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Originally posted by: surbhijn106

Hi

Loved ur story outline

Part 1

The devil avtaar of geet and scared maan i was shocked ki koi itna chaalu bhi ho sakta hai bechara maan phas gaya or use 50 rs bhi dene pade ur way of writing was like i could imagine the scene just like my siblings blackmail .maans blackmail for kheer was also good lesson but sweet bhi tha sirf sorry bolke chor dia 😆

Part 2

Their college life is good but very sad ki dono me se kisi ko bhi pyaar ka ehsaas nai hua apni college life me . Waiting for more .

Part 3

Why oh why is geet getting married to that moron dev kyon parents ko itni jaldi hoti hai ladki ki shaadi karne ki bechari geet kaha phas gai dev ke chakkar me apne parents ki wajah se. can feel her sadness for the separation from her parents and country . Love the portrayal of geets dilemma in very little words . Waitng for more.

Part 4

That kutta kamina stupid dev geet ko torcher kar ra hai i can feel it

Kamine ne usko apni family se dur rakha hua hai unse milne bhi nai deta bechare rano or subodh apni beti se mil bhi nai pa rae . Hawww cutie pie tanvi and the pics are cute too. Maans gf is too sweet and maan ne ab geet ko dekhlia hai ab wo dev ko jaroor maza chakayega waiting for that kaminas end and maneets yaariyan .👏👏

Chapter 8

It's weird how everyone feel's their own countries weather in unpredictable lol. Though the British weather is pretty predictable 9 months rain, remaining 3: snow, frost, fog, sunny and warm lol. I think y'day or was it some time back I heard mumbai's rain and train are unpredictable lol. I can't remember the movie though

Maan and scared of a storm, must be bad lol warna he is super MAAN

Oh shucks Tanvi isn't well but Maan and is care, I'm telling you he is giving off the father vibes. But really he is just a caring individual. Dev to maha kutta hair. Wait kutta kukka lukka vedava hai (I think I remembered rightly lol?)

Its hard to stay alone, especially for Geet; single mother (yes single science Dev does shit all lol). So Maan being there makes a world difference

Good Geets going India with Maan, this Dev is extremely weird, I just can't connect with him. However I hate how proud and money minded he is

Chapter 9

I really do the bonding between tanvi and Maan, she is so cute

Eww what low mentality, Dev is such a ugly freak. I hate men like that, the fault lies in him then why on earth is he blaming Geet for it. Oh im so annoyed, argh!!! He so has a filthy mind, disgusting and absolutely despicable, ewww

I'm so glad Geet gave it back, and even more so for associating him with the country he mocks all the time. Good on her, but I don't really get Dev. Dev aint even worth it, Geet should call it quits. This Maan is equivalent to filth, grosses the hell out of me, his thoughts are so narrow. I feel Dev did all that purposefully, he wanted Geet to divorce him and now finally she will.

Maan is a good friend, and super happy and proud of Geet, men like Dev don't deserve a wife like Geet. There's a limit to trying, marriages require both of them to change and adapt and not just one.

Chapter 10

They sure do feel like a couple, caring for their baby but they aren't, well not for long, right? Soon they shall be the Maaneet we all know and love ey? Lol

I love Maan's mum as much as him, they are such kind souls, pure love. I suppose Geet's parents shall be ok with it, it is their child afterall. Which father/mother would want lifelong suffering fror their child and here Geet is one and only, though that shouldn't make a difference but still.

Her decision was tough but I reckon society and norms will make it even worse. I sure hope she comes clean to her parents and they support her decision to leave Dev.

Back to normal Geet, btw Dal badloo is my fav word after that scene, Geet was super cute in that. This was a nice chapter, hopefully the future pans out all well for Geet

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

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