Hi Kitty! 😳 😆 🤗 Finally managed to finish reasing it. I have read it in one go. ❤️ Hun, I fell in love with this story. Will comment every part of it...
Part 1 So everything starts with a kind and understanding Maan Singh Khurana who promises his Dadima that he will get rid of all those branch problems. Of course he thought about a plan B (he's right, naa? He needs some back-up!) but he gets emotional listening to his Dadima's worlds and decides to make everythig he can to save his grandfather's first branch. Loved him understanding and responsible nature and his bonding with Dadima. ❤️ Seems their bonding is indeed very genuine :)
Adi is such a sweet person, he's that true friend who does not only succeed in understanding you but also helps you no matter what the situation is. He knows his friend really well. Aww... Bring it on 😆
Their relationship needs no words, as we can see they understand each other just looking at each other's expressions. 😆 Loved how you made Maan a smart boy connected to reality and you didn't portray him as the mostly typical indian dumb ML. Teri jai ho love! 😆
Maan is indeed so caring, he understands him friend must be tired... genuine care. Loved it... And along he brings some praises for himself too! Great sense of humor 😆
Here comes Geet's entry... loved it. A simple and innocent girl who does all the work without asking any question... she must have a good reason for that. Feeling sad for her. :(
Oh, this Akshat Gupta, the so-called head of the branch... he's a disgusting person. You created a very powerful parallel of the different personalities of MSK and this Akshat. 🤗 He orders Geet to make his horrible work and then blames everything on that poor girl. 🤔 A very big percent of the fraud is on her name. :o Again feeling sad for her...
What would Maan do next... erhmm.. I'll tell later in my next comment! 😆 My phone battery is not supporting me to write on every part now... :( 😆
Hun, how could you ask if it was boring? It was an amazing update and you are an awesome writer ❤️ Just love the way you write, seems easy to understand and enjoy So glad I found your stories darlz... thanks for sharing your immense creativy with us... See ya later jaani 🤗 you know I love you <3
Edited by Aishuuu. - 9 years ago
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