Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: sagorika93

are u going to update now ? really ?

😃😉 I was checking if someone's there .. Update is ready 😉 so yeah !!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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vandy28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#473

oh god...seriously sometime i wonder how can u write such part...n look like u r expert in such scenes😆😆

sorry dear but seriously this part come was not what i was excepted...haha...i was thinking some confrontation or something emotional...but ur story is always lighted n it does make people smile...i did smile after reading this spclly ur note😆😆 bachi badi ho gayi h 🤣

part was too good...geet was right for taking time but woh toh pyaar mn andhi h kitni der tak bhav khati...raat ko hi chali gayi...whole thing was cute...how she confessed indirectly and maan giving back his dialgue

chalo giving last update comment here only...last three part was superb ...how geet reached to save maan n than maan n geet going to maan old home...geet told him that she heard tara n maan talk but when maan question back did she listen whole talk...than she realise may b there is something more...maan came drunk n geet feel bad n angry too ...thinking what happen to her maan...how he get involve in illegal activity n how easily he can kill people n by mistake she also did...but than maan bring that man back n he is alive too...finally they decided to come mansion n where tara appeared n shocked to see geet alive...n loved how geet said i m mrs khurana...finally she took stand fr herself but again gone back in her shell n kept silent and maan give best reply to tara n finally asked geet to give their marriage a chance...😃😃

uff done...big comment😉

Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago