MG OS : NEVER MEANT TO BE || PART 2(a) PAGE 16|| JUNE 25

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Start me hi confusion.. If khushi is Maan's daughter how can geet say the otherwise.. and if she's Geet's daughter how did khushi reach Maan 😕
Too much confusion 😆
Anyway Awesome Update 😃
Try updating soon.. warna Ye story bhi bhool jaongi main 😛 😆

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suni_104

@suni_104

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

geet feeling lonely and in pain
geet want her baby
Maan is also in same suition
Khushi a naughty kid
nice update
continue soon

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priya

@jashu08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Wow.. Amazing start.. Waiting for the story to unfold.. Geet pov the way u wrote Damn good.. Thanks for the pm Buddy

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Nice update dear Geet is claiming Khushi as her daughter but Mann told that she is his daughter Geet called her parents to come to her

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Congratulations on your new writings

NYC title

Interesting prologue

Geet claims khushi to be her daughter

On other side maan claims claimskhushi to be his and divya' daughter

Geet is ready to prove that Khushi is hers through all means

Looking forward to the story line

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

NYC start dear

Loved it!!

Geet'sperspective was penned well

Geet had to live a miserable life due to her own decisions

Her parents disowned her and her love cheated her and ditched her fulfilling his lust

Her only happiness is her daughter khushi

Maan was in dilemma and his weaker side made him feel vulnerable

Geet's assured words put him in tight spot

Where is Divya and y his !Other and dadima wants him get married again

Maan played with khushi and was pampering her like a dotting father keeping his thoughts aside

Looking forward to the next update

Thanks for the pm

Do send me pm when ever u update dear !!

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

superb update

how maan geet n baby connected to each other

who is divya

maan is very happy with his baby but have little fear to loose baby

geet is happy that she will get her baby khushi back

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Wow... A story with baby Khushi with maaneet. Dear you write so well and esp when it is babies you are awesome. Not going too much into past you have revealed Geet's heartbreak and her transformation and also Maan's indecisive Ness. But wanna see more of Khushi if possible and also some relief to Geet yaar. But you continue as you always do because I feel you take the story gracefully to its end...

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Geet has a baby girl and her parents were involved in taking her baby away from her now she finds out that Maan has her baby she also confronted him but he believes that Divya gave birth to Khushi

Which means Maan has no idea that his wife lied to him

Looking forward to see what will happen