Love n Uljhan (Part#7, pg.38) updated! 19/3 - Page 26

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

WOW!!..
I have not word to describe this beautiful creation.. I am too overwhelmed reading it..
You have literally rendered me speechless..
How do you even manage to write something like this??
It all felt so real, as if I was a witness to all the happenings in their lives..
Your gave life to the characters with your exceptional way of writing..
I actually loved it how you chose to write something reality based, & not some sappy romantic drama..
the concept of dowry, bride getting cheated, abusive in-laws, it's something many girls have gone through..
It also somewhat relates to the actual concept of the show..

I had said earlier, ki main wahi story padhti hoon jo mujhe acchi lagti hai, isliye padh liya..
aapne itni baariki se har ek paatr ko darshaya hai apni kahani mein, har ek pehloo ko dhyan mein rakhte hue likha hai.. sach mein di, you've done a commendable job..

P.S- jab main zyada emtional ho jaati hoon, I tend to switch to speaking shuddh hindi, so bare with it..

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

well thank you?😕

☺️

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

By the way di I have two doubts..
first one is geet did not live with her inlaws right?? so why did they keep visiting her??
second Kailash, why the hell did he marry that bitch meenal even after what her family did??

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

pata hai story ka naam sunke mujhe laga tha koi typical mushy mushy lovestory hogi..
Maa kasam waisa hota toh haath bhi nhi lagati..
Mujhe zyada romance raas nhi aata..
yaha par bhi bahut kam uss type k stories padhti hoon, woh bhi sirf isliye, ki unka concept aur writing technique thoda accha hai..
Though sometimes I get overdose of sweetness which is not good for my diabetic self😉
Isiliye I stay away from them.. that is not at all my genre..

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

Itna pheeka sa thank you??
aisa lag raha hai zabardasti bol rhi ho😆

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

Kal bio hai. Parso music hai..

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

iss story ko koi compliment deta hai tho mujhe ajeeb hi lagta hai

can't help it😕