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Posted: 9 years ago
part 1

love it kuch alag lag raha hai stroy

so msk trying to save compnay for dadi

and there all fraud happening on name of geet handa

adi is freind come eployee of msk wow


love it ...


part 2

tum kya jano ramesh babu 😆

maan feel hot ,msk walking ac abhi tak bana nahi hai

msk ka intro with staff kya yaar ...

adi become friend of geet wow

msk all fida on geet

now what going to happpen love or hate
👏

part 3

thanks god msk ne dil ki suni na dimag ki

he trust geet

and good punishment to that bas*****

how he dare to slap geet
dont worry geet your prince is here


part 4

maaneet ka kiss wo wala hua ya cheek pe 😉

love a lot a part ,maan and two devil

maan say all his mind ...that he love her

msk travaling in bus ..so geet goinong to sleep

on maan 😛😉

like adi teasing to maan
Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 5

u r such devil fairy tale se sidha zameen
pe lake rakh diaya


police arrested geet before that geet help
maan in every sense to capture corruption

geet mu maan that he also use her like other
but why maan is crying in last

i am scare yaar



part 6


total emotional update geet whole family
no more 😭feel bad for geet

u make us cry awesome part

court declared innocent of geet


part 7


geet broken with her mother reaction

that her mother not trust her

she is all silence she have to speak up

else its going to hard


Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Kitty! 😳 😆 🤗
Finally managed to finish reasing it. I have read it in one go. ❤️ Hun, I fell in love with this story. Will comment every part of it...
Part 1
So everything starts with a kind and understanding Maan Singh Khurana who promises his Dadima that he will get rid of all those branch problems. Of course he thought about a plan B (he's right, naa? He needs some back-up!) but he gets emotional listening to his Dadima's worlds and decides to make everythig he can to save his grandfather's first branch. Loved him understanding and responsible nature and his bonding with Dadima. ❤️ Seems their bonding is indeed very genuine :)
Adi is such a sweet person, he's that true friend who does not only succeed in understanding you but also helps you no matter what the situation is. He knows his friend really well. Aww... Bring it on 😆
Their relationship needs no words, as we can see they understand each other just looking at each other's expressions. 😆 Loved how you made Maan a smart boy connected to reality and you didn't portray him as the mostly typical indian dumb ML. Teri jai ho love! 😆
Maan is indeed so caring, he understands him friend must be tired... genuine care. Loved it... And along he brings some praises for himself too! Great sense of humor 😆
Here comes Geet's entry... loved it. A simple and innocent girl who does all the work without asking any question... she must have a good reason for that. Feeling sad for her. :(
Oh, this Akshat Gupta, the so-called head of the branch... he's a disgusting person. You created a very powerful parallel of the different personalities of MSK and this Akshat. 🤗 He orders Geet to make his horrible work and then blames everything on that poor girl. 🤔 A very big percent of the fraud is on her name. :o Again feeling sad for her...

What would Maan do next... erhmm.. I'll tell later in my next comment! 😆 My phone battery is not supporting me to write on every part now... :( 😆
Hun, how could you ask if it was boring? It was an amazing update and you are an awesome writer ❤️ Just love the way you write, seems easy to understand and enjoy So glad I found your stories darlz... thanks for sharing your immense creativy with us... See ya later jaani 🤗 you know I love you <3
Edited by Aishuuu. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

😳 Res and bump 😆

honest comment karna... no flattery😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby

honest comment karna... no flattery😳

I'll be the most honest. 😆 You know you deserve all the love ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

I'll be the most honest. 😆 You know you deserve all the love ❤️

awww thnks jaani 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres my review on part 1 jaani 😳 😆
Hi and bye love 😆 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm here to bump also 😆 7 Up 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! wonderful update dear...loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE
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dont worry this is not a discontinue note... just 6 days back i lost my mom... i dont have an inspiration right now... i am lost in this world...i used to talk to my mom everyday for an hr pr less... i was in Germany and she in India... now i feel so lonely... i will come back for sure... my mom made me strong enough to move on just am coping up with loss... i hope ypu all will understand... if possible pray for her
Edited by BlackWidowBaby - 9 years ago

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