Love n Uljhan (Part#7, pg.38) updated! 19/3

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It's was getting dark n the wind was too harsh taking a step more was becoming almost impossible... taking a deep breath he started looking around for some place to rest in the darkness at least for the night...

"Aree isski tho jaat hi aysi hai!!!

Raising a Dog would have been better than giving him food!"

Before he could knock the door his raised hand halted in the air.. Remembering some memories or words which he didn't know what to term them as.. As pleasant one's or try to ignore the ache they brought with it...

Stepping back from the doorway he located an old garage which was open... maybe this is what he would get this night... stepping inside he made himself comfortable on the floor behind the car the space was just enough for him to keep him warm n away from the stormy night..

Closing his eyes he drifted back to something or somewhere his memories took him to

Flashback*

Memsaab app ye...please don't do all this works... we are here to help u ... n u are paying us for that... please let us do at least this small works...

Looking at her pleading face she laughed out loud handing the saree which was in her hands she raised her hand to push back the hair strands which were falling into her eyes.. All the while making music through her bangles filled hands..

"Lo now do it by yourself happy!!
Radha u are making me a very lazy person... beware this might increase your workload!!" Giggling she left out of the balcony in to her room removing the pallu which was tucked in her waist.. And the other lady started folding clothes

He didn't have a clear memory of what happened after that all he remembered was he was ringing the doorbell n The Memsahib from the balcony opening the door and as the door opened he fell unconscious at the doorstep...

Though he could hear few voices vaguely they were still unclear in his memory...

Meemsaab ye... please don't allow him inside... he n his father are nothing but dirt to our socity...

Shhh Radha we shouldn't bad mouth others like this... its bad...

I'm sorry memsahib but this boy look he stinks of alcohol n is into all bad things... his father is no less than an animal... kamina khurana...

Radha!!

Sorry memsahib but i can't help it they live in our slum only n this khurana duo has a very bad reputation in our people there... i think he came here in an intention of stealing something..

Stop it Radha... he looks so young maybe around 19 or 20.. Boys at this age tend to get influenced by negative aspects more than the positive ones... ok now help me with him n put him on the sofa...

I'll keep the door open ask your husband n kid to sleep in the backyard for today n u stay here for the night...

Ji...

He didn't know how much time has passed n how long he slept...


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Life sometimes gives unexpected things at very unexpected time ... looking at the person who stood in front of him he couldn't make out what exactly should be his reaction that too after waking up to that face...


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something serious...😲

but indeed a pleasant surprise !! 😃


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beautiful start..
he and his father is despised by everyone, considered as dirt by the society.
the only somewhat pleasant memory of the past is that of memsahib...who treated him with humanity.
and he is still in the same state after years, looking for shelter and survival
Is he at her doorstep again..
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new story


Thanks Aparna..😊
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

something serious...😲

but indeed a pleasant surprise !! 😃



Something very very serious😆

Hope i would be able to pull it off without messing it up😕

But missed u M🤗
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

beautiful start..
he and his father is despised by everyone, considered as dirt by the society.
the only somewhat pleasant memory of the past is that of memsahib...who treated him with humanity.
and he is still in the same state after years, looking for shelter and survival
Is he at her doorstep again..


That intro had more to it... But i lost it due to the power cuts last night

But its OK... Hai na😳
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Congrats for new story.
Interesting start but a confusing one. Hope things will become clear as the story proceed.
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So you are back to writing mode..🤗👍🏼
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congo for the new story
waiting to read...
plz pm me...

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