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AshelySpinelli

@TJ_spinelli

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Nice update

geet is very happy as she got knw maan's name nd number nd mreover he himself confirmd dat he is single

waitng 4 d nxt part update soon

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@Endgame

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

so sweet update Geet is in cloud nine because now she has his number more of all he is single wow one of my fav song thnx 4 update

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

So beautifully written update. You are so good with words. Geet is so happy as she got name and number of Maan. She started dancing in the first rain of season in the mid of empty road.

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Lovely part
glad to see Geet did not think otherwise rather celebrated it amidst rain

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Read Chapter 5 & 6. Absolutely magical. They finally spoke, but the connection was made long back. Just needed a look! It feels like they are in a bubble, so much aware of each other, and the world faded into oblivion.

And the songs you pick!! Absolutely awesome! The perfect lines that bring life to the scene!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

beautiful update...
the feel it created and the way she expressed her delight..
as if the nature wanted to take part and twofold the happiness felt by her heart...
the song was perfect too..that reminds me another one..
Bawara mann dekhane chala hai ek sapana...:)

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

lovely cute update geet is dancing in joy she is getting drenched in rain happy to met maan getting his number she knows he is single as mr despo himself told her but now she just needs the courage to call him and talk to him

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Geet is enjoying her new found feelings towards maan in rain she is happy thinking that she does know his name and phone no...waiting for next part

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Its so beautiful and natural. ..

Travelling daily and passing by such strangers whom we meet more than once , can really be amazing , as ur way of writing describes...

I liked it so much..

Maan and Geet seem deeply attracted to each other. .

And their not so planned meetings makes it interesting to read ..

Last part where maan says he is single , I was actually happy that he mentioned it .. Geet's mind is clear now .. Why can't she call him ..she can , who knows she need some other book soon ..

Cont soon

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Mahikipari

@Mahikipari

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Year how I miss it
It's so dreamy
simple si story jo kissi ki bhi ho sakati hai
just love it dreamy n song choose perfect
with story line
my heart singing mahiii

Love u dear for such wonderful story
mahi

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