MG *My Papa* PART 10 @Pg 69 ~15th JUNE 2018~

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Sonyaa123

@Sonyaa123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

so sweet story but painful start.waiting for update...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

hi thanks 4 da pm! congrats on the FS! superb cs! intriguing prologue n update! So sad n emotional! Geet shattered! who was she married 2? update soon

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Sad feeling geet husband betrayed her called her child a illigemate so he get divorce her geet heartbroken hope everythibg fine with her and her husband got hus punishment

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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wonderful start

Would love to read more dear..

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

😡 you stated new story but you confused us

Prologue /part hahaha

You posted cs only 3 cs so conform she is geet you mentioned part 1 but who is he maan or rishab

Soon next update

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Nice prologue ..
Pretty well portrayed what you wanted to ..
Would love to read more

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

interesting...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Congrats for new story..
Nice start and Intresting part.. Waiting for next part.. One humble requst please Risabh kundra character ko negative mat karna please Rk right kamina,arrogant rude ho sakta hai show ma lekin geet/madhu ka pati na jo kia wo nahi karega toa please story ma uska itna bura mat banana..

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pillowtalk

@pillowtalk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

I think Maan is suffering from some disease...well written... loved the update... didu...why aren't you replying me...are you angry...with me...if so please forgive me... thanks for the pm...I have already gave buddy request...