet told to him few hours ago. Is she really getting married to him for his money ? Doesn't she feel anything for him ?

Edited by kyara123 - 9 years ago
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Maan : God Geet...i swear one day I'll kill ur family panditji...he's hell bent to postpone our marriage. Maan was hugging Geet from behind & cutely pouted.

Geet : Chill Maan..what's the hurry...n it's good na by the time of wedding we will be free from our works.

Maan : I'm always free for you baby...maan was nuzzling his nose in Geet's neck but Geet got a call.

Geet : Yup...tasha...tell them to wait...I'm coming.

Maan : Maan holds Geet tightly...Geet, where r u going now, we all r here to talk about our marriage.

Geet : I don't have time for all this Maan...I need to go to office.

Maan : Baby plsss don't leave me with your nasty step mom & sister...both of them stare at me like they will eat me anytime.

Geet : Sorry...can't help it. Now u shud get used to it as u r going to be jamai of this house, u have to face their nasty looks regularly. Now I have to go Maan..bye.

Meanwhile Maan's dadima came & both Maan and sit together to talk to the paditji.

Dadima : Panditji...can you check their kundli and tell me how will be their married life.

Panditji : There will be a lot of problems & misunderstanding. Both Maan & Geet need to have faith in each other to sustain their marriage.

Geet's Step mom : Oh please...don't believe in all this dadiji. Maan & Geet r perfect for each other in fact we shud also not postpone their marriage. Let them get united as soon as possible.

Maan's face lighten up...for the first time he's liking her step mom in law.

Dadima : No...i believe in all this & I can't take risk with Maan's future. Then dadi said under her breath, anyhow I didn't want this marriage...don't know why Maan is so mad for Geet.

Maan : Maan listened everything & told dadima...trust me dadima, Geet is the perfect one for me. Don't worry we'll be really happy together.

Dadima : I hope so too beta... & fakes a s mile.


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And the Business Woman of the year award goes to Miss Geet Handa.


Everybody knew it...as Handa company became one of the top companies of the country in just few years & that happened only because of Geet. Geet was on cloud nine. Finally she defeated everybody.


Maan was applauding for her...he was feeling so proud of his love. But there was someone who wasn't so glad to see happy Maaneet & that's Sameera...she's the daughter of a reputed businesses man & wanted to marry Maan but when Maan refused the proposal, she just wanted to take the revenge n finally today she got the chance.


Sam : Hey Maan...long time. How are you?
Maan : As u can see I'm the most happiest man in the world right now.
Sam : Yaa..can see that...Geet really did well. She finally defeated the Maan Singh Khurana.
Maan : Maan gave a confused look.
Sam : I meant every year you are the one who won the best businesses man award but this year you are empty handed. And look at Geet , she went ahead of you.
Maan : Sam, I can gladly lose my everything for my Geet.
Sam : Of course there's no doubt...but just make sure you don't lose her.
Maan : This time Maan gave an angry look.
Sam : Ah..what I mean is Geet has to give lots time on work to make her company no.1...what if she doesn't have time for you...for your relationship ! So just hold her tight.
Maan : You don't have to worry about that miss sameera. I don't have to hold my Geet to myself...she's a free bird & I know at the end she'll come back to Me.
Sam : Sure...we both can see that, your Geet still didn't come to you as she's very much busy taking others' greetings. With a wicked smile Sam left from there.


Maan was looking at Geet, she was actually busy with others...but when Geet looked at him & their eyes met..Maan gave a sweet smile & Geet immediately excused herself n came to Maan. She hugged him tight. At that moment Maan badly needed that hug which he got.

Geet : Geet looked at Maan & proudly said , I told u Maan nothing can stop me..see I finally got this award.
Maan : That's because, My Geet is the best.
Geet : Hmm...n soon your best Geet will defeat khurana company & will make Handa company no.1
Maan : Anything for you baby.


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Everybody was talking & gossiping...all the family members were shocked.



Dadima : Maan now what will we do ??
Maan : Don't worry dadima...this marriage will happen.
Dadima : Are you out of your mind Maan ? Geet didn't come...she won't come...she has left you on the day of your marriage. She cheated on you Maan. She made a fool of your love. This marriage will not happen.
Maan : NO ! This marriage will happen. I will marry Geet...that too Today. Furious Maan left the mandap to search for his bride Geet.
Edited by kyara123 - 8 years ago
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congo 4 new story
seems interesting
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Congrats for new story!!
Looking forward to read this 😃
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Congrats on the OS! superb intro! update soon n do pm
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nice start ..looking forward to it..
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Awesome update. Geet is drunk and in this state she opened her heart to Maan. She told him that he choose her over Rohit because he is richer than Rohit.
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very intersting waiting for next
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Congrats for new story..
Intresting part..
Continue soon..
Waiting for next...

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