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Raabta .. unknown relation of souls






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Posted: 9 years ago
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geet - babji ne muje ek chance diya tha apni zingi fhirse sawarne ka but i lost that chance
for this so called society


maan - usne mujmain and society main se society ko chun liya ,kya mera pyyar kam pad gaya



i know i know i am devil😆
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maan

25 year old have small business ,no one in family
have a two freind adi and pinky




geet
age 20
lost ma papa in 14 year ,than live with mama mami
but mama went to abrod for mami health before
that married to vikram who want to kill her unborn
girl



adi

age 28

maan friend down to earth ,my is more imp to
him than any relation




pinky


age 26
age 26 adi love lady ,very culbuli but clever




vikram

age 28
geet so called husband




dev

its surprise
Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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part 7


part 8



part 9


part 10


part 11


part 12
page 51

part 13
page 52

part 14
page 55

part 15
page 57

part 16
page 58


teaser of 17
page 59

part 18
page 61

part 19
page 62

part 20
page 65

part 21
page 66

part 22
page 68

part 23
page 68


part 24
page 69
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part 1

She is running with so much fear and tense she don't want to lost her child ..na never in any ways kabhi nahi that girl around 20 have so much injury but put her hand on her abdonment and mummer I will save u ,save u her breath is uneven , but she can not take chance to stop can not ...a coldness run to her spin when she saw that all in front of her how that so called human throwing unborn ,small girls baby f0etus in front of that dog to eat its so disgusting

Geet cried so much and think for while kash ma baba yahi hote mere pass itne dur hai kya karu main ab ... Who is going to help me jisko sath dena chiye tha wo to ajj meri bachi ka sabse bada dushman bana hai , mera so called husband she feel so much disgust with his thought how her so called husband n father of this unborn child try to kill them.

She feeling low now ...her breath turn more heavy ,this running now another thought start to fear her ,this much of running uski bachi ko kuch ...na na babbji smbahl lana please apne muje aise musbit main fasya so u have to show me way babaji some tear fall from her eyes how a mother loss her child na its not possible and acceptable for her never.

She hide behide a big

She hide behind a big car for while its late night and no single person is there which help her she again closed her eyes and pray babaji madat please she is standing closing eyes there n some one touch her shoulder and she cried in fear maaa, n her fear turn real her so called husband standing in front of her with devil smirk.

Not so easy mrs vikram n he grab her hand so tightly almost dag his nail in her soft arm she cried in fear and pain please na...no but he tight his grip on her like iron grip.

A tear fall from her eyes today she feel so much weak in front of that monster jo na to acha pati bana na to acha pita (father ).

She know now she have to take step, that also fast she closed her eyes , and just bite on his hand with so much force it's so sudden he is not prepared for that ,she almost brought blood from that bite and he cried in pain and loosen a grip on her hand she took that chance n push him ...

She start to cried and shouted in loud voice bachavo please help me her painful voice start to cut that night silence , a beautiful city which is in dream land ...nature start shake with her painful shouting its heart aching cry of mother who trying hard to save her child.

Mere bachy ko bacho please koi to bahar aao meri madat karo please meri bachi wo mar dega mere bachi ko please someone come out , she is now verge of lost her hosh.

She hold her stomach and cried I will save u ...kuch nahi hoga kuch nahi hoga other side Vikram who stand up n with so much anger start to took step to her side who is standing near road side and crying he reach near her to closed her mouth with his palm but before he touch her ...with sudden force he fall on groundand other side geet who is shaking with fear look to source ...who push vikram on floor. A Tall man ...a serious face , two chocolate eyes which r dragging fire so much anger in that eyes and before vikram stand on his feet a strong blow on his face given by that stranger n vikram again fall on land who try to stand on his feet vikram try to hold geet feet but that stranger put his leg on vikram palm n vikram cried in pain

Vikram - kon ho tum just go from here she is wife and that is my child.

Stranger pull him with his shirt and smirk oh really that's why she running away from u like this with so much fear and injury which begging on road for her child safety ha.

Vikram - to kya wo pagal hai beti ko birth dena chati hai , thud that stranger give one more blow to vikram and bloom start to come from his lips.

Vikram - who r u and what u want ?

Stranger _MSK Maan singh Khurana ,kabhi naam mat bhoolna samjaha n one another punch and vikram lost his hosh

Maan turn to that lady who with winded eyes looking all this ,she took deep breath ,her child is safe now ,she caressed her stomach slowly and smile softly and before maan ask anything she lost her hosh ,maan just run to her and take her in his arm so much pain he found on her face so much injury on her body but her hand on stomach like she protecting her child ...maan mummer ma se badkar kuch nahi hota (there is nothing big than mother ),he took her and made sit in his car and took his car to hospital side he call someone before start the car .

He is walking outside of room from last half hour so much tension

At last doc open door and call him inside they treat her all wound she is sleeping now .

Doc say u brought on time mr khurana ,so much stress ,running and such injuery pata nahi kaise monster hai human ke roop main she is 4 month pregnant khurana.

Maan nodded in yes he feel so bad for her it is so painful to look someone like this fighting for life.

Pata nahi kya kar rahe hai log sirf boys hi birth lenge to next generation ko kon birth dega pata nahi , pata nahi kaise jite hai ye log.

Just than both hurd her soft cry meri baby and both come near her geet, who is not gain fully hosh, she mummer something same time doc got call she say mr. khurana stay hear I will be back in moment.

Maan nodded in yes and doc went out

Here geet saw vikram face in subconscious mind and she wake up in jerk ...and cried no no my babay please no . Maan is seating near her he is in so much thought to touch her or not at last he put his palm on her shoulder and she hug in fear please bacho meri baby ko please.

Maan Patten her head and say softly u r safe now please open your eyes ,he is not here look u and baby r safe and sound .

With his soft voice she open her eyes and found herself in hospital and hugging to a stranger ...

He is same who save her she come out from hug and took his plam and say in shaking voice thank thanks thanks u save my baby thanks tear falling from her eyes ...

Same time some sun light start to fall on their hand its sun rising ...that soft orange light indicating that it is new start of her life which going to be beautiful


Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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part 2

coming in two hour 😆


sorry two hour ke jagah next deen aa gaya 😆

Maan brought geet in his house ,after getting discharge from hospital ..he not once hear geet ,who is saying she will manage by herself ...but till now maan get that she don't have anyone in her life so ,maan don't hear her anything and took her to his house .



Other side geet feels she is burden on maan ,they r ajanbi stranger for each other ,till now he help her and save her and baby life ...but stay in his house its too much ...she don't have any job how she will live with him how ...her face turn pale with so much thoughts ..

Maan again called her come inside geet I have to closed door ,that brought geet in reality and she entered in house ...

Maan make her seat on sofa ...now also she can not walk properly because of injury ...maan give her glass of juice ..first she make face like small child ,but when maan pointed to her baby ,she finish like obedient child ...maan smile on her act and he know he have to clear some point so she get ready to stay with him.

Maan seat front to geet and say softly ,we both know u don't have job and anyone in your life who look after u and your baby ...second think that devil ,not get arresd till now ...and third point I am not doing any social work or something else ,I am doing this all as human being nothing else.

So I am going to clear some things first u take a week rest so your all injury get relief than u have to serch for job ...and u have to pay for rent ...house rent ,and jo bhi ghar main kharcha hoga wo hum dono ko adha adha share karna hoga ...its ok ...

Geet now start to think yes its better way ,and I am also not feel as burden on him ,and my baby get protected here .she nodded ...than maan show her room ...its beautiful and big have big window where she can seat ...with her baby ...a soft smile come on her face and she put a hand on her bump ,which is little one ,but closely u can see that ...

Maan smile on her act so madam lost in her pari ...her baby ...


Maan - so u like room ,he ask her ,n in response she give big smile and nodded


Maan - if u want to make any changes say me ok


Geet again nodded


Maan - ok so love this house


Geet again nodded


Now maan come in teasing mode


Maan - so u r fat na ...


Geet nodded in trance

And when maan laugh out loudly ,she get for what she nodded yes ,she bite her tongue and smile with maan

Geet - wo kitchen kaha hai ,I want to make something ...

Maan - no need geet ,first took some rest ...from tomorrow u will cook

Geet - please muje babaji ko bhog chadana hai ...

Than maan cannot say her no ,he just point out to kitchen and say first get fresh than come in kitchen till than I make coffee for me ,and for u what u want ... she say A black tea. Maan nodded and went to his room he first get fresh and come in kitchen ,he is living hear from past 2 year he is Indi pended in all sense ,he never say no to any work ,with office he is best in kitchen also ,he can do all house work ...he have only one servant for household work like cleaning house ,cloth and bartan ...he is happy with his life ,thou he don't have in his life ,he lost his family in one accident . before this flat he use to live in hostel ,but he buy this house and get settle hear ...

Geet is first person other than his buddy ( adi ) staying in his house ,he have three bedroom house with small parking and small garden ,he is happy in his life but ...same time a loneliness in life.



After getting fresh geet also come in kitchen area where she found all lost maan in some thoughts ...

She try to called but fail ...she called suniye ,suniye but maan is not hear her voice ,he so much lost in thoughts ...at last geet called out MR KHURANA ,MR KHURANA ...




AND that brought maan back ,he ans yes ...yes

Maan ask what u called me




Geet with confused face say Mr khurana . what happen ...



Maan - did I am old man that's why u calling me like that ...geet Mr khurana




Geet - main to suniye bhi bola tha but apka dhan nahi tha ...




Maan what u call me suniye bhiya ,now maan is in teasing mood ...after so many days he get bakara to pull leg ,and geet is easy to pulling leg ...




Geet frown on maan talk n ans why I will call u bhiya kya app ,dhood ,sabji ,vagera sell karte ho kya ...wo log bhiya hote hai not app samjhe ...




Maan hide his laugh ,she is so innocent ...



Maan ok ok ye lo tumari black tea, but why black tea did u thinking about calories and all kya but in this stage ...




Geet no no not calories and all its her,geet pointed to baby and say she want this ,nahi to muje to milk bahot pasand hai ...geet say with baby face ...



Maan amaze with her answer its means mother start to eat according to baby like...wow




Just than his eyes landed on geet sari ..that have blood mark because of her injury ...he say ,ok after finish tea please change in something ...maan pointed to blood strain..



Geet nodded but next she ask ,she don't have cloth so ?



Maan - I will bring in evening till then ,wait with that he went to his room and brought a t shirt ,trouser for her



Geet make such face ,but don't say anything ,just took that dress and went to her room ,she change into his cloth ...its big for her height but for now its ok but ...She need duppata ,she never wear such dress so ...she search for it but don't get anything ,she make face and seat on bed ...

Other side maan waiting for her come out but its more than 15 min she don't come out ...he get tense ,and at last knock her door ...


Maan - geeet r u ok ,open the door


And after two three knock she open door but stand behind door ...maan get confused and entered in room ...


She is looking cute in his dress ...dress is big for her and in t shirt her baby bump ,maan want to touch that and pull geet cuby cheek also , but he control his thoughts and ask ,sahi to hai dress kya hua ...


Geet I never wear such dress,muje duppata mil jata to ...


Maan thought for while and went to guset room and come out with duppata ..


Geet once sucpectially look to him ,a girl cloth in his house...n maan read her qus and answer wo meri friend ke girlfriend ka hai some time they come hear.


Precap

Shopping of geet cloth

Kya cloth ,ji girly personal clothji


Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Yipeee!!!!🥳
Love u sooo much mommy!!❤️
Thanks kehna mana hai..phir bhi Thank u sooo much for starting this story🤗
Grrr..that b*****d Vikram😡
Poor Geet😭
Tadaan our Super Hero MSK came and saved her😛😳
Hope he will protect Geet and the little Pari who is on the way😳

Me 1st


Edited by Madhu.. - 9 years ago
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Nice part.. Maan geet aur uska baby ko usa moanster vikram sa bacha liya and ab geet ka kya hoga kya maan uska help karega and geet aur baby ko har danger sa save karega.. Waiting for next part...
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Nice update. Maan saved Geet and her baby from Vikram.
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Awesome mahi as always so geets so called husband was chasing her to kill her baby geet was running scared bevvinv not kill her baby just coz her baby was a girl vikram caught her geet bit him to save herself she running shouting to save her baby vikram was dragging her away when maan saved her geet realise she is safe collapsed maan took her to hospital where doc was cursing her in-laws geet was still very scared maan consoled her

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