O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#821

Guess Maan and his parents had accident.. His paremts died and he forgot.. Geet kitni khush ho gayi na..

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Mitu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#822

Part 10

This part made my heart wrenched with Nainatara pain, fear n uncertainty... to which extent that monsters has broken her that she is unable to belive her saviour too... the she has her food was something that made me skip those lines as I am unable to handle that pain...

Geet and Maan part awesome... Maan and his ordinary girl chant ...😆

He is talking like a obese person... he is jeolous n poessissive like a lover but geet is a ordinary girl... whom is he telling to us or himself 😆

I loved his chanting and havoc inside him...

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Mitu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 11

Again the show stolen by Tara scenes for me... you have shown reality or maybe as much as reality n cruelty of world ... we writer can show in an fiction... what I liked is that you didn't choose a fairytale way... this is what happened in real... that the so called society made victim as culprit... where culprits are out of their reach to get their next prey ... I just feeling pain too much for Tara that ... Maan was just confused with his own feeling ... he wants geet ... he is possissieve for her... but still want a upper hand in the situation

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#824

Whoa Ladybug you are on a roll. Three back to back updates😲

My weekend is complete😃

Padh ke aati hoon😉

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bina_a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#825

Avi... I as continued to read this Ch I was thrilled. I felt like watching everything. maan's questions, Geet accusations, Dev's dilemma. Wow... The way your wrote it was top class!! So now Geet understands why maan does not remember her. It was the most interesting chapter. I was extremely happy while I was reading it and sad when I reached the end of the chapter. Kya karein yaar Dil maange more 😆 . Thanks for updating Avi!!

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#826

Ashish Ranwat...really? Nice name combo😆I remember checking it out when you had mentioned it and the name stuck in my head. So I did a double blink when I read that name😉

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893213

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Posted: 9 years ago

#827

Originally posted by: Susegad
Ashish Ranwat...really? Nice name combo😆I remember checking it out when you had mentioned it and the name stuck in my head. So I did a double blink when I read that name😉

😆 so unoriginal of me😆

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GC_TheKing

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Posted: 9 years ago

#828

Nice update. While hugging each other both felt something. Maan asked her whether they met again after their first meeting. But Geet said nothing and left. Geet came to know about Maan's head injury and happy that Maan had not purposely forgotten her .

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#829

Part 11 - Maan again decided without her consent as his helper as she promised to be his pa. Idiots policemen. B'coss of their questioning tara felt more guilt for being bad for dev & geet. She could not take their accusation and jumped from cliff. Glad that maan was there but he also jumped to save her. Why maan said that he cant loose her again...what reminded him of..? Glad that PC got help to rescue them. Geet was also hurt to him wounded. She bandaged his wound but she stopped herself to hug him or soothe his pain. He could not stop himself to hug her. I would love to read dev-tara too.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#830

Part 12 - Loved the start. Maan & geet dono ek dusare ke hi achche lagate hai. His sweet words brought her back to reality. She could not give answers to his questions. She thought he did forget her purposefully. But thnx to dev who filled her his illness & trauma. She linked all the points and came to know that he was suffering from partial amnesia that why he doesn't remember her. She thought about who will help her to know what happened to him & his parents. Liked dev-geet convo also. He was feeling guilty for tara's state. Hope nakul help her to solve the mystery.

PS - Avi you know I am always late as I cant read your updates in office surrounded by colleagues b'coss update have pics. So I had to wait for sat-sun or I sometimes manage to read in the morning as soon as I reach. Now adays little busy b'coss of march ending. So sorry in advance for my late comments. And thnx for pms.

Edited by Madhuri53 - 9 years ago