MG OS: Love At First Sight: Updated Part-1: Pg-9, 19/07/2016 - Page 3

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congo on the new os interesting concept update soon
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congrats for new story
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Congrats for the new story 👍🏼
Waiting for the update
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wow yummy fav of my maaneet..very interesting yar
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hi...hope u will update soon
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Hello friends...I'm shifting at a new place so i'll not able to for a week or little more...
see you guys after a week 😊
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Originally posted by: Parimishty

Hello friends...I'm shifting at a new place so i'll not able to for a week or little more...
see you guys after a week 😊

thanks 4 da note! all the best 4 ur new place! will b waiting! awesome news! welcome back! 😃
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Character Sketch




Maan Singh Khurana

Lawyer by profession. Simple, SOber, Humble, Polite, Down to Earth, Soft-Spoken. Hardly gets angry. Hopelessly in love with Geet (his love & fiance).


Geet Handa (Soon to be Mrs. Khurana)

Lawyer by Profession..loves Maan like anything. Mastikhor, Prankstar, Full of Life, talkative. Exact Opposite of Maan.



Nikita Malhotra

Lawyer by Profession. Maaneet's friend and Considers Maan as elder brother.



Ridhimma Gupta

Lawyer by Profession. Maaneet's friend. Favours Geet always and love teasing Maan like anything.



Sonakshi Bose

Lawyer by Profession. More of Geet's friend and gradually became friend with Maaneet and Nikita.

These are the main characters. Other will be introduced with the progress of the story.

This story is inspired from a real life stories of my two closest friends.
Edited by Parimishty - 9 years ago
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Part-1
XYZ Resort, Ahmadabad Road, Udaipur

All 5 friends were at the resort to celebrate the happiness of Maaneet. Finally their marriage got fixed. They chose Udaipur as the place to celebrate their happiness as this was the place where they all became friends and Maaneet's love story started.

So Geet say me tum dono ki baat kaise shuru hui..?? How you became friends and how you fell in love..?? Asked Ridhimma. And Nikita supported her..yess Geet dii now say us your love story in detail because asking Maan Bhaiya is totally waste of time. He will repeat the same lines..we started talking in class than exchanged our numbers and used to talk over phone some times..and some time we met outside coaching as well that's it..said Nikita while mimicking Maan.

And this time Ridhimma supported Nikita..yess i completely agree with Nikki baby..(Nikita is 2 yrs younger to all..n Ridhima calls her baby always), Maan se to kuch puchna hi bekar hai..he hardly talks..story to kya hi bta paayenge.

This time Maan said..are yarr ab aise detail mein btana to bahut mushkil hai..aap pucho questionnaire ke form mein..i will answer.

On this Ridz gave him seriously wala look. Maan mein aapse story puch rai hu..judiciary ke exam ka mock test series nai dena hai aapko.

Everbody smiled listening to Ridz.

Thank God..Geet aapki life mein aayi and brought some positive changes in you warna to agr koi aapki trh ki hoti na kam bolne wali tab to ho jaata..aap dono milke vishva shaanti kayam kar rahe hote.

Everbody broke into fits of laughter listening to Ridz.

I know..and Maan Bhaiya se phone pe baat karne ka matlab hai khud se baat karna. Question bhi khud hi pucho, uska answer bhi khud hi do..and hanso bhi khud. Said Nikki

And Ridz and Geet supported Nikki.

Yess..!! Nikki ek dum sahi keh rahi hai..when we both started talking..i used to feel ki i am talking with myself. and many a times i used to check my phone whether Maan is still on the line or phone got disconnected. I used to confirm from him..ho na line pe..and he will reply..Yess..!! I used to ask him why he was not saying anything..he used to reply..aapki baat sun raha tha. Said Geet.

This statement of his "Aapki Baat sun raha tha" is his famous line.

Listening to all them Maan said..are yarr aisa bhi kuch nai hai..bas mein thoda kam bolta hu..aap log ke comparatively.

And the 3 girls (Geet, Ridz n Nikki) gave him..Oh..!! Really Look.

Let it be..!! Geet tum apni story shuru karo..warna agr Maan ko leke discuss karne baithe na tab suna chuki tum apni story said Ridz.

Geet Started:

Hum Dono ki baat shuru hui thi August 2014 mein..almost 1 month baad Maan ke coaching join karne ke. Although he used to sit behind me but humari kabhi baat nai hui.

To phir baat kaise shuru hui..?? asked Ridz. While Nikki and Sonakshi nodded their head because they were also curious to know..how this reserved guy Maan and bold & bindass Geet's love story started.

Actually being extra sincere and obedient student he used to come in the morning to institute for self studying. So jab AIBE (All India Bar Examination) hona tha uske thode time pehle like always he was their in the institute and co-incidently even I was their that day.

So he was busy in his books and I was discussing something with my friends...and while discussing something AIBE topic came..and mere friends mein se bhi kuch dene wale the AIBE ka exam..and exam centre ka discussion hua..so I asked him his centre..and he replied that he chose Jaipur as first choice for centre. And that was it..I started giving him gyan ki he should have chose Ahmadabad instead of Jaipur because Ahamdabad is near to Jaipur and his reply was I didn't had much idea.and is reply par bhi again I started gyan ki agar nai pta tha to puch lete kisi se..their is no harm in asking and agar puchne se apna bhala ho to bilkul bhi sochna nai chahiye.

All were laughing listening to her.

And I was feeling like ki Geet kitna bolti hai..as if aj last day hai..and iske baad kabhi bolne nai milega.

Ridz said hota hai..aapko habit nai thi na itna bolne aur sun ne ki. But thnx to me and Geet aapko aadat ho gyi.

Maan shook his head unbelievingly..he knows whatsoever may happen..these two (Geet & Ridz) can never ever stop supporting each other..and if they don't talk for a second their mouth will start paining😆

Waise Ridz I still can't believe what you told us (Maan & Nikki) that you didn't spoke a single word from your mouth till 2 yrs of your age and Uncle-Aunty had to consult the doc.

Ridz replied haan to now I am compensating those two years.

Ridz wo two years kabke compensate ho gaye with interest said Maan.

Haan to wo kya hai na ki ab har koi aapke jaise to ho nai sakta na itna shaant, itna quiet. Aur ye jo aapmein changes aaye hain na..like you can now revert back to me, tease me..credit goes to Geet only for all these changes. Warna to agar aap pehle wale Maan hote na to bas abhi smile karte max. Kuddos to Geet ki usne aapko itna positively change kiya.

Maan shook his head..he knew he can't win from these two (Ridz & Geet) when it comes to defending & supporting each other. Sometimes he feels that Ridz & Nikki are his friends or Geet's friends.

Oh..!! Hello Maan..kahan kho gaye..saked Ridz

Kahin Nai..replied Maan.

Geet tum continue karo..


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Edited by Parimishty - 9 years ago

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