MG FF Ishaqzaade #2 *|| part 49 @ page 31 ||* 11- Jan -2019 - Page 15

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Awesome parts
Annie was excited when she saw Maan miss call
she called back both show excitement but Annie felt bad when Dadi yash made excuse fr not talked to Maan
He was sad his dad ignoring him but some where he proud of his dad being morally strong
Geet making Maan understand what going on in dad mind
Geet Maan growing love trust and understanding
Maan got call fr presentation hope everything goes well
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MG SS Ishaqzaade



PART 45

Its been many days since maan is searching for a job but in vain ..even she has been but nothing constructive happened ...the project maan was working on even that hasn't gotten any investor ..the last time there was a chance was from Mr. Murti who approved it but then he also put that hold for the approval of his board and investor and now even he is silent ..maan always puts a happy face in fron to fher but she knows he is loosing his hopes ..she had saved a good amount from maan's salary in his own account while he was at job but even that would end some day ..she hasn't even checked with the account how much is it left.. till this time the previous months grocery was in place and the amount they received in the chawl reception as they barely spent a dime extra..while opening the door to his house she made a mental note of asking maan to check his account balance but then rejected the idea fearing if the amount would be less it would only give him more tension She stood infront of the small idol of god

Bappa please bas itni himmat dena ke maan ko tootne na doon mien ..

She settled the grocery in the kitchen and began her cooking and just as the cooker went blaring indicating to turn the gas off geet heard maan shouting her name ..worried she went outside ..and he entered the house opening the door and taking her into her arm spinning her around in glee ..

Ahh ...maan what are you doing ...(she laughed seeing his infectious smile) ..

Geet ..u won't believe what happened today ..

Neeche utaro mujhe maan please ..mujhe chakar aarahe hian ...

And he put her down while she balanced her self holding his shoulder still trying to regain her equilibrium ..

Oh god ...kya hua hai maan ...?

Guess ..

He had that 400 volt smile that she missed for last so many days and she could barely wait to know what is the reason behind it ..

U got the job ?

Oh ho nahi ..

Than ..??

I got a call from Mr. Murti ..

WHAT !!!

Project ke liye ..??

Yes ..

Oh my god ..

Kya bola unhoon ne ..

Well I have to present the project in front of the investors and board if they agree and approve then he will sign the contract paper ..and we'll build it ..

Yeh sab phone pe ..

Nahi he called me to his office ..

Uhh maan ...shuro se btao kya hua ...

Well shuro se yeh ..ke I went for the interview as usual they told me they'll let me know ..mien second interview ke liye jaraha tha I got a call from an unknown number ..it was Mr. Murti he told me ke unhoon ne kuch time pehle b call kiya tha but mera number off tha and he wanted to meet me today ..so after the interview I went to meet him ..there he told me that he is wanting to build that Hotel project of mine in the outskits of Chinnai ..but for that I will have to present the project in front of the investors and the board if they approve than we'll proceed ...

Oh my god maan this is huge ...this is really huge ...(and she hugged him in delight) ..i am so so so happy ...

Maan hugged her back equally happy ..after so many days this was the first good news he didn't knew until when the money they had at home would last the call really gave a hope ..geet parted and asked while catching her breath ...

Acha presentation kab hai ..?

Well that's the tricky part ..

Matlab ?

Umm .. presentation kal hai ..?

What kal kal ?

Yes mishty ...kal wala kal

Han tum khare kyun ho ..tyaari shoro karte hain na ..project file kahan hai ..abhi se start karte hain ...nahi actually pehle tum fresh hujao khana khalo then start karna fresh mind ke saath ..theek hai ...jao washroom m paani hai n tumhaare kapre mien laati hoon ..

Geet sonu tu ..//

Jao na baba ...

She literally pushed him until inside the washroom and went away to take the towel and cloth for him ..and the minute the got back maan eld her hand and placed a firm kiss on her forehead making her halt in her place ..

I love you ..

A smile spread across her face and she took a deep breath looking at him

I love you too ...(and then pushed him inside locking the door) ..abhi jao change karo ..

Mishty tumhain tu mien ...//

While she went away laughing ...truly in the air ...and then stopped infront of the idol of god...

Thank you thank you thank you so much ...bas sab theek rakhna ..

**^^**

It was late night maan was still working on his presentation when geet walked out of kitchen with dinner plate in her hand and saw him completely emerged in his work. She stood by the small table they dine on for almost 10 minutes but her dear hubby was so busy looking into his screen that he didn't even noticed her. She smiled wondering a few months back this guy was only concerned about his clubbing and parties and here he sits oblivious to the whole world working rigorously she shot a quick prayer to make his presentation successful and then took his plate and walked upto him in a hope that he would eat something.

Geet: Maan ..

Maan: han geet ..(still reading something in laptop)

Geet: khana ...?

Maan: han bas 10 min geet ...budgeting finish hujaye na tu ...

She rolled her eyes and glared at him which had no effect on him and then finally sat by his side and closed his laptop ...

What the hell ...!! .. (he shrieked in anger) Geet

WHAT ..

Dinner ...

Yaar mien... I am stuck with the budgeting aur tum ...this is really important geet.

Han tu dinner bhi important hai ...jab se wapis aaye ho kuch khaya tum ne ...what are you trying to do to yourself. Hujayega kaam pehle khana khalo ...

Geet ..//

MAAN ...tum khana khate ho ya nahi ..

They both continued to glare each other for a few second and then he blinked ..

Ok fine... khata hoon ...ghussa mat ho tum

Good for you ...chalo start karo ..

He put the laptop on the other side of the sofa and muttered under his breath

Hitler ..!!

What ..!! kya bola tum ne ..

Nahi kuch nahi ..

He turned towards her with a bright smile while she looked at him skeptically ...

Geet ...ab khana dogi k nahi ..

She smiled offering him his plate and left to get her own ..

**^^**

So Mr. Khurana ...where are you stuck...??

She came back after clearing the dishes and sat by his side seeing his files ..

Budgeting ...

Hmm so finally you need to agree k civil engineer turned MBA grads are still week on finance ..

Oh hello ..i topped in finance ..OK

Geet chuckled getting the similar response as she use to get in college time ...he said just as he use to say it back then ...

I know that ..but I can still be a good help ...chalo show me your files ..

**^^**

they spent the next few hours on completing the remaining details of the project ..geet was indeed a great help and of course she made sure maan was relaxed as he would definitely think and do better than. By the time it was mid night the presentation and project file both were completed but sleep was no where near to maan ...nor geet for that matter. He was so anxious this was probably his final chance at proving himself.

He was standing by the window overseeing the pitch black sky ...wondering what will happen next when geet came from behind and embraced him ...he held on to her tight gaining strength from his life partner ...while she spoke softly ...

Stop thinking so much ...aur sochna hi hai tu acha socho ...yeh socho k kal jab project approve huga tu hum party kahan karenge .. Amy aur Ridz ko bhi nahi pata so kal unko batayenge tu wohh kitna khush hunge ..

What if aisa kuch na huwa tu ...

She smiled and parted to look into his eyes ..

Tu phir yaad rakhna k we all are still going to be here ...party tab bhi karenge ...aur project agar kal approve nahi hua tu baad mien huga ...iss company k saath nahi huya tu kisi aur company k saath huga ...because tomorrow is not the end of the world ...

Maan looked at her ...she was smiling ...looking into his eyes with all her love and concern yet he couldn't get himself to be this optimistic. Not after all that has happened. Geet could see maan's struggle ...she knew it isn't easy to calm his nerves but wanted him to know ...that their relation far above this success or failure ...

Maan don't do this ...tum tu mujhe zindagi se umeed rakhna sekhaya hai ..how can you be like this ...

I just don't know geet ..kal kya huga ...

Kal jo bhi huga ...we'll face it together ..aur tum hi kehte ho na jab tak hum saath hain sab theek hi huga ..

Maan nodded and smiled enveloping her in his embrace ...

Maan chand har waqt asmaan p nahi huta par iska matlab yeh nahi k asmaan bilkul kaala par gaya ...roshni tu unn chote chote taaron ki bhi huti hai jinko hum notice hi nahi karte ... dekho aaj bhi wohh tare hain ..asman p jagmagate ..roshni phelaa'te ...

He looked up and saw the sky indeed even in the pitch black sky there were stars shimmering in the dark ...

Geet ..

Hmm

I love you ..

She smiled and looked up without stepping away from his embrace ...and he looked down returning the same smile ...his breath fanning her face while she was inches away ...their eyes locked & almost involuntarily she tipped toed and placed her lips over his a moment enough to make him take control and sweep her off her foot and exploring every hidden secret of her mouth making her moan ...her hands sliding up his scalp scratching his hair line making him go carnal, the kiss was no longer a sweet one but a passion filled soul steering one.
**^^**

Geet woke up with early morning sun shine illuminating their room and turned only to notice maan wasn't their ...she got up and saw the laptop bag and his file neatly placed on the table ..and realized he has been up for long now but where is he ..??

She walked out and saw the kids running down for school and asked a few ladies if they saw maan and they told him he was upstairs wondering what he was doing there she went there only to see him on video chat with a lady .. she stopped at the entrance of the roof listening to him and aniee talk...

Aniee: bhai aap kahan ghayab hujaate ho ..kitne messages kiye aapko mene ...aur aaj reply kar rahe ho aap ..

Nothing just office and work ...
You r still living outside KM ..??

Hmm ...

Acha meri chor apni bata ...how is studies, uncle, dad, dadi ..sab kaisa hai

Ah ..well studies are boring ...dad is being difficult with his medicines and uncle and dadi are super good. Though yash uncle is extra busy these days.

Kyun ..?

Are wohh he came here for dad but aapko tu pata hai how he is ...he won a major project here and bas us ski waja se hi late night work and meetings plus india ka bhi kaam ...I so wish you were here bhai ..

Acha sun aniee dadi theek hain na ..

Han ...aur aap mujh se kyun pouch rahe ho ...aap ki baat nahi hui kya ..?? abhi kal hi tu dadi maa told us that she talked with u yesterday ...

Maan realized she lied to them and then attempted to cover ..

Han huyi thi na but who she was sounding low tu iss liye ...mujhe tu wohh batata nahi na ..

Oh ..han ..actually she is bit down ..i guess she misses you ...aap baat kar liya karo un se ...

I miss them too aniee ...bas

Acha listen you wanna see her ..??

Aniee iss waqt rehne de so rahe hunge ..

Oho mene kuansa kaha I will wake them up ...roko aap .

Aniee ...sun ..ro ..///

But she went ahead and walked inside dadi maa's room ...just as she turned the camera towards her maan stopped talking ..it was good 2 months since he saw her ...he was so overwhelmed seeing her deep in slumber ..he caressed the screen as if he could touch her ...and she turned in her sleep and aniee moved out of her room only to enter yash' ...maan saw his father and remembered their last meeting ...that look of disappointment on his face ..he could see the wrinkles on his fathers' face that weren't there 2 months back ...they use to be best friends and today he can't even explain him how things turned so disastrous. There wasn't a day when he didn't talked with them and now its been good 2 months since they spoke ...maan couldn't hold his tears anymore and so he disconnected the call not wanting aniee to question him.

Dropping the phone by his side he hid his face beneath his palms and tears spilled from his eyes. That's when geet came and knelt infront of him taking his hands off of his face and wiping away his tears with tears shimmering in her own eyes she smiled with a broken heart and shook her head in denial ...while he took a deep breath holding her hand firmly seeking the strength from her to stop himself from breaking down ...he placed a kiss on her hands now holding his and sat straight exhaling ...

Mien theek hoon ..

Jaanti hoon ...

They both had that fake teary smile and mist eyes looking at each other trying to over come the overwhelming feeling ...

Mien theek hoon geet ...

I know ..and don't worry you're gonna rock this as always ...

He chuckled listening to her words ...

Tum itni optimistic kab se hugayi ..??

Jab se tum itni pessimistic hugaye ..

Maan left her hands & held her face in his palm touching his forehead to hers ...they closed their eyes both trying to hold back their tears ..

I couldn't have done this without you mishty ..

Geet placed a hand on his face still with her eyes closed ...

Wohh tu mujhe pata hai ...mere bina tumhara kuch nahi hu sakta ...weirdo

He parted with a broad smile on his face which was reflected on her face as well ...

I missed you calling me that ..Hitler

Geet chuckled and stood up extending her hand ..

Chalo abhi get up you drama queen ...you have to get ready ...late hujaoge warna ..

Maan held her hand and got up taking his phone and placing his hand around her shoulder they walked down ... geet looked at him side ways still holding his hand realizing how much he was missing his dad ..she would never be able to lessen that hurt at least not until they reunite but she would always be by his side as his family ...as his friend and as his life partner ...victory or not... happiness or not ...darkness or light she will be hi constant ...always

**^^**

Geet tum kitchen mien kya kar rahi ho .. I am leaving now

Ek minute na baba ..bas aagayi ..

She walked out holding a small thal in her hand and head covered ..

Geet yeh ...

Shush ..bebe bolti thi shagun huta hai ..

Maan smiled seeing her taking his arti placing the small tilak on his forehead ...she looked so cute ...with that nervous confused expression unsure if sh was following the correct steps ...a moment before he was so nervous and she as a fresh air dissolved all his fears with her innocence and love ...

Maan kahan kho gaye ...

He came out of his trance only to notice her holding a spoon full of yogurt in front of him and remembered his dadi maa doing the same on every of his exam and presentation ...

Oho ...would you please open your mouth and have it ..

Maan held her hand and eat the yogurt ...

Geet smiled sighing as if she completed a mission ..placing the thal back on the table she turned and corrected his tie ..

While he placed his hands around her making her blush

Now listen ...just be yourself ok ..bilkul jaise college ke final viva m thay ...baaqi I am sure nobody would stand a chance in front of you..

Itna trust hai ..

She circled her arms around his neck and looked straight into his eyes with determination so strong it shook him ..

Iss se bhi ziada hai ..

What if I fail ..?

Geet frowned at his negativity ..

Pehli baat u won't ...I have studied your project and its awesome and if they don't approve of it then I am sure they are super dumb people with no sense of business and completely nonintellectual idiots who wouldn't even deserve to be part of such an amazing idea and you should be thankful that you got saved from such assheads and ..//

Maan smiled hugging her ...

Bas bas ..meri maa aaj k iye itni swearing kaafi hai ..

She smiled and reciprocated his hug ..

Chalo I am leaving ..

He took his files and and bag and walked outside only to return and stand in front of geet ..

Kya hua ...kuch bhool gaye ..??

Yup ..

Kya ..?

she looked confused looked down to see he had take everything when he bent and placed a firm kiss on her cheeks making her stand rooted in shock and then turn red from head to toe ..

Yeh ...and to tell you that I LOVE YOU ..

Geet looked at him surprised and then felt butterflies dancing in her tummy just like everytime he say these 3 magical words ...and before she could respond he left while she walked to the door to see him only to notice him taking blessings from Asha tai and running off ...

I love you too maan ..

He left while she stood in the balcony seeing him running off to the taxi stand ..

**^^**

Maan stood outside Mr. Murti's office ..it wasn't an extravagant building but non the less a 3 story building housing the company's main office. He was nervous and there was no denial to that yet he was determined to win this, he had no other options he had to. Taking a deep breath he closed his eyes only to see his dadi's smiling face, geet's words before parting the trust she had in him and then his father... his face with that slight smile and hands placed in his pockets ...and those words he always use to say to him

all u require to be strong n firm with what u wanna do .. fir sab upar wale par chordo ...

he opened his eyes with a jerk extending his hands ..

dad ..

but there was nobody he was standing there alone ..he looked around and ran a hand over his head realizing he was imagining him.

Dad I know aap mujh se abhi ghussa hain but I also know the day you will get to know the truth will be the day you will hug me the first thing. But iss baar jab mien aapke saamne aaonga I will be a winner not as a loser I promised you that I will earn being your son. And I will dad ..

He took a deep breath and entered and the metal gate introducing himself as just Maan Singh ...and walked in with determination to win.

**^^**

Sorry for the delays ...i was held up with my job and health

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome
Maan came happily to tell Geet about Mr. Murti call
Geet was so excited and she also helped him in presentation she also make him remove this negative thoughts
Annie talked to him and shows him his Daadi s nd dad while they sleeping
Hope his presentation goes well
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Posted: 6 years ago
very emotional update
maan is missing his dad n daadi very badly n helpless
geet try her best to relax maan about presentation mr. murti ask for
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Posted: 6 years ago
love how Geet is there with him and is all optimistic about the project
Maan needs that kind of trust and confidence
lovely part
Maan surely misses his family but like he said when his dad would know the truth he will be the first one to hug him
continue soon SObia
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Posted: 6 years ago
thanks for updating!

Part 45

Fascinating update! wonderfully written!

glad Maan got an opportunity! Geet is happy!

liked how Geet helps and supports Maan!

can understand Maan's thoughts! great that Geet motivates him!

Maan is missing his family!

hope his dad gets to know the truth soon!

wish Maan is successful!

update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is the phase which is tough for maneet but their togetherness and their love is making it bearable. Finally Maan got a chance to prove himself. Mr Murti called Maan and Maan is super exited now. Geet is totally optimistic about his presentation. I felt bad when Maan was missing his family. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update dear mann is struggling to get a job when he got the to present a presentation in front of investors and it's tomorrow mann is happy and shared with Geet and she helped with him
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved the update. Geet is being Maan's strength now and that's all he needs to overcome his pessimism. Maan missing his dad and daadi was very emotional . I hope that he gets the project approved. Atleast one less worry in their life. Looking forward to read more.
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Posted: 6 years ago
I love this characters
Both full of love and trust on each other
Geet is his hope during this bad phase
Her encouragement is what he needed this time
He misses his family
N promised himself to get success before facing them

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