The Guava Thief ( Chapter 2- Pg 11) 18th March

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979861

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Hay babaji!
ye hum ne kya kardala😲

rukiye pichle saal M ka diya hua Fevicol ka dibba padahua hai filhaal iss se kaam chalalijiye ga🤔

Wah! Fevicol diya bhi toh second hand

😆 😆

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tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Lovely start

Geet lost her parents and now is at her mamaji house..

Maan's first introduction with geet was hilarious...

Superb update

Waiting for next

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tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Happy that u r continuing this story...

It's nice ..don't underestimate urself..I enjoyed reading this story and must say u r wonderful writer...

Add me to the list .

Hope u update next one soon

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

magnificent update! well written! superb intro of MSK! his thoughts well portrayed! Maan annoyed with Geet! update soon

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kabslocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Awesome updates. Maan and Geet meaning is very interesting.

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

finally updated

wonderful update

enjoyed talk between maan n geet

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

res
phewww. finally caught up.

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL.

i was intrigued by the title but never knew I'd find such beauty here. Fitzcy, you are wonderful
the prologue bit was so sweet. Maan is a collector in uttarakhand and i realized he has feelings for geet... it was so evident. so serene. the flashback of her and titu in his mansion.. (probably stealing guavas, i presume) was so cute...

and then i went over the first chapter... and i am your fan right now.
Manology ya psychovigyaan😆😆 who would have thought that behind a timid liittle girl hid a bratty kid ready to kick some fine ass.

I loved your description about everything. Isn't it true what you mentioned about arts and science. you score a 80% and above, it comes as an unwritten rule that you have to choose science. 60-80%.. commerce ka thappa lag jata hain aur ussey kum ho tho arts. people have even stereotyped marks and anyone breaking the rules... humesha parihaas ka patra ban jaata hain.
geet had given me this hindi touch now..shudh hindi. but meri bhi kahan itni pakki hain... dasvi tak padhi thi aakhri baar hindi. ho sake tho yahin se wapis padhna shuru kar dun.
atthanve pratishat wo bhi manovigyaan mein.. wah wah.. avval darje ki chatra nikli humari geet.

but what i loved the most in the simplicity of this story and from now, count me in as a regular in your thread.

pls update soon
can't wait to read next!😳

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

next part post kar rahi ho😃

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979861

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sree10
What an update!!! Was waiting for your update for so long. You are worried about what? You are too good a writer to worry about if we will read.
Thank you. Waiting for next update

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

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979861

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: tabby999
Lovely start
Geet lost her parents and now is at her mamaji house..
Maan's first introduction with geet was hilarious...
Superb update
Waiting for next

Thanks. Am so glad that you liked it.