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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Love You too Sweety...
and we readers are thankful to you awesome writers that have kept Maaneet magic alive after so many years...

Sab Maaneet ki hi maya hai jo hum jaise idle logon ko bhi witer bana diya🤣

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

I know right??
Mere ko bakiyo ki wajah se wait krna pad raha...😭🤢

exactly

tumse pahle ki ek aur reader hai Pooja

wo bechaari 8 chapters padh chuki hai

uske pws bhi hold par aa gaye😆

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

exactly
tumse pahle ki ek aur reader hai Pooja
wo bechaari 8 chapters padh chuki hai
uske pws bhi hold par aa gaye😆

Not fair at all😭🤢😭

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#874

Chapter 6

Maan seems to be in a dilemma...he wants to help her but is bounded by certain limits...can understand his situation...But am glad at least he is thinking about her...am sure if any need arises, he will stand by her in difficult times...

Tanvi is surely an angel in Geet's life...if not for her...she must have lost the strength to be in a meaningless relationship with Dev...

Liked how you mentioned Maan's thoughts about Dev...I agree...Dev indeed is the poorest person in the world...he who does not value relationships can never be rich...he needs to understand money is not everything before it is too late...

Maan again is caught in between her parents and her...he does not want to lie but cannot tell them the truth either...but am glad at least he gave them some idea about Geet handling things alone and Dev not spending much time with her and Tanvi...it is good that they have some idea...

Poor Geet is so habitual of Dev's absence in her life that she does not even mind it now...that is horrible...glad that Maan is there now...at least she has somebody with whom she can talk freely...and of course, Maan is always ready to hear about his GF...:D

Geet is still a kid at heart...forced to change because of circumstances...Maan bought her ice cream and she just relished it without even offering him...I guess Maan's devil is resurfacing in his presence...them relishing Indian food at a dhabha was nice...it is a refreshing change for Geet and Tanvi too...loved their whole interaction...lovely scene...

the mirchi scene reminded me of the show...Maan cannot let go of challenges...that was fun scene,...

Precap sounds interesting

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#875

Chapter 7

Tanvi really is a copy of Geet...she likes to be with Maan but likes to tease him too...they have come to share a beautiful bond...really nice to see them together...and the fact that she chose to sit on Maan's lap rather than her mother's lap was lovely...

how come Maan have started to blabber this much...I mean seriously ek bill k badle he gave an entire lecture to him about gentlemanliness...LOL...am sure he is taking revenge from Geet in this way...:P

Felt bad for Geet...each girl dreams of a partner who is there for her, pampers her silly demands...yet all she got is money instead of all these... especially for an outrageous girl like Geet...

Liked Maan's suggestion of visiting India once...this will be a refreshing change for both Geet and Tanvi...and then Tanvi would be able to meet her grandparents too...and even her parents deserve to see their only child...

I liked how he confronted her about Dev...I guess she needs to stop hoping from Dev and come out of her bubble...she should share her pain with Maan...if nothing else...it will make her feel better

felt so bad for Geet...it is true...girls have to adjust so much in the names of this so-called society...they have to let go of their dreams and desires...

Geet being scared of her parents' reactions is also justified...you are bound by so many fears...

Maan's answer to her for not married till now was funny...the thought of another devil in his life must be scary for him...LOL...and now Geet wants to be a match maker for him...hahah

the whole trip to dhabha was nice...

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#876

Chapter 5

Ye Dev tu bahut pahunchi hui cheez nikla 😡, he and his uch vichaar about Indian girls and wifes😡, he himself is ashamed of to be an Indian, will tu Dev ke grandfather ne ki aur bali ka bakra Geet ban gai 😭 at what basis Geet is expecting from Dev when he has offered a divorce, never wanted a baby, such a stone hearted person Dev is, apne baby per nazar bhi nahi daali,😡 why Geet is suffering for such a disgusting fellow😕,I think Geet is not understanding that how this environment will effect Tanvi in a negative way, Tanvi is so adorable getting comfortable with Maan, loving her pics, Maan overheard Geet and Dev,s talk but Geet is unaware of this and was sad and guilty for Dev,s behaviour towards Maan , ab jo banda apni wife aur baby ka nahi usse Maan se kya lena dena, Maan tried his best to make Geet comfortable and guilty free, loved it, I hope Maan will talk to Geet,s parents aur Geet ko bhi samjha paaye

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#877

Chapter 6

Lovely Sweet Update

Maan contemplating about Geet and Dev relationship,in how circumstances Geet is living and managing her , she is really happy with Tanvi and getting used to Dev,s ignorance, Dev taking Geet and Tanvi for granted, jab inhe kho dega tab real value pata chalegi , Maan even lied to Geet,s parents and consoled them , feeling so sad for Geet,s parents

Though Tanvi met Maan only one time still she recognized Maan thru Skype, loved it

Maan again visited Geet and brought her favourite ice-cream , Maaneet both reliving their old days, Maan wanted to have Indian food and both Maaneet with Tanvi at Indian restaurant and both were surprised seeing Tanvi,s reaction being outside for first time, Tanvi wanted to be in Maan,s arms, she is getting attached with Maan, loved it, an Indian couple thought Maan and Tanvi as baap-beti, abhi tu Maaneet ne dhyaan nahi diya what if Tanvi called Maan as papa one day, Dev ko tab chalega ki kya khoya hai ussne, loved their cute moments at dhaba, Maan is right what is stopping Geet , she can come to India at any time, Dev ko tu waise bhi na tu fursat hai na he usse koi matlab hai, why Geet is suffering all alone like this, poor parents wo bhi taras rahe hai

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: preetidhawan
Chapter 6
Lovely Sweet Update
Maan contemplating about Geet and Dev relationship,in how circumstances Geet is living and managing her , she is really happy with Tanvi and getting used to Dev,s ignorance, Dev taking Geet and Tanvi for granted, jab inhe kho dega tab real value pata chalegi , Maan even lied to Geet,s parents and consoled them , feeling so sad for Geet,s parents
Though Tanvi met Maan only one time still she recognized Maan thru Skype, loved it
Maan again visited Geet and brought her favourite ice-cream , Maaneet both reliving their old days, Maan wanted to have Indian food and both Maaneet with Tanvi at Indian restaurant and both were surprised seeing Tanvi,s reaction being outside for first time, Tanvi wanted to be in Maan,s arms, she is getting attached with Maan, loved it, an Indian couple thought Maan and Tanvi as baap-beti, abhi tu Maaneet ne dhyaan nahi diya what if Tanvi called Maan as papa one day, Dev ko tab chalega ki kya khoya hai ussne, loved their cute moments at dhaba, Maan is right what is stopping Geet , she can come to India at any time, Dev ko tu waise bhi na tu fursat hai na he usse koi matlab hai, why Geet is suffering all alone like this, poor parents wo bhi taras rahe hai

Thank u so much preeti for all the lovely comments

Tanvi will call Mann papa one day but in what circumstances ? you have to wait for that😉

I may not reply your all the comments but i m really enjoying them..

Keep commenting like this and let me know how you feel about the updates

Thanks again and Love you❤️

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#879

OMG !!!

How low a person can stoop ??? Dev has crossed every limit now...

There is only a limit till which a person can bear... And this time Dev has crossed every limit... Despite of being such a characterless person himself how can he raise a finger on Geet's character...

I am so glad that she has finally decided to leave such a selfish and hypocrite person... It was so good to see that she has finally realised that rather than having a Bad Influence in the name of father... It's always better to not have one...

Also there wasn't much for Maan in this part but the way he has handled Geet at the airport was a proof of him being a matured and understanding person.

But I am really eager to see how her family is going to react... Will she be able to tell the truth ??

Thanks for the password once again and waiting for the next part already ;)

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#880

Chap 1

I remember the oye lol, inta sara why's. If only he was focused on Y lol, then either maths mein ya phir science main genius hota lol

Though I feel for Maan, but did he do something or is Geet a conventional liar. I love this Geet, the chalak types. She is so cute though and Maan too is adorable, poor guy like Geet said tough body but weak heart lol

So now I know why they are enemies, more so from maan's behalf than Geet. I have a feeling Geet generally likes him, but of course with her blacking and scaring him I dont blame him for not liking Geet at all lol.