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Angeline124

@Angeline124

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Nice update
Want Maan to repent badly for hurting geet so much
He is such a selfish creature ever seen
Hate that Chahat too even though she don't even know Maan is married
Feel immense hatred for Maan
Continue soon

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shrithi13

@shrithi13

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Was in tears :( beautifully penned :)

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alekhika

@alekhika20

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Emotional updt,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

hi there! further 2 my comments 2 Part 16 - Geet's pain well portrayed! she had so many expectations! Maan shattered them all! she waited 4 him n wen he came back she got his avoidance n anger n den divorce! she loved him n his family! she was selfless! she left him! hw will she manage all alone? she is all alone! she only knows hw to love! Maan will realise 2 late! update soon

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Ram gautami must have stopped geet

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

I THOUGHT they would threw maan out but geet left

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Geet (whisper) mein kaise apne maan ke dil ko nhi smjh paayi
Wo apne geet ke bina rh sakte hai
Aur hum nhi smjh paaye
This lines r too painful yaar priya

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Maan : forced marriage thi wo
And I don't love you
.
I love chahat
.
Tumhe dikhta nhi
Mein aur chahat kitne khush hai ek sath
.
Jo tum jabardasti humare beech aane ki koshish kr rhi ho
I WANT TO SLAP MAAN FOR THIS LINES