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hi there, please try n update! thanks

soon will start reading...
not getting time during weekdays...

Glad that you extended this story. First time when I read I felt they should have been together.
Nice prologue. Both were spellbound seeing each others' beauty. She thought that if she would have beautiful then he would have talked to her. And he thought that he lacked that confidence he has and lost in his beauty.

part 1 - again they met by coincident. he had to lend his bike and travel by bus. he was surprised to see her their sitting. he forgot to take seat beside her while gazing at her the whole journey. geet too noticed his continuous looking at her...will he accompany her daily like this.?

part 2 - nice lines of song. it goes with the chapter. they again 'almost' met after a long time in mall. they saw each other from the distance. she was hurt assuming that that girl must be his girlfriend. seeing her made his day but seeing him a girl made her day gloomy.
I think maan should make a move, at least, for a talk in starter.

part 3 - oh...this song is perfect for him. he was searching her everywhere they met. but he had no luck to see her glimpse once. she too wanted to clear her restless assumption and dared to start convo when they will meet again. good progress though.

part 4 - nice song lines that suited her. that she came to him as she decided. but...hope that was not his dream and she was really there. may be that she came to buy books and surprised to see him there. but happy the destiny made them meet again

part 5 - finally they talked. and that was not any dream. she initiated the convo. glad that he didn't wasted this chance and told her in brief about himself. omg. he told her that he was available...lol.. and asked about her too, which he already knew. he gave his no as he could not ask hers. but he missed to ask her name...
I liked you "Lub. Dub. And Lub again" 😃

I thought he will accompany her or ask her to walk with her...?

part 6 - bhaage re mann kahin...nice selection of song again.
she was on cloud nine knowing that he was single, she now know his name & his number...she was happy and she knew soon they will meet again...
kay maan ne dekha hai geet ko barish me bheegte hue...vo bhi sath hota to... 😉