Short Story: Winged Flight (note- P 9)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tum aa gye ho toh noor aa gya hai
Nahi toh chiraagon se lau jaa rhi thi
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A Winged Flight

I remember a freshers night where a girl was asked about her wishes that she would really like to see come true, one of her wishes had been that she wanted to visit Las Vegas with her friends and enjoy life to the fullest. The seniors had asked if the friend that she wanted to accompany her has to be a someone special and she had blushed. 😊

This story reminded me of her.
Welcome Back Shika ! It is such a pleasure to see a new story from you.
There had been lines here and there throughout the story that I could relate to. So first let me tell you which of the lines I absolutely loved.
If the world could be divided into two groups only, there will be happy drunks and sad ones. Of course there are murderous, forgetful, crazy, weepy drunks but we will ignore them for the moment or merge them in one of the two categories.
So true ! For me they are all the same , scaring the night lights out of me !😆

He could practically shit rainbows and puke marshmallows for all you care.
Shit rainbows and puke marshmallows!!!! wherever you get such ideas from !😃
The reason for him being so jubilantly drunk ? Was it only because his G had turned 25 and he was taking her to LA or the time had finally come to be out of that safe friend zone ?😉

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"In an alternate world, I would be brave enough to resign to the job I hate and follow my heart, bold enough to go out with anybody that I am attracted to and do many things I won't do otherwise. In short I would have done something impulsive when I turn 25 than sitting at the pool of my bestfriends' house, where a not so surprise party had been thrown to me."


"You never got a break from studying and then working hard"

"I took life too seriously and now that I look back, I see no adventures, no secrets in my teens or early twenties. It's just me being a good girl. I'm tired of being a good girl"

These were the lines that touched my heart.
Its so true sometimes you never get a break from working hard.

Being impulsive can be so much fun naa ? you can eat as many pizzas, bergers,samosas without caring about gaining weight, you can go n tell that senior ,"Hi! Just wanted tell you've got a very cute smile.So can you change your dp and put a pic with that smiling face of yours so that I can drool."
And when your professor asks, " Why do you attend classes when you aren't interested in what I've got to teach you?"
"The class is air conditioned Sir, yahaan neend zyada achi aati hai!" 😆
But alas we can't afford to be impulsive so all we can do is to dream about an alternate world. Yeah girl ! I can totally understand what you.



"I don't know. Going to LA, getting drunk, kissing a random guy maybe"

getting drunk - tick
going to LA-tick
kissing a random guy- a big no ! not possible
listen dear G if you want to kiss who better than Maan so plz drop this random khayal

The second half was such a heart warming gesture ! I understand her getting hyper about getting late to work and other tensions but once when the initial shock will fade away and she'll let the fact sink in. She is Los Angeles and is here to enjoy the little pleasures of life it would be so exciting.

I totally loved the first part !


"You take me to your place on my birthday, all dressed up and expect there's no party thrown?"

Now getting you drunk and taking you to LA this is what we call a surprise ! Ms. Geet- always-treading-on-safe waters its time for a take off 😊

In order to fly there are four kind of forces essential, lift, weight, thrust and drag.

Lift is produced by the lower pressure created on the upper surface of an airplane's wings compared to the pressure on the wing's lower surfaces and it causes the object to lift upward.
Thrust is the forward pulling or pushing force that allows the object to move in the forward direction.
These two are very essential forces needed in order to fly. And the best friend here has provided the much needed lift and thrust to the girl. The real world where official deadlines, the hesitation, the social norms et cetra et cetra were stopping her from living her dreams , he has brought her away from that world. The desire within her will now force her to spread her wings. I hope everyone here gets such a friend. If not a friend, one should do it for one self for we get just one life.

Not knowing where you are heading to can sometimes be very beneficial. It is at these times when you discover your wings and force yourself to fly.
"The feeling of suspended in mid air with no landing in sight will unravel your wings and then you will begin your flight."
LET THE GIRL SOAR HIGH ABOVE IN THE SKIES AWAY FROM THE REAL WORLD ! 😊

Thanks for writing this !


Edited by ardentfitzcy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start hmm good girl wants to be bad thats cool maan is such a sweet friend he gave her big surprise for once i thought they made love thnx 4 update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story shikha..enjoyed the first part ...studious geet want to do adventurous (wink . 😉 in her 25th birthday...nd maan gave a big surprise by bringing her in L.A...wow what next ...shayad aaj kal paanv zameen nahi padte mere ...
Couldn't stopped humming after seeing the title..continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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She smiled ignoring that those are the wildest things she could think of. Her standards were pretty low in everything. Expectations, and even in dreams.

Such a telling and yet relatable fact

Loved it so much

pls don't make the wait unbearable Shika

i won't mention the one I love

thanks for the new story 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...an outstanding story...lovely so geet has no love feeling to maan looking for the next part pl...can u pm me...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely start
geet has no feelings for anyone but the way maan taking care of her and her wishes it feels that he has fallen in love with her ..
he took her to LA on her birthday ...

thanks for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Like Frank Sinatra says,

Fly me to the moon and let me play among the stars
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars

😳😳
Since that is not possible at least fly the girl to the City of Angels.
Where are the real men who would do this I wonder?
I love her reaction though. Totally relatable😆
The plan sounds really romantic but if it actually happened in an alternate universe, I would be going bat shit crazy if anybody did that to me.😆

Mr. Impulsive and Ms. Precution. I like this odd couple.
If she wants to get drunk in his presence it goes to show how much she trusts him.

The birthday has just begun on the other side of the world. Wonder what kind of antics they will get upto?😃

It feels fanatic to see a story under your name🤗






Edited by Susegad - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved first part, waiting for next

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