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Posted: 7 years ago

Chap 2

Syte, happy belated birthday or an early b'day in advance, hopefully I remember and come to GF to wish you Rashmi, if I don't then May all you wish for come true and may you always be happy

I love Maan's teasing mum, so she wanted a girl for all the girly outfit. Honestly my household is full of girls, so my crazy and at-times violent nephew is a fresh breeze. But would love to have a niece one day, the mother-daughter clothes is so cute for 1 and 2, girls have way better clothes and toys lol. SO I agree with Maan's mum, girls are way more entertaining than boys lol.

Geet DIL, why do I think that's so going to happen lol

Geet is such a child, but I like her like that. Cute and all. Worlds best tea maker lol, but Maan is right too lol. So its like that is it? Maan defo likes her that's why he doesn't link her with anyone, plus ppor maan freedom gone with Geet joining the same college.

His promise will come true soon, I remember seeing the edits on Lakshmi's page. She'll have a kid right with Dev, curious to know what happens next, i..e how Maaneet end up being one.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chap 3

Aah the marriage, I hadn't expected it to come this quick. What type of wishes did Maan use? Mujhe be batao so I can wish for something for myself and hope it to be as speed lol

Poor geet, though I understand from her parents POV but she's still young and wants to establish herself before marrying, whats wrong in that? Does Geet like like Maan or just like a friend. Because her saying I'll miss you sounds like love to me, am I a lost Maaneetian lol, jaha love nahi hai waha per main love dhood rahi hoon lol

Marriage happened and things seem normal but are there? Geet withdrawals would be sign of something being wrong, I don't know but I reckon she is unhappy and Dev is a dog, of some sort. Hopefully not like Rajdeep, a maha khutta but lets see

Someone of my own to make me happy ahh case solved Dev is defo a neglecting husband, busy man and all I sont like this bad feeling

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chap 4

Where is Dev's parents? But Geets a proud mother of a baby girl aww now she has someone to take care of. I really don't like this Dev, and this aura of being a man. Such men piss me off, you got their daughter so the least you can do is be son-like to them but the whole thing annoys me

Maan visits Geet in New Jersey, finally we get to know what this Dev is really like because frankly speaking I am not getting good vibes from him. He seems like the dirty rogues type and Geet is super secretive too. But daughters generally keep their parents in the dark, don't they which I don't like? But I suppose her parents still got the hint, that she ain't happy.

She's changed so much physically, another sign of unhappy marriage but I'm glad there is a bonding between tanvi and maan

Now Maan and Dev meet, hmm that shall be interesting. Finally geet with be out of that bad marriage. I feel for her parents though, marrying a daughter off to another twon is bad enough but a different country, my that must be hard call. I reckon her parents should have listened to her but they wanted the best for her. But I feel Geet was right and not her parents in this case anyway.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chap 5

Who the f does this Dev think he is? blimey itna rude, mate your just a businessman but the way he is acting like he is some kind of donkey lol, gadda kahin ka

Wait I have a feeling Dev is a sleezebag, using business to cover for the affair he is having. Please tell me I am wrong but it's a classic case, he sounds like that. And that luxurious life crap, tell him to shut his piehole before I stuff it down with nails and claws, gadda. Hate him ewww

Drinking and spending nights with partners ahh now I know why I had Rajdeep creep vibes from this Dev, because he is. BTW this stereotype of Indian girls is so wrong, he reckons they are backwards and didn't want to marry one but for the will he had to. But can I just say his definition of western girls is so very wrong too, the whole concept in his head is wrong. No righteous girl (regardless of western, eastern etc) wouldn't do what he is proposing them to do, it is morally and ethically wrong. Kutta kahin ka

He has the whole concept wrong, partnership and equality comes with marriage but he is a money minded shit that wont understand the concept. Anyway I like Maan trying to change the situation, really feel for Geet but she's tried hard enough, I personally reckon she should call it quits for the sake of herself and her daughter, since Dev obviously deosnt want anything to do with Tanvi.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: its_me

OMG !!!


How low a person can stoop ??? Dev has crossed every limit now...

There is only a limit till which a person can bear... And this time Dev has crossed every limit... Despite of being such a characterless person himself how can he raise a finger on Geet's character...

I am so glad that she has finally decided to leave such a selfish and hypocrite person... It was so good to see that she has finally realised that rather than having a Bad Influence in the name of father... It's always better to not have one...

Also there wasn't much for Maan in this part but the way he has handled Geet at the airport was a proof of him being a matured and understanding person.

But I am really eager to see how her family is going to react... Will she be able to tell the truth ??

Thanks for the password once again and waiting for the next part already ;)



Sorry posted on the wrong thread 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: its_me



Sorry posted on the wrong thread 😉

haha
that was not a issue pooja
It did not matter to me
anyways thanks fr pasting it in right thred
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Posted: 7 years ago
@ Sophie
thanks dear..
You came so early then i expected ..maine socha aur jyada time lene wali ho tum but you did not..😉
Thanks for reading the updates and posting the comments..
Well as kids they are not on good terms as geet is too devilish when it comes to Maan and Maan he is such a cutie pie

he is not typical MSK..here he is just Maan ..The sweet boy next door

No.No Maan doesn't like her at all but may be it's his goodness or the bonding of their families he doesn't want to ruin her image..After all she is a girl..
so he doesn't link her like she links him with nay random girl..
This is SS so tracke will run faster in this story.. waise bhi this is not ant regular or typical romantic story..so i have kept it crisp and clean ..

Geet's parents selected Dev for her ..Though she did not want to get married but surrendered in front of her parents..
Dev parents have died leaving a huge empire for him to rule and he is proud to extend it more Fir her money and business matters the most..
and for Maan and dev's meeting.. umm let's see😆

sometimes parents think that they can take better decisions for their children but they are not always right in what they chose for their kids..same happened in Geet's case
hehe Dev thinks himself some emperor🤣who treats everyone like his slave..
maine pahle hi bola ki silsila waalon ne mera concept chura liya bas raajdeep ko thoda aur jyada creep bana diya dev ke muqaable me..main silsila team par case karne ka soch rahi hoon meri story se raajdeep aur nandu ke characters churaane ke liye.🤣🤣. Kunal bhi kahin na akhin Maan se hi inspired hai
agar dev ka dimad dhang se kaam akrta toh he would have known that he is having world's sweetest treasurewith him in form of geet and tanvi

Umm now you wait for next pw and I will wait for next commet
I may not reply on your all comment but im truly enjoying reading them
Thanks Sopie for the lovely comments❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
chap 6

OK Silsila should so be sued😉 how dare they rip Geet and Dev from you and change them to Nandini and Rajdeep😡😆 BTW i lov ethe name Nandini, didn't even relaise we had a Nandini uptil i wrote a segment of her in one of FF's and that when i was like DUH lol, but DD suits Nandini and Geet, Madhubala was also nice name

ok no love i get it, i'll tell my brain to stop making stuff up. Maan sirf aur sirf ek atcha bacha hai, no love shove for Geet yet😉😆

Maans thoughts are so right, no money can match the love of Geet's and Tanvi. Hasn't he watched Devdas, gadha kai ka😉😆

oh shoots now Maan is also sugar coating the relaity like Geet, once her parents feel out they will feel so bad. i feel for her parents man, been in a similar boat and more than the daughter, it hits the mum/dad way more; im not saying Geet's pain is any less but for a father/mother who raised their girl with all love and care and then comes one day where they realise she is being mistreated/ isn't loved like the way she should be; must be hard to be a parent.

Dev kutta defo having a full fletched affair, i know stereotype thinking but seen it all too many times on telly and in real life to know the symptoms

Maan and Geet have this natural bond, cant wait for them to realise their feelings for one another
Dev- what is wrong with him, i like indian food too, that don't makee you any less modern; such low and stupid thinking. i hate guys that try and change you according to themselves. change yourself and then i shall THINK about changing my habits lol

shoot dhaba wala maan 😆 green chillies and all😉

nice part

PS: can you post a few parts, so will read and comment altogether
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Twenty1st

chap 6

OK Silsila should so be sued😉 how dare they rip Geet and Dev from you and change them to Nandini and Rajdeep😡😆 BTW i lov ethe name Nandini, didn't even relaise we had a Nandini uptil i wrote a segment of her in one of FF's and that when i was like DUH lol, but DD suits Nandini and Geet, Madhubala was also nice name

ok no love i get it, i'll tell my brain to stop making stuff up. Maan sirf aur sirf ek atcha bacha hai, no love shove for Geet yet😉😆

Maans thoughts are so right, no money can match the love of Geet's and Tanvi. Hasn't he watched Devdas, gadha kai ka😉😆

oh shoots now Maan is also sugar coating the relaity like Geet, once her parents feel out they will feel so bad. i feel for her parents man, been in a similar boat and more than the daughter, it hits the mum/dad way more; im not saying Geet's pain is any less but for a father/mother who raised their girl with all love and care and then comes one day where they realise she is being mistreated/ isn't loved like the way she should be; must be hard to be a parent.

Dev kutta defo having a full fletched affair, i know stereotype thinking but seen it all too many times on telly and in real life to know the symptoms

Maan and Geet have this natural bond, cant wait for them to realise their feelings for one another
Dev- what is wrong with him, i like indian food too, that don't makee you any less modern; such low and stupid thinking. i hate guys that try and change you according to themselves. change yourself and then i shall THINK about changing my habits lol

shoot dhaba wala maan 😆 green chillies and all😉

nice part

PS: can you post a few parts, so will read and comment altogether


hehe kitne paise milenge mujhe agar main sue karun to unko?😆

give a break to your high speed running thoght train who just know wants to when they realise their feelings for each other
well.I have already told in prologue that it's Yaariyaan..Not MUhabbaten so no lovey dovey romance between maan and Geet
here you are going to see a a romance which is out of this world
to bolo kitne parts chhaiye
I gave pw for 10th chapter today to my few readers tumhen bhi de deti hoon😳
Edited by gorgeousqueen. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
CH 7
Emotional Update
While having dinner Tanvi was not ready to come to Geet and enjoying her time in Maan,s lap, Maan ki chipku GF 😆😆 loving it. Geet wanted to spend some time more outside enjoy the evening and Maan agreed. Geet first time after marriage shared her problems with Maan and Maan prompted her to come to India , she needs a change and ho sakta hai Dev bhi miss kare apni family ko .Maan trying his best to make Geet understand when Geet was defending Dev and finally Maan had to admit that he heard their talks😕 only then Geet gave up. This Dev is hopeless case 😡, poor Geet kitna kuchh suna chuka hai😡 still Geet is optimistic Geet is scaring to face her parents but consoled her saying they will never misunderstand her and moreover they are dying to meet her and Tanvi. Maan also shared his life with Geet and Geet took the responsibility to find the perfect match for Maan, Geet thinking about Maan,s idea to visit India and hope she will come
Scary and Sad precap
What happened to Tanvi

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