Love n Uljhan (Part#7, pg.38) updated! 19/3

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#241

chalo padh hi lete hai..
jaha itno ne dil toda, waha ek aur hi sahi..

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#242

vl read kal subah subah.. horror story bhi nhi hai toh zyada question bank bhi nhi banungi & comment bhi thoda serious types honge.

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
vl read kal subah subah.. horror story bhi nhi hai toh zyada question bank bhi nhi banungi & comment bhi thoda serious types honge.

read only if you like it

mere liye padne ki koi zarurat nahi hai😆

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

read only if you like it
mere liye padne ki koi zarurat nahi hai😆

aapke saath hasi mazak kar leti hoon iska matlab ye nhi ki aapke liye padhoo..😆
M very choosy while reading..
Jo story accha hota hai wahi padhti hoon..
prologue padhke hi pata chal jaayega story kaisi hai..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
aapke saath hasi mazak kar leti hoon iska matlab ye nhi ki aapke liye padhoo..😆
M very choosy while reading..
Jo story accha hota hai wahi padhti hoon..
prologue padhke hi pata chal jaayega story kaisi hai..

honest response !! I liked it..😆

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 7 years ago

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
aapke saath hasi mazak kar leti hoon iska matlab ye nhi ki aapke liye padhoo..😆
M very choosy while reading..
Jo story accha hota hai wahi padhti hoon..
prologue padhke hi pata chal jaayega story kaisi hai..

tumhari marzi

baad me mat bolna maine warn nahi kiya

this is no where close to enchantress 😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

honest response !!

ya very honest

pata hi nahi chala ki comment tha ya compliment🤣

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

ya very honest
pata hi nahi chala ki comment tha ya compliment🤣

neither comment nor compliment..
kisi ko kaafi galatfehmi thi.. bas unhe sach ka saamna karaana tha..

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
neither comment nor compliment..
kisi ko kaafi galatfehmi thi.. bas unhe sach ka saamna karaana tha..

Achaaa😆

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#250

WOW!!..
I have not word to describe this beautiful creation.. I am too overwhelmed reading it..
You have literally rendered me speechless..
How do you even manage to write something like this??
It all felt so real, as if I was a witness to all the happenings in their lives..
Your gave life to the characters with your exceptional way of writing..
I actually loved it how you chose to write something reality based, & not some sappy romantic drama..
the concept of dowry, bride getting cheated, abusive in-laws, it's something many girls have gone through..
It also somewhat relates to the actual concept of the show..

I had said earlier, ki main wahi story padhti hoon jo mujhe acchi lagti hai, isliye padh liya..
aapne itni baariki se har ek paatr ko darshaya hai apni kahani mein, har ek pehloo ko dhyan mein rakhte hue likha hai.. sach mein di, you've done a commendable job..

P.S- jab main zyada emtional ho jaati hoon, I tend to switch to speaking shuddh hindi, so bare with it..