Love n Uljhan (Part#7, pg.38) updated! 19/3

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nishamna
Starting is indeed very interesting. A young boy was roaming in streets with very bad condition. He was looking for a place to stay and save himself.from the storm n finally he got the place for staying at night and slept in few seconds and lost in the dream of his memsaab.so most probably that boy with bad condition is maan and this memsaab is maan's geet. Waiting for next dear

Now i understand what confusion everyone is talking about 😃

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

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Part #1

June 2007

The strangest thing i felt was my own family weren't taking me seriously... i knew the boy was good n their family had a very good reputation in our circles but the fear n anxiety were hard to ignore... n upon all this my family was behaving strangely... like all this dowry n all weren't a big deal at all...

God i shouldn't have heard to my uncle at all... he was the only reason i booked my ticket n on a pretext of spending time with family i was getting married...

Oh Babaji i don't know why i was smiling n angry at the same time... maybe i knew or maybe not... but whatever Babaji sambhal lena haan!!

My head was bursting with pain... like someone was hitting it with hammer... i knew it was because of my own negligence... god this migraine!

The whole house was full of joy n celebration why wouldn't it be the only girl they had after three generations In their family the most pampered daughter was getting married...

"Mom why are you guys so much tensed for i just don't understand... we have already given them 10lakhs on the engagement day... i mean it's ok mom they can trust us atleast now... it's just we were asking them to wait till the rituals get finished right... i don't understand what's the big deal!!"

"Beta we agreed on giving them what they asked for before the rituals n now it's the matter of pride... u won't understand all this... leave it..."

Looking at her mom getting so much tensed she couldn't understand what the situation was... it wasn't the balance 20 which was bothering her there was something more... coz if it was just money they were wealthy enough to have such an amount to be kept in the locker of their home n sleep peacefully... so it definitely wasn't the dowry

All she could do was to get ready for the big day ahead while her mom walked to and fro in the room sometimes looking out of the window n sometimes trying to call someone...

Her would be was a nice person.. simple and sober... she had met him a couple of times on the pretext of shopping and all... applying kajal to her eyes she looked back to her mom who was whispering with someone on the phone...

All this for some reason was giving her negative vibes... her dad hasn't visited her once in the whole day... all her friends and cousins were sent to beautician... n here she was alone getting decked up in heavy jewellery...

Her heartbeat was rising every passing moment n she knew she was shivering in fear of something very bad

Babaji...

Before she could complete her prayers she had an very unpleasant guest at her door...

The girl in front of her was too proud of something only she knows... this was her very first meeting with her... her only to be sister in law!

Menal!

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Present

Taking a sip of coffee I stood near the window trying to process the latest developments in my life I didn't know how to react to such a news... she hasn't taught me instead she always kept me away from her family issues

He felt it was not the right time to knock someone's door last night so he slept outside... he thought to meet kailash bhai sahib in the morning.. he was the only one who could give him at least some lead..

But Menal was the last person he expected to see at this place... he absolutely hated everything about that women... but now she was kailash bhai's wife!!

Disgusting women must have trapped him into this marriage I thought gripping the coffee mug tighter.. when i slowly felt something crawl on my back to my shoulder... n when turned I found Menal too close to my comfort

My eyes were blood red at her advances as I drank my anger stepping away from her...

She gave me a suggestive look n walked off swaying her hips... n I sat on the empty chair fisting my hand reminding myself that i was here for kailash Bhai sahib...

Closing my eyes running a frustrated hand through my hair i drifted back to the very first encounter i had with Menal

Flashback*

"Itna Gussaa!!" She said widening her brown eyes making them appear more bigger...

"I understand you don't like listening to lectures but i just asked you to atleast clean yourself up!" She said clearing the cutlery i just broke in my anger

What does she think of herself i know she let me sleep in her house last night but that doesn't mean she would give me all that shit about how to live my life... dumb women!!

"Aahhh!!"

"Tu ye..." gulping down his words on looking into those eyes he felt atleast she was one of the women he should give a little respect to

she had a cut while picking up the broken pieces... he could see the blood flowing though she tried to hide..

She calmly trashed the mess he created and brought another plate of breakfast... and he felt it was better for him to keep his mouth shut or else he would be shown the door next moment n god knows when will he get a proper meal next time..

He was so damn hungry that when he saw her giving him a glass of juice he was about to curse her when he heard someone doing it on his behalf

The other lady who just entered was looking quite modern in her Jean's and top unlike the owner of this house...

"Why??

I mean really now... you were so desperate that you had this begger last night... how cheap of you bhabhi!!" She said giving me a dirty look

"Menal!!"

"Why bhabhi did i say something wrong... Wasn't this stinking nasty creature here in your house... if you were so desperate you could have someone atleast of our class... hai na..." she said trying to act all innocent pulling out one of the chairs giving me a glare

"Menal how could you think so low... chi"

"Oh please bhabhi don't... I'm really tired of your satisavitri act now...

N ye gutter se utha k kachre ko sedha dining table par bitha diya... iss ki aukad hi kya hai

Such a low people should die somewhere not try and reach the moon...

I better go and have a bath again..."

She hurriedly left making faces leaving her and me...

Flashback ends*

I opened my eyes to see Menal leaning on to me sitting on the arm of the chair... i wonder what has changed in these years...

I pushed her off the chair when she tried to touch me.. while she landed on the floor shamefully...

Maan! She yelled getting angry at her insult...

I folded my hands at my chest n gave her a look with a smirk on my face

She got up furiously not bothering to adjust her misplaced clothes

"Char angrezi k bol kya sekhliye u think have become a hero... or is it your silly job... is that where this attitude comes from haannn...

Remember maan hamare tukdo pe pale ho tum...

Aukad mat bhulo apni..."

Taking a step ahead he got hold of a fist full of her hair pulling them back harshly making her hiss in pain he spoke dangerously close to her face

"Shukar manao...

Mai apni AUKAD pe nahi aya...!!" He pushed her out of his way and walked out... how could a married woman behave like this that too with him...

Just at the gate he bumped into kailash Bhai sahib but he made an excuse n asked him to meet him near his office... his own mood wasn't that better so he instantly agreed as he didn't want to face that woman again in the same day!!

To be continued...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 9 years ago

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kabslocks
Nice update.

Thanks for reading 😃

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: aparna3011
nice update

Thanks for reading Aparna 😊

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nishamna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Honestly I am confused reading this part. Initially a girl was upset as her parents are making her married with a man who is nice but along that his family is demanding dowry. Though they are enough wealthy to give all that stuff which they are demanding , the girl wasn't happy.

In present maan was worried for someone who keeps him away from her family matter.menal is such a disgusting woman. In past she was accusing her bhabhi unnecessary seeing her giving a poor some shelter and food. And in the present menal is trying to intimate with the same man . he pushed her down and left from there. Waiting for next dear.

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spoorthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nishamna
Honestly I am confused reading this part. Initially a girl was upset as her parents are making her married with a man who is nice but along that his family is demanding dowry. Though they are enough wealthy to give all that stuff which they are demanding , the girl wasn't happy.
In present maan was worried for someone who keeps him away from her family matter.menal is such a disgusting woman. In past she was accusing her bhabhi unnecessary seeing her giving a poor some shelter and food. And in the present menal is trying to intimate with the same man . he pushed her down and left from there. Waiting for next dear.

This is what i wrote n

That's exactly what you understood... tho confusion kya hai??

Ab tho I'm getting confused with all the confusion wale comments

I think i need help!!😔

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 9 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

was it Geet in the past, who few years back already got married by her parents to a guy...

the suspense about who is Geet is increasing now..😆

and there was something fishy about the whole marriage..the way her own parents were behaving and that too for the marriage of their most pampered daughter, as if they were forced to marry her off along with dowry..

she was not prepared for the marriage, but had to agree for it..

at least the guy was nice from the meetings she had with him before the marriage..

it seems the negative vibes really turned out to be true in her life..

so she was the one, the memsaheb who was kind to maan and provided him the shelter in the past...

and he felt respect for this woman when everyone else had shoved him away like dirt...looks like she has greatly impacted his life too..

Meenal toh is like ultra-vamp character 😆

she accused her bhabhi, now the way she is behaving with maan...

loving the way the storyline is progressing with the past and present in parallel...unfolding the story and connecting the dots of past and present, by revealing a little more with each update

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jasika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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tooba ilyas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Hmmm... Something fishy and serious too...

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nadia khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

congo on thenew story plzzz dont leave it incomplete iif possible complete ur other stories to really intense diff unlike u try to be comic dear so maan and his dadis despised by the society its so easy for ppl to judge without knowing the whole truth maan is just thankful to the memsahab ewho gave him shleter despite knowing abt him but it seems he is back to her he is grown up but still the same

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