MG *My Papa* PART 10 @Pg 69 ~15th JUNE 2018~ - Page 3

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Congrats for new story, eagerly waiting for update dear
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Fabulous start. Waiting for next part.
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Congratz 4 d new story disha
intrstng part nd nice CS
Hw can HE stoop so low nd blame his wife wit such nasty thing nd her parents also left her alone
bt she stood strong 4 her baby nd facd dem bt cried when she was alone
waitng 4 d updates plz updates soon
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Congo for your new story
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Gusse mai aap kitne cute lagthe hoho 🤣
Ab iss laal chehra ka reason kya hai mommymommy 🤢
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey Madhu good to see you back with this story 😊
who is geet referring too, I definitely hope and know so that its not maan 😉
poor geet even her parents dont support her so sad 😭
interesting update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting n diff concept.its a suspense who Geet's hus who accused her of betraying her.Maan or RK?Hope not Maan.Who hanged d DNA report?How come Geet is Madhu too?plz update soon n pm me
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hi madam
comgrats for new start ...
nice concept ..ab geet ko maan se divorce mat dikhnaplease ..
it should be rk ..
rk throwing madhu out of his life for another girl and maan taking geet aka to his home ..
hope so i am right ,,.

thanks for start
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p.s ...don't start the story if u want to leave it in between ...its just too sad ...its better not to write then leaving things in between
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Fabulous start. Interesting prologue and CS. Loved it. Would like to read more.
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(Banner credits to me😉)


Few things I want to clear!!

1.Geetanjali aka Madhu are same persons.A person may have 2 names na..alias name like that.So plzz don't confuse😛

2.Many don't want Maan to be negative and some don't want Rishab to be negative..I am sorry making Rishab char bad...I planned the characters like that.So can't change it..


Thank you soo much for your likes and comments🤗


PART 2


Soon she,Geet/Madhu was surrounded with bunch of people.They were media and were the die hard fans of the Popular TV Actor Rishab Khundra.She was blessed with lot of curses from his fans.All the fans shouting at her for cheating their ideal/lover/role model Rishab Khundra.She heard enough..now she just wanted death to embrace her and her baby.She lost all the will to live when she heard them cursing her. Soon some policemen came and cleared the crowd.She stood up and started to walk without knowing where to go...she started to feel dizzy and within a moment everything went blank and she collapsed on the ground.Few people called the ambulance and she was rushed to hospital...


City Hospital,MUMBAI


He,Dr.Maan Singh Khurana met her after 8 long years.She looked pale lying in the stretcher.Few doctors rushed towards her and she was taken to examine...


"Dr.Shilpa how is Geetanjali?" asked Dr.Maan entering Dr.Shilpa's cabin.Dr.Shilpa gave a surprised look to him and asked "How do you know her Dr.Khurana?"and in turn received an angry glare from him."umm..Dr.Khurana I can't say she is in a good condition.She looks weak and she has few complications in her pregnancy too.."said Dr.Shilpa."Geetanjali pregnant hai?"asked a surprised Maan."Yes Dr.Khurana..she is 2 months pregnant" said Dr.Shilpa "But how do you know her?" she asked Maan again out of curiosity."She was my junior.. in school" Maan stated the fact "But you are from US na"asked Dr.Shilpa."I did my schooling here and moved to US...and now if ur interrogations are over Can you give me the reports of Geetanjali" asked Maan and Dr.Shilpa handed the reports to him.Oh so only Dr.Khurana understands Hindi and speaks fluently in hindi too thought Dr.Shilpa.He looked through the reports thoroughly and now he to came to know the complications.


"Dr.Shipla where are her relatives?.They must be here right.Have they been informed about her?"asked Maan."Woh..Dr.Khurana I think no one will come here after what happened today" said Dr.Shipha."Why whats the problem?"asked Maan.He was surprised why she was left alone in such conditions and why Dr.Shilpa said none will come.


He came out of his thoughts when he heard the sound of news coming from the mobile.Dr.Shilpa played the that days news in her mobile.In that clearly all the happenings in the court was shown.Geet was tagged as a characterless girl and Rishab Khundra being an actor their divorce news was going viral in all news channels and social media.Maan felt bad for the Geet.He don't know why his heart is not ready to accept that she can do anything like that.


Then he shrugged his thoughts and asked "Dr.Shilpha did Geetanjali get her consciousness?"."Don't know Dr.Khurana I will see and come..app aayenge mere saath?" asked Dr.Shilpa."Yeah I will come" said Maan and both went towards the room where Geet was admitted.


There she sat on the bed looking completely lost.She looked like a lifeless soul.Maan and Dr.Shilpa felt sad seeing her.Dr.Shilpa went towards her and checked her.She was better by now."Mrs.Geetanjali how are you feeling now?"asked Dr.Shilpa.Geet just nodded her head.Dr.Shilpa sighed sadly and asked"Mrs.Geetanjali can you please give your relatives phone number..we have to let them know about you".Dr.Shilpa purposefully didn't mention anything about her husband thinking that it would make Geet more sad.


"Koi nahi hai...no one is there with me.I am an orphan..everyone left me"Geet said in a very low voice.Her face was devoid of any emotion.Maan felt bad seeing her in that condition.He have never ever seen her like this in his school days.She was a bubbly girl,and she would take part in all competitions and ofcourse topper of her class too and not to forget her 1000 watts smile that would make her look more cute. There is no similarity between the Geet whom he know and whom he is seeing now.


Soon someone knocked the door and it was security."Doctor media people have surrounded the hospital.We are trying to control them but they are saying that they wanted to meet Geetanjali..woh that TV actors wife.Should I allow them"he asked."No plzz don't allow them inside.."Dr.Shilpa said.She was fearing for Geet.Already she is not in a good position and meeting all the people and media will make her condition worse which is not good for her and the baby."But Doctor few of that actor's fans are also there..and they are shouting and throwing stones at us."the security said."Then call the Police at once"roared Maan."Dr.Shilpa I will go and check everything.Plzz call the senior doctors and inform them about this" said Maan and walked out with the Guard.


There the media people and the fanatics were trying hard to enter into the Hospital.The Security Guards were also doing their job.Lot of noise and chaos.One side all the fans cursing Geet and the media were recording all the things.Reporters were even bugging the security guards to tell about Geetanjali.One of the fans threw a stone at the hospital and the glass door of the hospital broke."ENOUGH!!"Maan's voice thundered everywhere."Whats going on here.This is hospital not a fish market.Many patients are inside the hospital and why are you creating problem for them?"The whole place became silent for few seconds.


But soon the reporters started to ask Maan about Geet."We are not allowed to give details of our patients and we will not get any info from here..So it would be of great help if you all leave from here silently."But they were not ready to listen to him and till they was were trying to enter the hospital but he police arrived cleared the crowd from there.


Maan returned to see Geet and it pained to see her like that.She laid on the bed.Her eyes were closed but they tears were making their way down.Maybe she would have heard the people shouting her name and giving gaalis thought Maan.He closed the door and left the room silently.

*****


I know this is superb boring part 🥱To avoid sleeping at AN I typed this😆

Sorry for the mistakes😛

So how many of you guessed that its Rishab Khundra who cheated Geet/Madhu?😉

And Maan is not a Business Tycoon in this story😆He is a DOCTOR😉


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