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Posted: 7 years ago

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Punar Vivah (Rashmi)


A beautifully emotional story brilliantly crafted by Rashmi. Hats off to Rashmi for taking up such a sensitive social concept of Punar Vivah & Reincarnation and handling it with such depth, sensitivity and maturity. A brilliant masterpiece and an emotionally gripping story in which I lost myself. I just could not stop once I started.


The backdrop for the journey of Yash, Maan, Geet, Arpita, the Khuranas and The Handas was set very brilliantly by Rashmi. I loved each and every one of the characters present in the story as they were there for a crucial reason & played very pivotal roles. Right down to Suresh & Meena. All of them were so intricately characterized with such care, maturity and depth. None of them were even remotely irrelevant or flimsy in any sense. Even Adi, Pinky & Rohit. I hated Tayiji & Suman so much for the cruelty, evils & venomous deeds but even they got their well deserved fate & punishment at the right time. So the story was very focused and emotionally gripping for me.


The characterization of the Khuranas and the Handas were so beautifully done. I loved their relationship, bonding, care and respect which never wavered but only strengthened over the years. They stood by one another through their loss and tough times supporting & respecting one another. They always had such understanding, respect & unconditional love for each other & their children. They stood by their children through everything, supporting them, being their pillar of strength & support. Similarly Yash, Maan, Geet & Arpita were so carefully characterized so that it paves the way correctly for Maaneet's journey after their loss, their Punar Vivah and the reincarnation which happens thereafter. I especially loved the way Maan & Geet were characterised in this story.


Yash & Maan were twins and their parents had chosen Geet & Arpita as brides for them respectively. Their decision was carefully thought out after analyzing the character and nature if Yash, Maan, Geet & Arpita. But God being the master story writer is the one who decides whose destiny lies with whom. And that is precisely the reason for the loss of Yash & Arpita in an accident. This loss of Yash & Arpita was the biggest turning point in the lives Maan, Geet, Khuranas & Handas. Especially for Maaneet. The journey of Maaneet towards their Punar Vivah begins with their loss...


I loved the way Maan always stood up for the right things and never bowing down to the inhumane things done in the name of rites, social norms and ways of the society. So I was applauding him all the way when he saved Geet and his family from Tayiji's vicious deeds. That was absolutely brilliant. I absolutely loved the way he stood up for Geet and his family at the nick of time without succumbing into his own grief...Took such tender loving care of Geet, being her pillar of strength & support and fulfilling Yash's wish for her to be a top notch designer. In that time Maan discovers his love for Geet but was always suppressing it for fear of her reaction, her rejection and what she would think of him. He did not want Geet to lose her trust & faith in him nor risk losing their friendship. He had always wanted a friend & a soulmate in his wife. And he was only able to find that in Geet. So I was literally clapping my hands when Maan & Suresh exposed Tayiji & Suman and Maan married Geet in front of the whole world. And there begins Maaneet's journey of love.


Although Geet was "forced" to marry Maan, he never put any pressure on her or had undue expectations from their relationship. He respected her space & the need of time for her to get adjusted to the idea of their marriage. He always assured her that the basis of their relationship was always their friendship, faith & trust in one another. Their honest & open communication about every single thing is so admirable. Be it related to Yash or Arpita and what place they have in Maaneet's lives. I loved each & every one of their conversation...that trust they have on one another...the faith, understanding each other even without words...holding on to each other throughout their journey...Maan is truly a gem of a person because he valued each & every feeling of Geet. He always put Geet first and then comes everything else. It was then that Geet started discovering her feelings towards Maan. Maan had always been open with Geet. Be it about his relationship with Arpita or is related to Geet's relationship with Yash. Maan never hid it from Geet as he respected her so much. He never hid a single thing from her. Even when their rehashes of past hurt Geet he was always there holding her, comforting her and being there with her all the way...His reason is simple...she deserves to know. I just loved it. For Geet this was a journey of self discovery...of her own feelings and love. Her love for her Maan.


How much both of them understood each other...even without a single word...such understanding, trust, faith, always being there for each other as a pillar of support & strength...not just for themselves but to everyone else who are connected with them. Be it even Suresh & Meena...or Adi...I loved their journey together hand in hand...Be it as a couple in coutship...Just loved the way they wanted to get married again as it was Geet's wish to marry wholeheartedly after their confession of love for each other...And for Maan nothing can be more important than his Geet's wish. The extent to which he went to do their engagement, haldi, sangeet and finally the marriage secretly without anyone's knowledge...That was really so so so dreamy...Or be it their loving marital relationship...Such constant teasing and romance:) I would say that they are truly made by God only for each other as soulmates. Their journey into parenthood was really so cute & adorable. With Geet's cravings and mood swings. And Maan always caving in to her demands:):):) Blessed with twins, Maaneet and their families are so overwhelmed with joy.


That is when the story brings on the twist of reincarnation and yet another Punar Vivah. This time for Yash who is reborn as Maaneet's son and Arpita born as Kirti elsewhere. How hard Maaneet tries to get Yash to forget even the slightest memory of his past...And they do succeed...Until Yash meets Kirti and falls in love with her while studying. So when he finally brings her home...Maaneet and their families are in for a shock...Their past is rehashed once again. I really admire the way Maan handled the whole thing...How he found out about Kirti being the reincarnation of Arpita...the way he sought Yash & Kirti's promise of their love for each other if faced with a storm...and how he broke the truth to all. That was a brilliant master stroke in the story. So it was a Punar Vivah not just for Maan & Geet but also Yash & Kirti (a.k.a. Yash & Arpita).


One thing I loved was the relationship that Suresh & Meena shared with Maaneet, Khuranas and the Handas. How they were always thought of, treated as & respected as family despite being employees. How Maaneet had supported them especially Sameer's studies...And when Sargam falls for Sameer...although Sameer loved Sargam he rejected her as he was thinking of their position in the society and he did not want to betray Maaneet. But I loved the way Maaneet & their families considered Sameer as their own son and arranged for Sameer & Sargam's alliance. That was just awesome yaar!


This is truly a masterpiece of a story & I love it so much. Thank you Rashmi for such a beautiful love story.



Thank U so much Indra for the lovely lovely comment,.🤗
Mera dil garden garden ho gaya😆😆

If you truly ask me I never thought that I was going to touch the most sensitive issue of the society..Like Punarvivah and reincarnation..It was just a thought to write a story where Maan and Geet both were married to other partner and then their Punarvivah..In every story either maan was married or geet was married..one of them was mostly single and I wanted to show both of them married...This was the basic concept..
after reading your first part of the commnet I thought abput that and then realised that yeaahhh..I have touched few sensitive issues of the society and I was so relaxed that I could finish it without any disputes between readers and writer..
Everyone accepted my story from the bpttom of their heart..Initially I had thought that it wou;d end in 20 or more parts..but wo kahte hain na ki manjilen justi gayi aur Karaan badhta gaya
readers started to give their suggestions and they also demanded for the Maaneet romantic senes from the show but in my style.. \and I did not disappoint any one..and see the end result
It turned out as a fantastic journey.. lakshu called it a classic tale of Maaneet and I agree to it...it was really a classic tale of Maaneet..very different very unique where there was No MU between maaneet..there was a lot of trust on each other..there was no third angle after they got married..It was just and only Maaneet..Reincarnation track was developed later as i had not planned it initially.. but then I thught. Why only Maaneet Punarvivah.?.Why not yash and Arpita's Punarvivah too...
They both should get the due place and respect for their characters.
so then reincarnation happened..and here I want to add that this reincarnation track was based on my own experience,,it's not some fictional track..though few readers did not like this track but I wanted to make the cycle of Punarvivah complete and I m happy that I was able to convince the readers
Thanks U once again Indra for this much elaborated comment..I Just loved it❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Will write essays later..Coz like your threads I also need breaks..Har update k baad thread complete 😆
Edited by Sonia.KN - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Will write essays later..Coz like your threads I also need breaks..Har update k baad thread complete 😆

Thank u sonia
and will be waiting for your essey.. but it should not be a summary of the story😆😆😆
I want to know what you felt while reading Punarvivah😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome story
😊 Loved it.
Edited by WissamAshishi - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: WissamAshishi

Awesome story

😊 Loved it.

Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi such a beautiful soul story that has all the elements love sadness emotional drama what does is not there. thanks for giving us such a beautiful story. thank you
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Originally posted by: sss333

Hi such a beautiful soul story that has all the elements love sadness emotional drama what does is not there. thanks for giving us such a beautiful story. thank you

Thanks a lot Tripple S Tripple 3😆
Yess this story has every element that is needed to make ia a good fiction
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Posted: 7 years ago
first of all thanks for this lovely story . u make it very well story , because of you people (writer )we still feel connect to our maaneet, i know its crazy , but fans are always crazy so do we are😳
about story i read till yash and arpita died before 2 years , and remaining i stared read it before 4 days yesterday i finish remaining story . It's so touchy yar , i mean i have shortage of word to tell you how wonderful creater writer you are . specially epi its almost 7 part omg . superb
there are some changes i really wish want but it's only my wish or say imagination please don't take wrongly , as everybody know geet not sharing any husband and wife relation same way some fan want it from maan also , i know that there is no need of this complain now , but instead of geet arpita should have that character of naive its may be suit her , and for yash it's can like he want to concentrate on his career so he need some time , i know its totally your story and its ended now but when i come to read in some point i expect this things, so in that process both maaneet will share same relation
but anyway your story is best i really love it i m just sharing my view and nothing as m not writer but reader only
and i love one part that end of story family come to know that maan love geet from starting i mean after arpita died , which i really wanted 👏
thanks once again for this lovey story
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mayashrisawant7

first of all thanks for this lovely story . u make it very well story , because of you people (writer )we still feel connect to our maaneet, i know its crazy , but fans are always crazy so do we are😳

about story i read till yash and arpita died before 2 years , and remaining i stared read it before 4 days yesterday i finish remaining story . It's so touchy yar , i mean i have shortage of word to tell you how wonderful creater writer you are . specially epi its almost 7 part omg . superb
there are some changes i really wish want but it's only my wish or say imagination please don't take wrongly , as everybody know geet not sharing any husband and wife relation same way some fan want it from maan also , i know that there is no need of this complain now , but instead of geet arpita should have that character of naive its may be suit her , and for yash it's can like he want to concentrate on his career so he need some time , i know its totally your story and its ended now but when i come to read in some point i expect this things, so in that process both maaneet will share same relation
but anyway your story is best i really love it i m just sharing my view and nothing as m not writer but reader only
and i love one part that end of story family come to know that maan love geet from starting i mean after arpita died , which i really wanted 👏
thanks once again for this lovey story


Thanks maya for resuming this story and liking it..
as you wished Maan to stay virgin as geet was
but i don't have any reason to do that.. they were happily married to their partners so what was the need not to start their married life.. Every arranged marriage starts the same way..
they did not know that their fate was going to change. They were like every ordinary married couple..
Arpita wasn't naive that's why she was selected for Maan because Maan was a man who used to get angry easily
and Yash did not need to concentrate on his career as he was already doing well in business ..Infact both brothers were doing well.. If it wasn't Geet's studies yash too might had moved in their relation as Geet had started to realise the meaning of the relation of hubby and wife..yash just was waiting for her exams to get over..
But it's fiction and it has to have many twists and turns.
.you are the first one who is complaining like this😆
I did not have any single reason for Maan not moving in his relation with Arpita.. every married couple does this..
and they both had punarvivah..Even Maan hadn't expect Geet to be a virgin.. he knew about it only when Geet shared her and Yash's past with Maan..
It's not fair to expect a man to be virgin even after six month of their marriage... Is it?😆😆
yash had a reason otherwise geet too had moved in with him😛

Thanks for loving the story Maya
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most welcome 😊

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