MG FF Ishaqzaade #2 *|| part 49 @ page 31 ||* 11- Jan -2019

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MG FF Ishaqzaade

PART 43

LONDON

Aniee bte uthiye ...aap late hujayengi class k liye ..

Dadi maa bas 5 minte aur ..

Theek but 5 minutes means 5 minutes ..

Hmm ..

Dadi maa smiled seeing the girl cuddling in her duvet even more and she pulled off the covers from the window making the room lit with bright sunshine ..

Rise and shine aniee ..

And she sat up stretching her arms and smiling seeing the person who has been a mother to her after she lost her own at early age ...

Good morning dadi maa ..

Good morning to you too ...now get up and get ready everyone is waiting for you ...

Hmm 15 minutes ill be down with you all ...

The breakfast was a quir fair today Yash had an early morning meeting ...

I am full ..papa please jaldi se medicine khalo aap then ill leave for the class ...

Ill be fine aniee you can go ahead ..ill have them later ..

No you will not and I know that so you are going have your medicines in front of me right now ..!!

Seriously maa ji ...meri apni mom ne mujhe itna boss nahi kiya huga jitna meri beti karti hai ..

Now here are your medicines I have taken them out for you ...please have them so I can concentrate in my lecture ..

Fine kiddo ...give me the water ..

Aniee smiled and so did savitri devi ...it had been a very stressful 2 weeks of having him in the hospital ...and surely aniee would do anything to avoid being there ever again ...she has gone through loosing one parent once and she can't loose another ...no ways ..

There you go I have taken all of them ...now can please relax and go to the university ..

Ofcourse ..luv u ..(she ran upstairs giving him a small peck on the cheek)

Meri beti bari hugayi hai maa ..

Hum samajh sakte hain aapko kaise lag raha huga ..

Waise maan kahan ghayab hai ..??

Ranvi bte maan ...//

Dadi ...papa ...

They turned around only to see aniee coming out of her room with her mobile in hand ..

Kya hua ...why are you screaming for ?

Dadi ..maan bhaiya had called me ...and missed his call

What !!

But maan ko tu hum bhi kitne din se call kar rahe hain but unka number switched off hai ..

I know but I had left him a voice message ..he has heard it and he called me but stupid me soo rahi thi ...abb ..abb kya karoon

Arre soch kya rahi ho call karo usko ...kahan ghayab hai poucho usko ..

But papa raat hugayi hai india mien tu ..

Aniee wohh kuansa 10 baje so jayega ..call him up

**^^**

INDIA

Maan kya hua kab se mobile haath mie lekar bethe hu ...call karo na aniee ko ..

Geet mien ...meri himmat hi nahi hurahi ...I mean ...pata nahi dad ne kya bataya huga wahan ..mien on call sab explain karoonga ..

Maan but karna tou hai na ...subha se har 5 minute baad time dekh rahe hu ..now that its finally time tu 30 minute bethe hu ...

Geet ..///

N just then his mobile rung with an incoming call from aniee ...both of their heat beat rose to an exceptional level and geet held his arm encouraging him to answer the call and he looked at her nervously but then took a deep breath and answered ..

He..hello aniee ..

Bhai ...thank god you answered ..kahan ghayab hai aap ..pata hai dadi aur hum sab kitne pareshaan hain ..

I am sorry kiddo ...mien ..i ..i didn't knew uncle ki health ke bare mien ...

Bhai I missed you so much ...aap theek ho na ..

Yeah I just lost my phone ...tum theek ho ...uncle kaise hain ...sab theek hai na abb

Aniee looked at her father standing their

Han everything is fine now ..yash uncle and dadi maa aagaye thay yahan p tu they handled everything ...dad ghar aagaye hain ...he is doing well ...but aap inse baat karo n tell him to take his medicines on time ...

Han ..baat ..baat karwa meri uncle se ..

Hi champ ..kaisa hai ..

Uncle I m really sorry ..i ..//

Arre yaar chor tere mere beech mien sorry kahan s aagaya ...yeh sab na tu apne dad k saath hi rakh ...sab choro yeh batao tumhaari love life kaisi jaa rahi hai ..

Dadi maa stiffened at the mention of it ...she hadn't told ranvijay anything ..and what yash had told her she still couldn't believe it but yah was adamant on not forgiving maan ..he had even told him to not contact him but she was still secretly trying to call him ...she needed her answers but getting them in front of aniee and ranvijay would be difficult ...she trusted them as a family but didn't wanted ranvijay to be in stress over this as they were ...nor did the innocent mind of aniee needed this information ...god forbid if what yash saw was true if really her brother has done something so cheap to a girl ...but then the very next moment her heart chided her that her grandson can never do anything like this ...he loved geet ..she saw that in his eyes ...

Chalo all the best for your journey ahead and yeh doctors bakwaas kar rahe hain but ill be in india soon ..n then we'll sit and discuss ..maa aap baat karengi maan se ?

Umm ..wohh ranvijay

Yash: Maa mujhye meri file chahiye jo aapko di thi kal ...

Arre yash sun na ...maan se baat karle

Here maan listened to ranvijay asking them both and the answering silence from them both gave him the hint of how dadi and dad were avoiding him. Geet saw the look in his eyes and held his shoulder making her presence known ..silently conveying that she is here ..maan smiled looking at him ..

Uncle ..sorry wohh actually mere office ka time hugaya hai ill call u guys later ...baat karte hain phir

Acha chal theek hai ...dadi aur dad se baat karlena baad mein ..

Ek minute ...ek minute ..meri bhai se baat karwaiye

Maan ek minute anniee se baat karna ..

G ..

Bhai ...

Han aniee ..

Aniee walked away from everyone while dadi let with yash ..here on the other hand geet wiped the tear lingering at the dge of maan's eye with her own eyes now mist ...

Bhai sab theek hai na ..??

Han sab theek hai ..?? kyun kya hua ..??

Dadi aur yash uncle se jab bhi aapke bare mien poucho tu itne tensed hujaate hain ...itne din m aapka bhi dadi ko koi call nahi aaya ...kuch hua h u btao na ill tell dad who hyash uncle ko samjha denge ..

Aniee tu ziada soch rahi hai bache ..actually mera phone kharaab hugaya tha .. new lene m kaafi time lagaya so is hi liye aur itne din se baat nahi huyi na dad aur dadi se iss liye shayad wohh tensed hunge ...mien baat karlunga unse ...

Tensed tou aap bhi lag rahe hu .. mujh se jhoot mat bolo ..acha btao geet bhabi kaisi hai ..??

Geet bilkul theek hai aur mien jhoot nahi bolta ..samjhii .. abb mujhe jaane de office k liye late hujaonga ...tu dhayaan rakhna sabka ..

G bhai ..

Acha sun

Please mujhe batana agar kuch bhi ho tu ...

Bhai aap tension mat lo abb sab theek hai ..aap bas apna wohh project jaldiii se finish karo aur KM wapis aajao ...

I will aniee ...

Bye ..luv you bhai

Luv u princess ..tc.

They hung up the call and geet him while he cried his heart out ...the realization of the fact that his father doesn't even wanna talk to him broke him into pieces. Each tear drop from his eyes burned her soul with guilt. The cried ...poured their pain into each other embrace ..

**^^**

LONDON

Yash aap maan se ek baar baat tou kariye

Maa we've had this discussion before ...mene poucha tha uss se ..n he confessed aur mujhe kuch nahi sunna ..

Par yash ...//

Aap kiya chahti hain maa ...ranvijay abhi stable hua hai ..ill have this discussion with maan here and ranvijay ne sun liya tu kitna stress huga usko socha hai aapne ...we can't even go back to india now yahan k projects oversee karne hain ...I can't have this discussion over the call maa

Savitri devi saw the struggle of son clearly on his face.. the pain he was feeling by staying away from his only child.. and the fear that if again maan confessed his deed what would he do ..till now thay have a flicker of a hope that may be he has some explanation to what he said but yash is right they can't discuss it over the call ..and god forbid if aniee heard anything she would be devastated maan is her hero ...they can't taint that image and break that tiny hope in their heart that may be he hasn't done what said.

**^^**

LATE NIGHT DELHI

Thanks for coming ridzz

Shut up would you ..what are friends for ? waise mujhe laga nahi tha yash uncle would react like this I mean armaan ne bataya hai mujhe the way he has brought up maan ..hidden his identity from the media ...nobody knows who is maan khurana ...gave him absolute freedom to make his own mistakes and shelter him every time .. after spoiling him to such an extent ..he disowned him for breaking a girls' trust ...

Pata nahi ..mujhe unki values ke liye unko respect karni chahiye or I should regret that he lives by such great morals ...maan is really in pain ridz ..aur aaj aniee se baat karne k baad tu he is .. mene last time usko aisa dekha tha tab bhi bardaasht nahi kar payi thi ,...aaj bhi nahi kar paa rahi hoon ..i just don't know what to do to make him feel good ..

Realx geet ..arman hai na uske saath ..baat karega ..he'll be fine ..

U think so ..? I know so ..

Chalo abb coffee ban gayi hai ...lekar chalet hain upar roof top pe ..dono whain hain

Hmm ..chalo

Ridz and armaan left a few hours after that and maan returned to the house but just as he entered the light went off ...

Oh shit man ...not again

Just then he saw geet walking out of the kitchen with two large candles in her each hand and a bright smile on her face ...she was wearing a pink cotton saari and in the light of those candle she was glowing with serenity so much that he stood lost in those deep duo staring right at him with all the love in the world that made him lost in their depths ...she everted her gaze and walked towards him putting the candle down on the table ..holding his hand in hers looking into his eyes with utmost sincerity ...

Zindagi mien kitna bhi andhera kyun na ho ..halaat kitne bhi mushkil kyun na ho ...hum roshni dhoondh lenge maan ...ek dosre ka haath pakar ke ...naye raaste dhundlenge

Maan cupped her face with his other hand smiling trying to hid his pain behind that smile but she knew that he is in pain and while she couldn't make things right for him she wanted him to know that she is with him in every walk of life no matter how difficult it will be ...

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sobia4maaneet

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MG FF Ishaqzaade

PART 44

Maan yaad hai college mien tum humesha kehte thay ..geet har baat mien practical nahi hute kabhi kabhi kuch kaam dil ke kehne p bhi karne chahiye ...mien kabhi tumhaari yeh approach nahi samajhi ...iss liye nahi kyun samajhna nahi chahti thi bulke iss liye kyun ke mien jis dunya mien baari hui wahan rishte bhi dimaag se nibhaye jaate hain ...mene dil se kabhi kuch experience kiya hi nahi ..bhabi karwa chauth bhi iss liye rakhti thi kyun ke sab family member aate thay iss liye nahi because she loved brij handa ...dadi tai g ko pooja iss liye karne deti thi kyun k wohh baari bahu thi iss liye nahi because she loved her or she wanted her too ..but society m naam kharaab huta na ... papa wohh ek rishta tha mera jo mene dil se nibhaya ..mujhe laga tha unhoon ne bhi ..but aisa nahi hai ..uss ghar mien kuch bhi dill se nahi huta tha maan ...shayad iss hi liye itni asaani se wohh rishte toot gaye ..i have always been a heartless person jisne kabhi dil se rishte nibhaye hi nahi aur na hi banaye ..(maan wipped the tears away from hr cheeks that she didn't even realized were falling from her eyes and tried to stop her from saying any more but she held his hand and looked into his eyes making him captive with the depth and sincerity of her own) wohh tu babaji ne tumhain bhej diya ..pata nahi tum ne kaisi kiya but you made me feel ..mujhe tu apne seene ien dil ke hone ka bhi ehsaas nahi tha par tumhaari baahoon mien uski dharkan bhi sunayi deti hai maan ... tum mien ...humaara eyh rishta bas yeh hi hai jo dil se bana ...aur dil se nibhaya ...shayad iss hi liye even after all what has happened hum saath hain ...aur papa aur dadi bhi tumhaare saath hunge maan kyun ke unn se tumhaare rishta bhi society norm p ya biological bond p nahi bulke dil se joore hain ...tum ne humesha apna har rishta emaandaari se nibhaya hai maan ...aur iss hi liye tum ghar se door thay phir bhi dadi aur uncle ke dil ke kareeb thay ...

Par abb nahi hoon geet ...

Maan stepped away not wanting to hurt her with his sullen mood ..

Aisa nahi hai maan ...(she stood in front of him holding his face in her both hands making him look into her eyes) ..aisa nahi hai ...agar aisa huta tou wohh aniee aur ranvijay uncle ko sab bata dete ..but they didn't jaante ho iska matlab ...isska matlab hai k kahin na kahin they dstill have a doubt on what they saw ...

Tou phir wohh kyun mujh se baat nahi kar rahe

Tum humesha kehte ho na that your father is a man of honour aur unke bte ne unse jhoot bola hai ...wohh ghussa hain maan ..but once we meet him and we tell him everything will be fine ...tumhare rishte buhat mazboot hain ..aur ek galat fehmi unko toor nahi sakti ..

U really think so ...

A tear slipped from him eyes and she kissed it away standing on her toes ..

I know so ..please trust me ek din sab saath hunge maan ..sab theek huga

Maan seeked that same confidence from her looking into those loved filled duo staring right through him ...trying to believe what she was telling him ...n then hugged her tight praying to the Almighty to make all geet has said come true

Geet(st); babaji please mere maan ki khushi wapis lado ...uski haasi wapis laado ..mien maan ko itni takleef mien nahi dekh paongi ...

**^^**

The sun rose and peeked inside their house from the slits of the curtain making geet open her eyes ...she found herself wrapped in her husbands' embrace a smile crept on her face and she held him tight ..listening to his steady heart beat for a moment and then looked up only to get smitten by the innocent look on his peaceful face ...looking at this sight nobody would believe how much this guy cried yesterday ..sometimes in front of her sometimes behind her back ...yet not once did he held her or her family responsible ...what she said to him was so true he taught her how to love heartedly ..how to give selflessly and how to live by your heart ...before him she was a heartless bitch ...a practical robot doing everything to satisfy other whether it be her father, her family or the goddamn society never once in her life did she lived for her own happiness ..but now with this man as her husband she is a free bird out of the cage of gold ... happy

Geet agar tum aise hi mujhe dekhti rahi tu baad mien mujh se shikayat mat karna ..

His voice and that teasing smirk broke her revere ..

You're awake ..??

He opened his one eye and smiled

Very much so ..

Geet hit him on his chest ..

Cheater ...

Arre I was enjoying having my wife admire me ..

He winked her while she looked away blushing ..

Mien koi admire nahi kar rahi thi ...samjhe Mr.

Ohh tu itni dair se aap mere chehre pe thesis likhne planning kar rahi thi ..

Wohh ..mien tu ...han wait kar rahi thi ..

Acha kis baat ka ..?

Tumhaare uthne ka ..so that I can move ..

And then he realized his hold on her waist and smiled mischeiviously ..

Acha aur agar mien na jaane doon tu ..??

Maan badmaashi mat karo ..mujhe jaane do warna neeche tap mien paani khatam hujayega aur poora din aise hi rehna parega ..

(he shook his head looking at straight at her while she avoided looking at his captivating eyes) maan choro na please .. (while she was trugglin to get his hands off her he tunred and came on top of her taking her by surprise) ...yeh ..yeh kya kar rahe ho ..maan

Kuch nahi mien tu sirf apni wifey ko good morning wish kar raha hoon ..

N before she could comprehend he bent down to place a feather light kiss on her forehead making her eat her words and tighten her hold on his vest ...maan looked up only to see her face bright red and eyes closed ...she looked so alluring he could barely stop himself from placing another kiss on those red apple cheeks ...with every touch of his lips she burned with desire still undiscovered and pressed her body to his more and what started as a early morning fun and teasing now turned to a desirous moment in which they both were lost ...her hands went up to the nape of his neck caressing his hair giving fuel to his desire while he explored her jaw bone with his kisses while his hand explored her exposed back ...she moaned feeling his hardness pressing into her thigh while maan continued his assault making her skin tingle with anticipation ...the memories of their drunken night flashing in front of their eyes and their bodies urging to remove all the barriers ...just as he snapped the tie of her blouse geet froze with realization and grip loosened on him while maan looked up into her eyes ..seeking permission ...she was shy ..the last time it happened she was almost drunk but now in the full light of the sun getting exposed in front of her husband ...oh the thought he was her husband ..the mere thought of so delightful ...a sense of proud and ownership overwhelmed her ...she looked into his eyes and saw all the love he had for her in them ...her eyes dipped down to his lip inches away from her ..yet still not moving forward ..he looked at her with so much of love and desire pooled up in his eyes she could feel herself warming up just under his stare and then she took maan by surprise by taking the lead and kissing him ..she was shy ..utterly conscious yet the innocent contact of her lips with his rough sparked a desired in him he never knew existed and he could no longer hold back ...seeking entrance in her he explored every corner of her mouth ..making her moan ...the kiss was no longer tender or gentle as that of a lover it was demanding ...giving and seeking at the same time ..making her aware of his desire ..he love for her ..and before they could know their clothes were gone ... maan was all over her kissing her making his way down making her loose her senses to this feeling ...she felt she would loose her mind if maan stopped now ..he kissed every inch of her skin as if he was worshiping her ...those tender touch of his lips made her loose her control making her ache for him mor and more ...the moment her entered she jolted with surprise and he took in her moans with a desirous kiss ..he took her with utmost gentleness with his arms around her waist and they moved in passionate rhythm ...her legs instinctively tightened around him and he could feel her tighten around him ..the moment felt a complete bliss and drove them to a world of passion just as they came ...she hugged him while he kissed her with love and gratitude ...

Moments later they parted and maan laid beside her ...looking at her glowing the after math of their passion she looked at the most beautiful lady of the world ...maan turned and kiised her forehead caressing away the lock of her hair ...while she opened her eyes still feeling so shy ...n hid herself in his embrace ...making him smile ...he held her close like a priced possession ...the morning couldn't have been better ...

Thank you mishty ...

Geet looked up confused ...

You are my husband ...remember Mr. Khurana ..we're married now ..??

Yeah but I am not thanking you for that ..

Than ..??

For beign mine ...for everything you did for me ...

Geet smiled ...n cupped his face in her right hand

Always ...!!

I love you mishty

I love you more ...

She dozed off in his arms feeling like the most luckiest girl in the world thanking her babaji for blessing her with this man .. geet woke up later in the morning ..a smile kept on her face remembering the early morning romance with her husband ...he could still feel herself a bit soar as she moved ..the last time at farmhouse it was hazy but this moment she will remember till the day she dies ...she turned only to find herself alone in the bed covered in the duvet the door was close and maan was nowhere around ...she looked at the door of the entrance it was locked carefully she made way to the washroom ..surprised to find a saree already keot there ..the red color confirmed it was her husband doing her the favor ...the buckets were full making her aware that he woke up early ...hurriedly she changed and went down to see where he was ...after wandering the whole chawl she came back and then went to he roof top ..there was sitting with the newspaper alone in one corner ...her payal announced her presence and maan looked up only to find his wife dressed in his favorite color standing at the entrance of the roof ..he smiled welcoming her while she walked upto him ...

I've been looking for you all around ..

Well I am sorry wifey ..

So how are you ..??

I am fine ...mujhe kya hona hai ...

Maan shook his head at her discreetness and made her sit on top of him ...

Maan ...What are you doing !!! koi aajayega ..please choro

Shhh ...chup bilkul chup ..

Geet looked at him and then his finger on her lips making her shiver all over ...

Itni zor zor se bologi na geet tu sach mien koi aajayega ...

Geet pouted and looked away ...

Why didn't you woke me up ...mien itni dair tak sooti rahi ..

Good for you kabhi kabhi late uthna health ke liye acha huta hai ..

Maan ..!!

Geet tum soote v itne pyaari lag rahi thi ...merra dill nahi kiya ..

Geet looked at him and instead of his teasing smile she saw that genion love in his eyes that she saw this morning ...and she looked down

But jab mene aankh kholi tu tum mere saamne nahi thay ...

Oh tu iss liye madam itne ghusse mien hain ..??

Geet looked at him wide eyed realizing how childishly she behaved and then looked away stamp-erring

Nahi ..aisa ...aisa kuch nahi hai ..i was ..i awas just concerned ..and ..

Maan smiled and hugged her tight in his embrace while she hid her red flaring cheek and her blush chiding her own self at her reactions ...

Mishty tum kabhi nahi manogi na ...

Geet parted and stood up avoiding his teasing gaze ..

Acha chalo abhi breakfast karte hain itna late hugaya dekho ...

She took a step forward just then maan held her hand and stopped her ...and she turned to see him standing up with a serious expression ..

Nahi pehle I have to say something to you ..

Kya ..?

About what you said last night ..??

Geet looked away averting her eyes from him ..

Maan ..//

Nahi geet tum jo kuch kaha kal adhi baat theek thi but adhi galat ...

Maan could see the tears brimming in her eyes already he hated to be the reason behind those tears in her eyes but he needed her to know this more than ever ...

Tum ne humesha apna har rishta dil se nibhaya geet ...bas dosroon ne usko reciprocate nahi kiya ..aur iss mien tumhaari galti nahi hai ...jo rishte toote hain uss me galti tumhaari nahi hai .. han meri mishty thori practical hai ..but mere liye nahi ..kisi bhi apne k liye nahi ..

Tum ne kal kaha that u trust you ...I do geet ..i believe in your believe .. mere rishte agar itne mazboot hain tu wohh sirf meri waja se nahi geet ..un logoon ki waja se bhi jin se yeh rishte joore hain ...(a tear slipped from her eyes wwhile she looked down hiding that shame from him but he wipped it away holding her face in his palm) ...so aaj k baad kabhi bhi meri mishty accuse nahi karogi tum ..

Geet had a bitter smile on her face while she looked at him through her teary eyes ..

Buhat ache se support karlete hain aap apni wife ka ..but sach nahi badal sakte ..

Really ..? tumhain lagta hai jo tum ne kal kaha that was true ..

Han ...but you won't believe it

I can't believe k eek larki jo apni friend pyar ke liye uski poori family se jhagra karle woh heartless ho sakti hai ...I can't believe k eek larki jo sirf 2 saal ki dosti ke liye uss larke ki har galti ko maaf karde woh heartless ho sakti hai ...(she was looking every where but him and he lifted her face and made her look into his eyes and see her reflection the true image of her character that refuses to see) I don't believe ke apni poor family ke dhoke ko jaan'e ke baad bhi jo unse umeed karti ho woh heartless ho sakti hai ...( he smiled confessing one thing he never gave words to ...indeed she praying for him to get united with people about whom even he isn't sure would accept her once they get to know what her family has done) mien nahi manta ke jo unn logoon ke liye pray karti hai jinhoon ne usko abb tak accept tak nahi kiya woh heartless ho sakti hai ...(he didn't wanted her to see even the flicker of doubt in his eyes and he pressed their foreheads together while she held into his shoulder listening to him; every word affecting her deeper than she ever wanted) jo kisi ko itne dil o jaan se chaahe ke uske liye apni jaan dene ko tyaar ho woh heartless ho sakti hai ...

Maan ...

She gasped not being able to bear any more and hugged him ...

Uski pakeezgi kuch aisi hai

Jis ko chuye pak karde

Ya rab yeh kaisi shaksiyat di hai

Dil chahe us'se sajda karde

Toone banaya yeh kaisa insaan hai

Jo dekhe farishtoon mien shamil karde

Hum insaan na ban sake abhi tak poore

Koi tu humien iss bepannah pyar ke kabil karde ...

**^^**

Few days after that ...

Geet went down to pick some grocery and was up to her apartment when an elderly lady from the chawl met at ...

Arre geet yeh le teri saari mere paas aagayi thi ..mien subha kapre utaar rahi thi tab ..

Koi baat nahi aunty laaiye ...shukriya

Acha sun yeh maan kahan ghayab hai aaj kal ..dekhta nahi hai ..

Wohh aunty maan job interviews ke liye gaya hua hai aaj kal ..tu ...

Acha samjhi ...kaam milna mushkil hai aaj kal kitna ...paresh hai na ..mera betsa usko bhi hotel mien baari mushkil se kaam mila tha ..mien samajhti hoon ..

Aap dua kijeye ..hopefully sab theek huga

Yeh bhi koi bolne ki baat hai ..chal mien chalti hoon ghar par kaam hai ..

G ...

Geet climbed up to her house its been many days since maan is searching for a job but in vain ..even she has been but nothing constructive happened ...the project maan was working on even that hasn't gotten any investor ..the last time there was a chance was from Mr. Murti who approved it but then he also put that hold for the approval of his board and investor and now even he is silent ..maan always puts a happy face in fron to fher but she knows he is loosing his hopes ..she had saved a good amount from maan's salary in his own account while he was at job but even that would end some day ..she hasn't even checked with the account how much is it left.. till this time the previous months grocery was in place and the amount they received in the chawl reception as they barely spent a dime extra..while opening the door to his house she made a mental note of asking maan to check his account balance but then rejected the idea fearing if the amount would be less it would only give him more tension She stood infront of the small idol of god

Bappa please bas itni himmat dena ke maan ko tootne na doon mien ..

She settled the grocery in the kitchen and began her cooking and just as the cooker went blaring indicating to turn the gas off geet heard maan shouting her name ..worried she went outside ..and he entered the house opening the door and taking her into her arm spinning her around in glee ..

Ahh ...maan what are you doing ...(she laughed seeing his infectious smile) ..

Geet ..u won't believe what happened today ..

Neeche utaro mujhe maan please ..mujhe chakar aarahe hian ...

And he put her down while she balanced her self holding his shoulder still trying to regain her equilibrium ..

Oh god ...kya hua hai maan ...?

Guess ..

He had that 400 volt smile that she missed for last so many days and she could barely wait to know what is the reason behind it ..

U got the job ?

Oh ho nahi ..

Than ..??

I got a call from Mr. Murti ..

WHAT !!!

Project ke liye ..??

Yes ..

Oh my god ..

Kya bola unhoon ne ..

Well I have to present the project in front of the investors and board if they agree and approve then he will sign the contract paper ..and we'll build it ..

Yeh sab phone pe ..

Nahi he called me to his office ..

Uhh maan ...shuro se btao kya hua ...

Well shuro se yeh ..kei went for the interview as usual they told me they'll let me know ..mien second interview ke liye jaraha tha I got a call from an unknown number ..it was Mr. Murti he told me ke unhoon ne kuch time pehle b call kiya tha but mera number off tha and he wanted to meet me today ..so after the interview I went to meet him ..there he told me that he is wanting to build that resort project of mine in the outskits of chinnai ..but for that I will have to present the project in front of the investors and the board if they approve than we'll proceed ...

Oh my god maan this is huge ...this is really huge ...(and she hugged him in delight) ..i am so so so happy ...

Maan hugged her back equally happy ..after so many days this was the first good news he didn't knew until when the money they had at home would last the call really gave a hope ..geet parted and asked while catching her breath ...

Acha presentation kab hai ..?

Well that's the tricky part ..

Matlab ?

Umm .. presentation kal hai ..?

What kal kal ?

Yes mishty ...kal wala kal

Han tum khare kyun ho ..tyaari shoro karte hain na ..project file kahan hai ..abhi se start karte hain ...nahi actually pehle tum fresh hujao khana khalo then start karna fresh mind ke saath ..theek hai ...jao washroom m paani hai n tumhaare kapre mien laati hoon ..

Geet sonu tu ..//

Jao na baba ...

She literally pushed him until inside the washroom and went away to take the towel and cloth for him ..and the minute the got back maan eld her hand and placed a firm kiss on her forehead making her halt in her place ..

I love you ..

A smile spread across her face and she took a deep breath looking at him

I love you too ...(and then pushed him inside locking the door) ..abhi jao change karo ..

Mishty tumhain tu mien ...//

While she went away laughing ...truly in the air ...and then stopped infront of the idol of god...

Thank you thank you thank you so much ...bas sab theek rakhna ..

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PRESENTATION

NOTE:

hello everybody, firstly thank you to everyone who has still sticking around despite my often disappearance over the last whole year ..my father is doing well thank you for your prayers i am done with my paper it went well by the grace of Almighty ..now this is dedicated to all my loyal readers and friends. tried my hand on passion again hope i am improving if not apologies; Double updated of 5717 words ..leaving it on a happy note ...enjoy and

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nishamna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Great parts. Maan called Ainee and talked with her and asked about the well being of her father. He was hurt when dadi and yash made a excuse and left from there without talking geet him. Geet consoled him but it is an painful phase. Maneet's passionate moment was beautiful. They thanked God for getting each other. Geet was worried as their stored money was getting end but soon she got a news from Maan that Mr. Murti wants him to give presentation .i hope now everything gets better soon. Waiting for next dear

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love2_soma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

sab kuch thik kardo god...

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

thank you for updating

geet feeling responsible as maan is away from his family n having misunderstanding between them

maan is very sad n crying that his father n daadi not ready to talk to him

but maan said her that she is not at fault if her family break bond with her , they are at fault

finally maan they got hope when mr. murthi call him for project making both happy

now their financial problem also finish

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Sahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#127

hey

Welcome back Sobia...

am so glad you updated this one...

for once I thought you forgot about this one...but really excited for this...

Thanks for updating

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Sahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Part 43

Nice one...

Maan is sad about not being able to be there for Annie and his family...

am glad Geet is there to support him and trying to bring him back to normal...

Maan's father is a great soul..he lives by his morals...nice to see such a man...

Maan is like him in so many ways...I just wish he gives him a chance to explain his side of the story

Loved Geet's efforts to try to convey that she is always beside him...

Lovely part

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Sahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Part 44

LOved the entire part...

how Geet is trying to support him and him assuring her that she is not heartless...

loved the Maaneet moments...they are broken because of their family and are trying to find solace in each other...beautiful...

glad that he got the opportunity to present his idea...I am sure his hard work will pay off...

Really want him to reconcile with his father and explain himself...

Lovely part

Please try to update soon

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Krupa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#130

Read both parts, though I forgot story, Yaad Nahi Aida kya Hua jispe maan ke cha-cha uspe narak hai, lekin thodu thodu story Yaad hai, this 2 parts are full of maneet agony of their parents narajgi, geet's family and why she left them, their struggle with finance, their love for each other, manythings has been covered, and end this chapter with happy note of Maan getting project demo offer and if he will do good he will get his dream project for what he is waiting for long.fir kho Nahi jaana,kyounki badmae intrest kam ho jata hai.