Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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neel11

@neel11

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#771

Very sad man gone and geet what about her plz update more waiting for the next update

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#772

i loved the way maan went to rshods

n made them scared

threatened to give the money back

geets w8..for him

n their milan..it was way too romantic

but y maan left her

im still confused

he made it all special for her in the morning

it seems like suddenly he changed his mind to leave her

geet couldnt bare that he left her

n the pain hit her chest..

thats so sad..

but somewhere i expected geet will not survive

nice part..

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: neel11
Very sad man gone and geet what about her plz update more waiting for the next update

this is last part .. u shouldnt wait for next 😆

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: vrinda22
i loved the way maan went to rshods
n made them scared
threatened to give the money back
geets w8..for him
n their milan..it was way too romantic
but y maan left her
im still confused
he made it all special for her in the morning
it seems like suddenly he changed his mind to leave her
geet couldnt bare that he left her
n the pain hit her chest..
thats so sad..
but somewhere i expected geet will not survive
nice part..

thanks 😃

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: RM14
Oh! ok got it..
chalo as you wish ..hmm agar type karne ka hi man na kare tab toh yahi decision theek hai..😆

phir toh nayi story tak i am waiitnggg.😛

yeah will come back after some time 😉

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#776

superb update

i know not all stories are happy ending

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#777

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! superbly written! Maan goes n meets the Rathods, they r shocked n pretend 2 b innocent! Maan taunts them n threatens them! he wants his money back! Geet worried abt Maan! Maan is back! Geet relieved seeing him! Maaneet become one! Geet confesses her love!

Epilogue - sad ending! wonderfully written! Geet awakens n cribs nt seeing Maan! she thinks he is so unromantic! he leaves a note! Geet wait 4 Maan! he doesn't come back! she sees another note! Maan left! he explains that they r nt meant 4 each other! he has 2 fulfil his dad's dream! Geet stunned n shattered! she has a relapse! Geet dies! 😭 Not all stories have a happy ending!

thanks 4 an amazing FF! Defn want sequel 2 and another FF frm u😊

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#778

Unresed my post and

sure Amna come with new story

after a break..haan👍🏼

thanks for pm dear.😃

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#779

Maan is mad aft all this he left her

y will he leave her it doesn't make sense

he knew she was still not strong enough

how will Geet live with that

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#780

Maan finally met the Rathods wanted the money back that Geet paid them and also told them that soon they'll be arrested

Geet telling Maan she has accepted him as her husband but he still did not accept her as his wife , everything action of Maan's reflected his love for Geet even though he did not say the words .

Maan and Geet becoming one

I somehow at first thought maybe again he has been kidnapped

Him leaving to life his fathers dream

I suppose he would come back for after he is successful

So this is Geet's longing

Thank you for such a fabulous story