Short Story: Winged Flight (note- P 9)

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Doracake

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow

that was amazing

Waiting for next

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nivi: that cute dp thing cracked me up. You know this story was posted on an impulse triggered by your PM. Otherwise it is posted with original names in the blog, which reminds me I miss you a lot in the blog :/

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice start

Maan and Geet are friends...they celebrated Geet birthday in farmhouse.. Geet has some dreams she wants to get drunk and kiss random guy... Geet and maan got drunk when Geet opened her she was in different places maan took her to her favourite place Geet was overwhelmd with his plan..eagerly waiting for the next part

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Part 1 - Nice start. Geet celebrating her 25th birthday on 31st march, a financial year end. she being studious want to enjoy her life on her 25th birthday. She started with being drunk and wished to do adventurous things. when she woke up she found herself in diff area. maan really gave her big surprise and brought her to LA. lets see what else maan planned for her birthday.

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Doracake

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wow superb update

Maan challenging Geet to take the trip with him. Who ever says no bear the cost of the trip 😆

What will happen in the trip??????

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komol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Aww Geet and Maan's friendship is adorable.There seem to be some underlying emotions which they withhold for one another judging from their respective monologues.Looking forward to the actual day in LA.

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Its such a big break from their work both r happy lets see what will they challenge each other

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I love this madcap zany friendship 😆

almost makes me not want romance to intrude..

Romance brings all kinds of anguish and knots in your belly

this unabashed feeling of floating is so much more than that😃

excuse the comment... I am in love with your writing Shika, kya karu..

you don't leave a sane thought in my head😆

muaaah!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

congrats on the new story! phenomenal updates! brilliantly written! Maan n Geet r friends! Maan celebrates her bday! she is drunk! Maan takes her 2 LA! Geet livid! update soon

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Interesting and Fun Filled Updates

Geet already 25 years and never really did impulsive mischievous stuff she was always studying and than working hard but now she too realizes in all these years there was no real fun moments

no teenage naughtiness while Maan he seems like a fun guy very impulsive too

it seems they friendship is very special and Maan can do anything to get Geet to do fun stuff and travel

Geet gets drunk for the first time and it seems that both she and Maan ended up making love but that did not seem much as a problem to her so maybe Maan was just playing her as nothing really happened .

now Maan makes Geet agree to stay on this trip giving each other challenges now that is something awesome and I'm eagerly waiting to see what challenge Maan gives Geet