O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1 - Page 85

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

A/N: Wrapping up the story soon.
A writer needs something from you too so that I can continue. It is just not happening anymore for me. Sorry to those who are following sincerely. I promise to make it good enough for you.
Please finish reading because once I am done, I will not send pm anymore.
Thanks!


😭😭
Inni jaldi Wrap up 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC


😭😭
Inni jaldi Wrap up 😲

Main kya karuOuch socha I am not updating soon but even with back to back updates people are not reading.
It is not a good enough story..😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just love this song 😳
listen 😳😳


Meri bechainiyon ko chain mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Mere deewanepan ko sabr mil jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota hai
Dekho na aankhon se
bheega bheega pyaar beh jaata hai

Meri tanhaiyon ko noor mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Main raat-din ye duaa karun
Tere liye main jiyun marun
Chaaron pehar tujhe dekha karun
Mera jahan ye tujhpe fanaa karun

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota hai
Dekho na honthon pe tera ehsaas
Reh jaata hai

Mere har raaste ko manzil mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye

Berang hawayein mujhe naa jaane
De gayi sadaa kyun abhi abhi
Hai sarfaroshi ye aashiqui bhi
Jaayegi jaan meri isme kabhi

Zikr tumhara jab jab hota hai
Dekho na har lamha teri daastaan
keh jaata hai

Meri har ik tadap ko sukoon mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Main kya karu socha I am not updating soon but even with back to back updates people are not reading.

It is not a good enough story..😕

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I don't know why ppl are not reading it.. meko toh pasand hai teri writing
Kia kahoon ab 😃😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 10

'Cut the wood to shreds, so was his state of mind' and needless for me say do is Tara state. Each time I remember the injustice she faced, the blood in me turns into lava, a hot boiling active volcano ready to erupt any second, which normally would be dormat. Or you can imagine a lady hulk, although an image of Fiona from shrek comes to mind 😆 😆 not pretty exactly, now is it? Do you watch Avengers or snt marvels? I love them, can't wait for Batman vs Superman no it doesn't look great but it's just a tradition now. I've watched every single one if them do can't miss one now. Marvels ❤️

I would love Tara to break into a female hero, imagine that. Boy that would be a treat, she literally could have beaten those imbeciles to pulp 😆

Aww Dev, I'll tell you a little secret I've always found Abhinav hotter then Gurmeet. I don't know his more my types but than Maan took over, the character made me fall for Gurmeet more. But my like for Abhinav still lives on 😳 😆

Ofcourse she needed to survive to reach those misersble sods a lesson 😡 reminds me of science and the survival of the fittest theory, o she shall survive physically n mentally.
'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger' is it me or does this Tara remind me of elk of Kellys song
I can't wait to see s stronger, fitter and better Tara

Prima dona - did you have to 😲 I love that song 😆 n Geet, makes for a perfect picture 😉
Ordinary 😲 well then this or finally girl just swept him off his feet n turned herself to extraordinary
Nah it's not just the dream, it's you. Geets grept into his system and automated it to overdrive 😆 😆

His taking this PA thing a little too seriously, poor Geet. First he insults her for getting too close which no self-respecting girl would like and now his demoted her from a doctor to a PA. thank gosh his ill or he would have probably be disabled now

Aha now Maan turns defensive, is it him speaking or his jealously hahaha I do love a jealous Maan n devs pic OMG blimey no wonder Maans jealous. I love the war of words between the two, hopefully these exact words would return Maans memory

N now for Tara n Dev I want more, I love them two as much as maaneet. So in your words I don't want to be rest assured 😆 😆

But I do look forward to more maaneet 😉

Thank you n sorry I will take my time commenting n reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome teaser ... just have to read part 12 ... than I am back with ur speed
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC


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I don't know why ppl are not reading it.. meko toh pasand hai teri writing
Kia kahoon ab😃😃



I also love this story 😭 😭

You know what I'll pull an alnighter tonight to finish this 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi wonderful teaser! ending so soon????😔 Y???? 😭loving this SS and all ur wrks!!! U stories r amazing! Please dnt end so soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeh Kya teaser tha
U wrapping up t story :(
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Yeh Kya teaser tha
U wrapping up t story :(



i thought I will write a long story but
I am down to half the pm I send who are reading

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