Love n Uljhan (Part#7, pg.38) updated! 19/3 - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Chapter

In past after Geet received the phone call though she wanted to do something but time and circumstances were against her her parents were not even present when she was made to sit
at the mandap she tried stopping tried protesting but none would hear her out and maybe due to hate or jealousy her aunt made sure she had gotten married only then her parents arrived distraught at the very thought and sight that their daughter married perhaps the wrong guy
but worst happened as she lost her father so it seems her in laws and newly wedded husband too left her
but now the Khurana boy who has been taking job at wealthy families homes was looking for her and maybe now after such a long time he gets to hear her voice


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Posted: 8 years ago
Part#6



After 5 Odd jobs and 3 trials at some random organizations he managed to get himself a proper job... well almost coz that was nowhere close what he has been doing all these years and not even close to something he studied but he was positive, as he still had something positive to look forward to... Her! His sahiba...She was coming back


He had a hope that the previous interview he had given would earn him the job... his current employer had given him work which would take him almost the whole night to complete as the second hand laptop which was given to him by his boss which got stuck every hour... stirring the hot tea he got back to the table which was in the corner of his house beside the window which opened to the wall of the next apartment... the buildings in his locality were all too close to each other and were too old to even bother paint... he was thankful to his flat owner that he was given a grace time of 2 months to clear the dues


Picking up the papers from the table he looked through the contents not really reading as his thoughts these days were always wandering...


He remembered that he was very disturbed that day he for once didn't want to get drunk and refused to help Radha in any work... he just sat here leaning against the pillar for god knows how long... even radha left tired of his odd silent behavior...


When he finally looked up she saw her sitting on her wooden chair listening to some songs on her walkman (music player) her feet moved to the rhythm creating a faint sounds of her payal... there was a faint smile playing on her lips and her eyes were closed head leaning back.. the evening breeze moved her locks were falling on her face... she looked so calm and divine wrapped in deep red colored saree...


After a few minutes she removed her earphones and looked at him..


Baba Margaye... he said his voice was so rough he noticed that statement was literally devoid of all emotions He hated himself at that moment, for not feeling anything for the person who gave him birth...


She didn't say anything if not her missing smile he would have assumed she didn't even hear him... After a while he got up to leave and she went inside...


She never asked him questions or tried to console him... he learned to deal with her silence and her indifference there were times she would shut every one off and be lost in her own world which none of us neither understood nor tried to interfere...


His father was altogether another issue... sarasvati kaki tried to push her daughter more towards him those days assuming he would be mourning his father he thought back with a smirk.. of course he understood her intentions very well but he refused to take advantage of that young girl who was just acting upon her mothers commands..


The truth was there was nothing between him and his father there interactions ware too minimum to be counted on fingers... He was just any other person and it took him few days to realize that there was nothing to feel sad about and he was disturbed coz he couldn't connect to the person who died and didn't want to acknowledge him as someone even remotely related to him let alone his father...


Dinking the now cold Tea he got back to his work... After almost an hour and close to midnight he heard someone knocking his door... confused he double checked the time saving the file he walked to the door stumbling over the chair hurting his knee he cursed himself for not pushing it aside after eating... he opened the door to find two well dressed men looking too tough glaring at him...


Madam asked us to get you...


Ofcource she would! sighing he ran his hand over his face and looked back at them Give me a minute he told them and went in asking them to come in politely which they refused... he packed his laptop and all the papers back in the bag and stepped out of his door locking the door behind walking with them... slamming the car door with a bang he tried to show he was annoyed... but that gained him a very opposite reaction Aditya burst out laughing and the other guy was smiling secretly trying hard not to laugh...


Well that was the problem with Adi he laughed at all the anger fits he showed he somehow found maan's anger funny... Ok he wasn't really angry or annoyed it was more of trying to cover the excitement building in his heart... The moment he saw Adi at his door step he Understood She was Back... After nearly two and a half months from that phone call she was really here!


She choose a house at outskirts of the city and he had expected that much from her... Adi directed him to the study room and retired for the night... it was clear that he was worn out for the day and he needed rest


Stepping in he glanced around a very messy room the files were out of the racks the coffee table and the couch was filled with papers and books... there was an empty pizza box next to the couch other than that there was window facing the backyard and a table with Pc and few files which were left open he placed his bag down and made some place for himself on the couch and cleared the coffee table moving all the stuff to the chair for now... he opened his laptop and started working... though ignoring his hard thumping heart was a bit difficult but he somehow managed to concentrate...


He knew She stepped into the room stopped for almost a minute and walked to her disk and started working...


This was hard harder than he thought it would be...

To Be Continued...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 6

it was sad, but very well depicted the feelings of Maan.
with his father, there is a relation but no attachment, no feelings...
and then there is this Memsaab, there is no relation but still there is an attachment that finally he broke his silence to her..
Geet's silent response intensifies the mysterious aura around her where she confines her feelings and thoughts to herself..
and now the time has come after so many years which he was eagerly waiting for..where was she all this time and what will happen when they meet again.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update! superbly written! feeling 4 Maan! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 6

it was sad, but very well depicted the feelings of Maan.
with his father, there is a relation but no attachment, no feelings...
and then there is this Memsaab, there is no relation but still there is an attachment that finally he broke his silence to her..
Geet's silent response intensifies the mysterious aura around her where she confines her feelings and thoughts to herself..
and now the time has come after so many years which he was eagerly waiting for..where was she all this time and what will happen when they meet again.


Hmm ab wo aagai hai
Hope she has answers...

On a second thought i doubt she would give us any😆

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for reading😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

Thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

lovely update! superbly written! feeling 4 Maan! update soon

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