O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: dqno1

give me 1 update of da
i will give u 5 here
deal or no deal 😲

Zabardast DEAL 😃

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rost

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

Chapter 11. Feeling really bad when Tara. Poor girl, she's so vulnerable and scared. In all this, though Maan is fee bad for Tara and trying to help her, but still he was try to analyse Geet and Dev's relationship. He is coming up with ways to keep Geet close.

The cops are really horrible. They are supposed to protect and help people, in this case Tara, b they are causing nuisance by cross questioning Dev, Tara and Geet in the wrong way. Due to which Tara thinks of committing suicide.

Luckily, Maan was there to save her, but really sad for Maan to relive those moments when he lost his parents in a similar fashion and could not save them. This time he did save Tara.

Seeing Maan hurt and having nearly lost him has made Geet determined that she would not give up on him and their love. Waiting for some romantic Maaneet moments.

Can I get the password for the next chapter please.

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jeyanthi123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

lovely teaser
Update soon

Edited by jeyanthi123 - 9 years ago

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Bhuvanaguru1986

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

Nice teaser waiting for maaneet romance.

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singh24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

😃 nice tsr..

waiting

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

Ch 10

Ahh!!! I sobbed my heart out as I read Tara's part. But I can see that she has begun her journey to get to the other side of survival. I love this Dev. He is such a strong man, yet so very gentle. His very strength is his gentleness and that is exactly what she needs right now.

I really really really need more of their story Avi.

This couple has too much potential and it would be too unfair to their story if it is not given a proper development.

As for Maan and Geet I was giggling through the whole Tom and Jerry antics they are doing. But the problem with Dr. Khurana is that try as he may he just can't see her as Jerry😆

Upar se Tom is bristling on seeing the oh not so senior woodcutter😆

Damn that pic is sizzling😉

At this point the serious tone of Dev and Tara's updates are balanced out by the humor in Geet and Maan's parts. This though is going to change I can feel. Maan and Geet seem to be harboring some misunderstandings about each other.

That was a fantastically written chapter Avi😃

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

Ch 11

Whoa that was one hell of an intense ride of an update. I went from being mad to confused to holding my breath as they went down that cliff.

The cops are as much the perpetrators as the goons who attacked Tara. They are lashing at her psychological wounds and that is a equally heinous crime as the rape is.

I do not blame her for wanting to end it all. She is so broken. She needs nurturing and gentle care to heal. She is surely going to get that from Dev, Maan and Geet, but she is going to fight her biggest battle with herself and people like the two cops are pitfalls she just does not need right now.

Hats of to PC Ashish Ranawat.I like him very much. And no his name is not a cliche. He fits in here perfectly. Only wish he has some moire face time😉

Nothing like a calamity befalling a loved one to show us how much they mean to us and how fragile and precious the time we have with them is. Geet's realization of that very fact was done beautifully Avi.

I am still confused about the timing of all the incidents that have happened in the past, but I guess you are unwrapping the onions of the past one layer at a time😛

Mast update tha. Too good. Very intense😃

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Ch 12

A love that rises above all recriminations and hurt is the strongest love of all.

Maan and Geet are heading towards such a love I can see clearly.

So much was revealed in this chapter.I had like an 'aha' moment.

So Geet think that Maan has forgotten her willfully and Maan it seems is struggling to put together a patchy memory.

Dev's moment of self doubt makes him feel so very real and human. I really really like this humane man. and Geet is just the kind of friend who says the exact words that are needed in that moment to encourage him and show him that the path he has chosen is right.

I hope you will explore all the aspects of the story in depth and flesh it out more. 😃