MG ff: She's gone Chptr 6 on pg 14

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Busi

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: .CookieMonster.
Interesting
plz cont

Aww thank you. I wil updt soon.

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Desigirls12

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Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

wow very interesting fav of my maaneet..

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Busi

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: anu5

Thanku dear!!!Iam overwhelmed!!😳
Thanku for considering my request and taking into consideration too!!
I wish u get lots of like and comments too!!
Welcome to GHSP forum!!😊

aww thank you. Tnx for pulling me out of my comfort zone dear 😊

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Busi

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .CookieMonster.
Interesting
plz cont

tnx dear i wil updt soon 😊

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Busi

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: anu5
Interesting start dear!!
Loved it
Nyc prologue👏
Looking forward for the update dear!!

Thank you laughing Pearl for the pm!!😊

aww thank you. I will update soon hopefully. And tnx pearl for sending pm's on my behalf 😃

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Busi

@BusiMusi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Interesting start 

thank you 😃

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Busi

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Kawan
congrants for new story..

interesting plot..

continue soon

thank you 😊

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Busi

@BusiMusi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Desigirls12
wow very interesting fav of my maaneet..

tnx dear 😃

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Busi

@BusiMusi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kabslocks
Nice prologue.
Update soon.

thank you. I will update soon 😊

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Busi

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Chapter 1

Maan was sitting on his bed reliving the moment he spent with Geet in Mumbai.
FLASHBACKS
Kids come and see if you can catch me said Geet has she was chase by the kids. Papa mama runs to fast please chase her complained the kids. Kids why are you asking him because he won't catch me right uncle. Are you by any chance calling me an uncle little missy hmm said Maan faking his anger. No i didn't call you uncle. I thought so he said smirking. I called Maan an uncle. Maan stared at Geet enjoying how his name rolled out of her tongue without the ji. Papa are you going to let mama call you an uncle. Prove her wrong by chasing her the kids pacified Maan into to chasing Geet. Kids live uncle alone i think his bones hurts. Maan started chasing Geet and caught her. Wow you can run said Maan trying to steady his breeding. Help help help help somebody help me this man is trouble me... Hey let go of me i don't what to be your girlfriend. Geetji what are you doing. Hey live that poor girl alone. She not one of your fuzzy let her go said crowd. She my wife just asked her she will tell you. Yes the tubelight is my husband said Geet when she was far from Maan and the crowd. Tubelight he said has he chase her again and when he caught her they lost their balance and fell to the ground. Maan was beneath while Geet was on top of him, their laughter death has they got lost in each others eyes until some annoying duck voice that came out of nowhere brought them to reality. Are going to kiss her already or are you going to just stare at her beautiful face. If you won't kiss her. I wouldn't mind tasting her pump luscious pink lips said some guy who winked at Geet and in return he got beat it or i will smash you now look from Maan.

You sure scared the living sh**t out of him. I sure did didn't i . Hey do i look like a tubelight to you. I love you, i really love you Maan. The atmosphere changed has Maan became angry. Hahahahaha you should have seen your face. Yep you are defiantly a tubelight you fell for that hahahahaha. It's getting late we should go back to the beach house. Yah i will raise you to the kids she said. Yah let raise he said smiling. Your shoes are not tied she said while running. Hey that not fear you cheated. Tubelight you fell for it too she said laughing has she bumped into someone hard chest who held her waist and that caused Maan to fume.

Am sorry i didn't see you. It okay Geet the guy said and Geet looked up at the source of the voice and she was shocked to see Dev and before she could say anything Maan pulled her out of Dev embrace and he held her by the waist with possessiveness. Mama papa come now we have to go home am hungry. Okay champ said Maan picking up Ansh and carried him while Geet carried her beautiful doll Palak. They went home.
End of FLASHBACKS.

Geet i know i was wrong for accusing you for seducing me while i knew i was the one who stopped you from living me. Please come back to me i need you like i need air to breath. You were right am such a tubelight said Maan chuckling a little. I miss you my love please come back he said has he fell asleep in the early hours of morning with tears stains in his cheeks.

Edited by BusiMusi - 9 years ago

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