Re-Written FF||Collide||Chapter 8 Pg 21||4th February|| - Page 9

Nice update. Geet broke up with Vicky. It seems Vicky is affected with this decision. Pari and Geet friendship is awesome. Maan is turning to be a writer. Loved it.

Part 3 - really I liked this maan, so much talkative, loving & caring. Liked maan- meera talk. Meera was straight to tell him that she liked Vicky. But maan warned her not to cross ahead as he was geet's boyfriend.

Oh...with pari's mom her dad is also here to make her life hell. Like her mother he too was same, roaming spending time with other women. Pari was sad and fought with him for parents love.

Geet painting in maan's house. His advice was good. Her painting inspired him to decide what he wants. Seems both unknowingly affecting each other's life.

Omg...pari & geet were nuts. Sid Vicky were shocked to see them like this.

I liked sid. He is handsome hunk with tattooed hands.

Part 4 - Enjoyed this part. Oh...get broke up with Vicky just like that. Meera was happy and feeling bad for him. As per her there was no enough love bet them to hold them together.

So maan got his needed inspiration to write and he showed to meera.

Nathan & hales were funny. He has no guts b'coss her brother were in police. But she much bold than him to sneak out into his room.

I liked Jake & kate. She was too much possessive of him. She was fighting with him without listening to him. Glad that geet was there to make her understand.

Omg...geet & pari were unbelieving...how geet boldly hit sean for his abusive words and warned him not to cross their path.

So pari is with Daniel. In and all I liked this chapter.

Chapter 5

"Do you always just creepily stare whilst your brother plays?" I question taking a seat on the bench watching Vicky play with Jake, Nathan and the others.

"He needs a lift home so I'm just waiting till practise is over" Maan replied.

"I see..." I nodded.

"So what brings you here? Thought you've broken up with my brother?"

"Yeah I have broken up with him, that doesn't mean we aren't still friends. You should know that" I chuckled. "Vicky was my first guy friend, we've been friends since high school" I reminded him. "I ain't just going to stop talking to him"

"Fair enough" he shrugged in response.

"So why aren't you in the college team?" I questioned feeling bored of the silence. Pari, Kate nor Haley was here, Pari was busy with Daniel somewhere. Kate was in history and Haley was probably holed up in a library.

"It didn't appeal to me" he replied turning his head to me. "Why aren't you in the cheerleading team?" he questioned.

"Join the cheerleaders and look like a dumb bimbo? Not my style" I shake my head.

"Just to remind you..." he smiled inwardly. "Your friend Pari is in the cheerleading team right?"

"Pari is excluded from my generalisation of the bimbos"

He chuckled trying hard at hiding his smile, I smirked.

"Made you smile Mr Miserable" I laughed.

"I'm not miserable" he frowned in confusion.

"You are, every time I see you you've always got this frown" I pointed to the space between his brows. "You should be like your brother" I winked.

"Mmhmm..." he hummed nodding his head though he seemingly looked amused.

"Hey baby girl" Pari joined me by the bench sliding her arm around mine.

"Hey. Nice time with Daniel?" I quizzed looking at her teasingly.

She smirked and looked confused all of a sudden. "Hey Maan" she greeted.

"Hi Pari" he responded nodding in her direction.

"Bro game's done" Vicky called out.

"Alright..." Maan replied, he glanced at us. "See you around" he then stepped down and jogged across the court joining Vicky.

I turned my head to Pari noticing she was staring after Maan. "Fancy him?"

"Um..." she cleared her throat. "He's okay"

"Of course he is" I laughed. "You crush on the quiet boy?"

"Shut up bitch" she pinched me.

"I'll speak to Vicky about setting you two up" I laughed.

"Don't you dare! I'm happy where I am"

"Mmhmm" I rolled my eyes.

"Ready?" Jake intervened cutting Pari off before she could respond.

"Yeah" I nodded grabbing my bag.

"Don't you mention one word to anyone, I f**king mean it" she warned following me.

"Wouldn't it be good though if I tell everyone? They'd spread the word because despite being Vicky's brother he seems kinda slow"

"Baby girl I mean it" She scowled.

"Alright alright, I'll keep quiet" I rolled my eyes. "Still think you should allow me to spread a rumour"

"Shut up or I'll put a sock in your mouth" she threatened.

"Yeah yeah..." I shook my head.

Haley

"wh**ehouse you're in the wrong car" I bent down at the waist seeing Rachel Jamison sitting in the back of Nathan's car - stripped down to her bra and knickers.

"Hales" she stared at me questioningly. "Darling I wouldn't be here if he was exclusive" she replied not moving from her seat.

"What the f**k are you trying to say wh**ehouse?" I grit out seething silently.

"He's not exclusive with you" she grabbed her dress sliding into it and climbed out of the car. "Nathan Scott hasn't had sex with you yet" she smirked.

I was sure she noticed me tensing because she chuckled and move to pass me, before she could I grabbed onto her arm pulling her back. "Stay the f**k away from Nathan or else I'm going to tell the entire college I caught you last summer sucking off Fat Elliot" I reminded.

"You bitch" she pressed her hands on my shoulder wanting to shove me.

"Rachel get your hands off her" Nathan stepped in pulling me away and stepping in front of me. "What the f**k are you doing?" he raised his voice.

She looked between us. "You're both welcome to each other" she snapped and turned on her heels hurrying away.

"Did you tell anyone I've not had sex with you yet?" I questioned crossing my arms when he turned around to face me.

"What? No" he shook his head vehemently.

"Well someone f**king did" I snapped, my cheeks burned. I was angry and embarrassed at the same time.

"Hales it wasn't me" he cradled my cheeks. "Please believe me"

"I do but someone must've told her" I muttered.

"Hales you know them - they're all spreading shit around just because they're jealous"

"Jealous of what?" I frowned.

"Jealous that they're not the girls that made me happy" he nudged me with his nose.

"I make you happy?"

"To the moon and back" he answered. I closed my eyes sliding my arms around him and hugged him tightly.

Maan

"Have I walked into the wrong house?" I spoke as I noted Geet Desai was back in the studio painting. I'd gone to help Uncle Dave for the last couple of hours and returned home, it was silent only for a moment till I heard a familiar voice cursing.

Geet turned around surprised. "You're in the right house" I responded. "Mia let me in before she headed to work"

"Right..." I nodded. "You working on another?" I questioned walking into the studio, my eyes drawn over to the splashes of colour on the white large canvas.

"Yeah you could say that" she smiled softly. "I'd gone home and felt inspired, I was going to paint at home but remembered I left my paints and canvases here from last time" she explained.

"What are you painting?"

"Trying to paint something" she replied vaguely.

"That describes loneliness?" I questioned.

"What?" she looked at me surprised.

"Um... I'm just guessing, you've painted all these people white and this one person in the middle red" I pointed. "Despite this entire crowd - this person is yet lonely"

"Oh..." she stared her painting and smiled. "That's a message this painting could give" she chuckled.

"What's the message you're trying to portray?" I questioned intrigued.

"Now that's for me to know" she smiled softly. "And you'll have to find out"

"Alright" I smiled nodding my head. "Want anything to eat or drink?" I straightened.

"No thanks" she shook her head. "I've got one here" she pointed to her drink.

"Okay... I'll leave you alone to carry on" I told her and retreated from the studio.

Geet

"Helloo" I called out. "Um Maan..."

"In here" he answered, his voice coming from the room on the end. I walked over slowly opening the door peeping my head in.

"Hey, you need anything?" he questioned swivelling around in his chair.

"Hey, no I don't need anything" I shook my head. "I was just going to say I'm heading off now. I've finished working on the painting. I'll pick my painting up tomorrow and take back my paintings and canvas an all as well"

"It's okay, mom wouldn't mind you coming over here and painting"

"Um... I'll have to think over it" I shrugged. "What are you working on?" I asked out of curiosity.

"Just... something" he replied.

"You're blushing" I laughed. "Is it something embarrassing?" I moved forward to see the screen however he closed the lid of his laptop shaking his head.

"Oh my gosh you watching po*n or something?" I laughed.

"No" he shook his head firmly. "It's just something I'm writing"

"Is it like a dirty story? Because these days that bdsm eroticas are in" I informed.

He cleared his throat. "No"

"It is" I teased.

"It isn't"

"Show me then" I challenged raising my brows.

He stared at me thoughtfully for a moment before he lifted the lid and gestured to the screen, I stood beside him and looked at the screen.

"Wow" I whispered in surprise taking in the characters of his book. "That was intense. That's only just a few chapters?" I questioned. The book was based on 5 college students trying to discover themselves. The words were scripted beautifully, it was almost relatable, the words, the feelings, the actions...

"Yeah I'm working on it" he responded answering my question standing up and walking over to the bed and sat down;

I sat down on his chair looking at the screen again. My eyes roving over his words.

"Thanks Desai" he muttered.

"What for?" I chuckled glancing over my shoulder.

"It was your art" he explained. "It inspired me, you looked for inspiration and found it. And that day it was your art that gave me inspiration"

"That wasn't... you don't need to thank me" I chuckled uneasily.

"Your art matters Desai. You wanted someone to believe in it, someone to feel something and that day... I did. It gave me hope and inspiration"

I blinked surprised. "Um...Wow... Thanks I guess"

"That's all you needed to say to a compliment" he chuckled.

"Shut up" I stood rolling my eyes. "I'll see you" I walked past him.

"Hey Desai" he called.

"Yeah?" I looked over my shoulder.

"You're not the girl I assumed you were" he replied.

I nodded. "You're not bad yourself"

He smiled, I retreated skipping down the stairs leaving the house and heading towards my car ready to head home.

Who said ex's can't be friends right! OOo Pari has her eyes on Maan, but never know when Geet's eyes will be on him especially after there interaction of art and writing! Its something in the making thats for sure :) great work!

nice update..
waiting for next update..

nice story
I read it in one go
all chracters r good
waiting for next part

Well I'm loving this maaneet more :D

hi thanks 4 da fantastic update! beautifully written! Geet n Vicky friends! Maan questions Geet! he talk! Pari comes there n Maan leaves! Pari stares at Maan! Geet teases Pari! she offers 2 ask Vicky 2 get Maan n Pari together! Pari warns Geet! Haley upset n Nathan pacifies her! Geet painting! Maan is writing bt hides his work! he lets Geet read it after she assumes order things! she is impressed! Maan thanks her as her painting inspired him! update soon