O Saathi Re (4) MG SS * EPILOGUE 1, pg 67 ****** - Page 51

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tanya94

Hey...I am a new reader and I would like to read this ff from the beginning..?how do I get access?


once i am done
the story is gone
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice treaser on page 1 please can have the link to part 1

thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
pls try n update, thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
now waiting for this - epilogue 2 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
any possibility of an update?? ?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

any possibility of an update?? ?


epi kaise likhu? Hubby exams ki taiyari mein busy hai toh Avi is down
Edited by dqno1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

TEASER


Dev averted his eyes not able to see the hero worship in Tara's eyes.

He felt terrible already about what had occured.

She was in trouble in the jungle and he had lost consciousness.

When he had to be strong, he had become so weak and helpless.

He was no one's hero here.

She was in capable hands now. Maan and Geet could do much more for her than he ever could.

With a heavy heart, he moved to the door.

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"Tum kya samajhte ho Maan, ye ladki tum se impressed hai, tum se pyar karti hai? Uss ke mann mein Khurana's ki daulat aur jaagir ki koi laalach nahi hai? Bewakoof ho tum Maan!! Aissi ladki khud se pyar karti hai, apne fayde se pyar karti hai ..", Daadima screamed in anger.


She turned to Geet haughtily, "Ye sab, ye estate, ye hospitals, ye Madhavpur ka ghar aur zameen jaidad sab humara hai, samjhi tum! Raj mera beta tha aur usne sab mere naam kar diya tha".

"Tsk, tsk, tsk Savitri DEVI .. ", Geet scoffed saying in a sing song voice, " .. aisa lagta hai jaise aap ki umar ke saath thode brain cells kaam karna bandh ho gaye hai. Baap ka inheritance apne bete ka hota hai, na ki uski SAUTELI ma ka".

"Dekha Maan dekha tumne? Kitni badtameez aur badimaag hai ye ladki. Jab tumhare Ma Papa ko ye mana nahi saki toh tumhare paas aayi hai apna jadu chalane. Tumhare jhaase mein mera pota nahi aane wala hai. Chali jao yaha se Geet. Get out from here!!" Daadima said pointing to the door.

A/N: Showdown coming.

Do like and comment to read the last part.

I am not sure about an epilogue .. so many of you are hardly reading the story.


loved the teaser would love to read the chapters ...could you send me the passwords and blog link...
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi there! Pls update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#6633cc">will b waiting </font>


sorry dear
iss waqt bilkul writing ka dil nahi kar raha hai 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

now waiting for this - epilogue 2😊



hi 😃

I am thinking of reposting this story

lets see if anyone wants to read it
epi 2 probably will be ready for that
😃 😊
Edited by dqno1 - 8 years ago

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