||~RVWC: SS: Felt By Heart ~ INDEX @1 on 23/10/16 ~completed~|| - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whoaaa part 1 superb yaar.. Maan blackmailed into saving the company that geet unknowingly is destroying.. Hope maan saves geet and descovers tge real culprits.. Superb start hun.. Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! awesome banner! Well written! KC's branch is underperforming! Dadi adamant nt 2 close it! Maan emotionally blackmailed n agrees 2 go there! Maan tells Adi 2 make all the arrangements! Poor Geet is so oblivious! she is being used! she is nw gng b in deep trouble! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update great start so maan wants to shut down the company that was laid down by his dada for the first time dadi had emotional attachment for the company she made him promiseto do everything to make the comapny work though maan was hesitant but he agreed for his dadi he asked adi to collect details who was horrified and told him something bad was going in the company man decided to go as an employee and try to befriend the employees as none were talking geet works in that company where she is being used by her boss akshat who is doing frauds in her name which geet isnt aware she knows a lot of illegeal things r going in the company byut to dsave her job she isnt saying anything not knowing her boss is all set to stab her in her back
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Part 1-

so far so good, I love like totally love the banner; it's real intense and colourful. Dadi's emotionally tied to the office, it's normal when its the first they set up. But I don't exactly blame Maan, why hold onto something that only results in loss. That's why I suppose the previous generation think we have no emotions lol. Maan's going undercover, can't wait. I love Undercover Boss (Australian series)

Poor Geet, its one thing being hard working and it's another to be an escape goat. I wish she wakes up to see the reality of those criminals/users. I sure hope she can get herself out of this or at least maan her innocence

So far I'm loving it,
thank you

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Interesting Start
Geet Handa works at Khurana's branch the one that has all the fraud activities and she is the one that really works hard yet she is the one that signs all the fraud documents
the manager of the branch is cunning and he knows she is innocent so uses that innocence to get his illegal jobs done
Maan will be coming to that branch as an employee and I'm hoping once he suspects Geet he can start keeping an eye on her and than find out that she is innocent I'm hoping he does not fire her on the spot
but lets see what you've planned
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice part.. omg poor geet everyone was using her innocence.. hope maan find about that
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Interesting start... Dadi don't want to close the first branch n maan decide to set the things straight.. The other side... Geet became a victim of her cunning boss..hope maan don't punish her without proper investigation... Can't wait for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept 👏 nice update...😊
so khuranas one branch in loss..
geet used by others😲

just waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome & interesting start . maan wanted to shut down that particular branch cos of loss but his dadi stopped him by emotional blackmail . later he came to know everything through adi & decided to go there . geet is working there & her corrupted & cunning boss do illegal deal by using her name .
waiting for next

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