OS SERIES on Maan and Geet: TORN BETWEEN LIFE & DEATH updt on pg14 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: taahir004

A Beautiful OS

Maan and Geet married and they start they married life with lots of love care and happiness .
Maan knowing his wife is shy took things slow at first
You depicted the emotions of both so well



Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

Wow sooo romantic... Maaneet get married and become 1 soul 1 body.. Beautiful start hun.. Eagerly waiting for the next part of the series.. Congrats on ur story..






Originally posted by: poojitha96

Awesome os well written will be waiting to read more





Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on the OS Series! Y no pm?? Fab update! superbly written! Maaneet married n happy! Maan undesratnds its her first time n takes it slow! Maaneet become one! waiting 4 next part








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: doll.12

Ooo... Will there be more part into it??


Yup it is OS series it will have OSes in it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amreenshameem

Beautiful os
Well written the progress from marriage to submission
Liked it







Originally posted by: sagorika93

woow..fabulous one shot ...beautifully written ..
maan n geet got married ..n maan promised to be with geet alwayz n will keep her happy ..awww...!!
they becme one ...❤️
beautiful...!!!





Originally posted by: tabby999

lovely os ...

full of maneet love ...care and passion ..

thank u








Originally posted by: jssood

beautiful and hot os





Originally posted by: GC_TheKing

Wow hot and romantic OS.






Originally posted by: doll.12

😳*blush* ... It was a really sweet part...

its an arrange marriage right??

Answer: Yes it is an arrange maariage



And I love arrange marriage concepts... They have their own charisma and attraction...it was beautifully written... Maan .. A gentleman ... Getting to know that his wife is too shy ... Did his best to make her comfortable enough... They submitted to each other in a very beautiful manner..u should make it a ff


Answer: ope it was just someone ask for me to write that's why i wrote it will just have 2-3 oarts more... for that concept...


.. Please .. Its really a great start... Journey of their wedded life ... How they work out this relation and getting to know each other .. Will love to read more of it ..












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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mona_90

Congrats for new story and nice os maaneet are married and maan geet ko aur uska nature ko janta hua kitna acha sa situation ko handel kia and apne new life start vi ki.. Waiting for next parts..



Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

beautiful OS yaar..maaneet starting their marriage life..with full of love & trust..


Originally posted by: priyasree


Congrats for your first attempt






Originally posted by: Donnaa

a beautiful os ila...
i really really enjoyed it...
its so well written...well put emotions...
and you became me daring ila...while reading it i just feel maan and geet's pure love ...
never ones it came out as vulger anywhere...




Originally posted by: pari_DD

amazing os dear mannet are married they became one potrayed eachother feelings very well



Originally posted by: annirogc

beautiful os.. eager to read next part








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

wow.. beautiful.. romantic OS
















Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Fabulous update ☺️













Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Beautiful and romantic story

Maan his love for his wife and his promises
To her is beautiful










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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hopefully i will try to post it today or tomorrow😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii


I am Dhruvika. I am glad to know you guys loved this One shot as i am very much scared as i have written it very first time. I am sorry that i have not updated my Fanfiction Love incomplete or complete and this one as i am busy with my job as exams are going on and i have to check them and put my best in to it... But i am glad to get a response i will try to update atleast this OS today or tomorrow...

Please i will be glad if you love this One Shot too and review it thoroughly as this new part is quite intense and hope it will give justice like previous one...


With regards

Dhruvika



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Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sacred Relation: Maan and Geet OS Part-2



"Bekraan Hai Bekraan...

Aankhein Band Keejaye Naa...

Doobane Lage Hain Hum...

Saans Lene Deejiye Naa...

Bekraan Hai Bekraan..."



Well Someone has said it right that "It's a pure bliss to wake up in arms of your love." This is the feeling that Maan was experiencing right now. He had long woken up from his sleep as he was an early riser and has a habit of waking up early. He was staring at his cute wifey who is right now behaving as a snow white who needs to be wake up by a kiss. He was having a naughty smile playing on his lips thinking what will be the reaction of his wifey seeing him. He saw her stirring and closed his eyes to watch his wifey's reaction. Geet open her eyes to find herself in new surrounding. She finds herself in her husband's arm. He was hugging her and she was all over him. She find herself covered with the bed sheet. She remember and blushes and felt proud knowing it has done by him knowing her. She felt proud on him. She moved her gaze to his face and saw him sleeping. She was smiling and blushing and feeling overwhelmed on what they have shared last night. Suddenly, she remembered that she is naked and felt embarrassed on knowing if she will not leave hurriedly and Maan will wake she will die out of shyness... She talked with Herself " Hey Babaji Main bhi naah... Agar yeh uth gye toh... Chi Chi babaji unke saamne aise iss halat mein jhalli jaldi uth isse pehle yeh uth jaaye..." Listening to this Maan couldn't hold himself and told her "Apne babaji ko tang krne ki jarurat nhi hai balki Geet ka pati bhut khush hoga apni wife ko aise dekhte huye..." Geet got embarrassed and pushed him and ran in washroom to freshen up. Maan laughs seeing his wife getting flushed face.



"Bekraan Hai Bekraan...

Aankhein Band Keejaye Naa...

Doobane Lage Hain Hum...

Saans Lene Deejiye Naa...

Bekraan Hai Bekraan..."



They both get ready and walked down in the hall to perform some pooja. Maan's step mom Parminder was there and asked Geet's to perform the Rasoi puja. Geet nodded and went to the Kitchen does the rasoi puja and cooked the Kheer as a sweet dish. Everyone was waiting at the breakfast table. Geet came with the breakfast and serve the Kheer to everyone present there. Geet was getting nervous thinking whether everyone will like it or not. Vicky was looking at Maan mischievously and having a grin over his face. After some time Maan noticed his little brother's gaze on him. Maan asked in annoyance"What". Vicky grinned and asked "Bhai we are waiting for your response... Kheer kaisi lagi.." Maan replied in stern way "achi hai..." Vicky pulling his leg " Achi ya Bhut achi bhai..." Maan rolled his eyes and said "bhut achi Now happy.." Geet feels embarrassed and downcast-ed her eyes. After finishing the breakfast everyone left for their respective work. Geet went to her room for arranging her clothes in the almirah. After sometime Maan enters the room. He hugged her from the back. Geet gasped at sudden hug but relaxed knowing it's him. He inhaled her fragrance and whisper in her ear " Kheer bhut achi thi... But not so tasty in front of my sweet dish.." Geet frowns at his remark... thinking what his dish... He smiles seeing her confused and replied "You wanna know Hmmm...". He turns and looks her sheepishly and brought her close to him and he was close to her and brushing her lips... Geet was feeling shy and having butterflies in stomach in anticipation of what is coming... He replied brushing his lips on her lips "You... You are my Sweet dish Geet which is more sweeter than anything..." with saying this he claims her lips. He first draws outline of her lips. She was feeling shy and she was melting in her sensuous move. He started sucking her lips... in between his kiss he asked her to respond.. Geet feeling flushed try to respond... seeing her responding He felt ecastic and bit her lips and enter her mouth devouring her fully Geet also try to respond by matching the passion of him. Geet was feeling she is in another world and was drowning in with him. After sometime when they are breathless Maan broke the kiss and still hugging her...



They were in their own world when Annie Maan's cousin knocks at the door and told them to come outside as Muh dikhaayi rasam has to be started. Maan and Geet was sitting in the sofa together. Guest are coming and seeing her prasing how beautiful the bride is... after it Maan's cousin Grandmom came and saw the bride and blessed her and told her to give a great grand son soon as Savitri Devi Maan's Grand mom was not there she has gone to the pilgrimage to seek blessing right after Maan's wedding. She will return after 2 months. Geet's blushes at her wish and Maan squeezed Geet's hand mischievously. Maan's mother took her to introduce her to her close friends. Here, Maan got busy with his phone as something important has to be done by him and he was telling Adi to look after it... Parminder introduces her. Geet smiles and touches their feet to seek blessing. They praised her. One of her friend ask Parminder "Now, be prepare to become grand mom soon... I am sure you will be craving for grand daughter as you just have two son Maan and Vicky". Parminder shrugged her and sternly replied "Nope I am just waiting for her grand son first as he will be the one to handle the business after Maan. After first grand child she will think if she wants a girl child or not." After listening to her mother in law's words Geet got shocked and sudden fear engulfs her and she was went in thinking what if she is not able to fulfill her wish... what will happen as it's not in her hand that she will be blessed with a boy in first time... Maan was glancing at his wife time to time... He saw the change for expression from blush to shock then to fear. He got worried what made her like this. He was trying to go to her to make her comfortable... but couldn't as the guest was there. Now, it was a dinner time and people went to the table where dinner was served to them. After having dinner everyone left for their home.



Geet was standing near window and watching the stars and was worried about what she heard from her mother in law. She got worried about what if she delivers a girl child what will be the fate of hers. What will happen to her and what about Maan does he thinks like his mother? Will he be happy having a girl child. If i am not able to give a son will he leave me??? She worriedly look at the sky and prayed "Babaji! Apni bchi par mehar rkhna Maan bhut ache hain unhone muje dil se swikaara hai main nhi chaahti ki main un se alag houn.. Kya babaji jo Maaji ne kha kya voh b aisa hi sochte hain... par agr nhi nhi... ho skta hai Maaji sirf expect kar rhi hain unhone aise to nhi bola ki unhe sirf ldka hi chaahiye... unhone kaha naah ldki b chaaahiye... right babaji... par kya yeh baat mujhe Maan se bolni chaahiye ki nhi...".



Meanwhile, Maan came and saw Geet standing in window. He went near her and put his hand on her shoulder and asked her worriedly "Kya hua Geet?" Geet turned and said "Ji kuch nhi...". Maan smiles and said "Kuch toh hua hai Geet Main nhi jaanta ki kya sach hai kya jhuth yaa main yeh b nhi keh skta ki main mere mein kuch kamiyan nhi hogi. Kamiyan toh sab me hoti hai par itna jarur vishwas dila skta hun tum har utar chadaav pe muje apne paas paogi... Chalo ab toh btao kya baat hai... Maine tumhe pareshaan b dekha tha kya baat pareshaan kar rhi hai tumhe..." Geet feels comfortable and smiles and just asked "Ji voh aaj Maaji Bche ko lekar bol rhi thi toh todhe dar gyi thi kahin main unke ichaaon ko pura nhi kar paayi toh..." Maan just smiles listening to this "Geet ! Hmm... Yeh toh bhut hi badi musibat hai hmm... Dekho Geet! ab bche toh bhagwaan ki den hain toh ab voh kab humein unhe humein dega yeh pata nhi but haan agr tumhe itni jldi hai toh... hum toh sirf mehnat kar skte hain right... Chalo ab hum shuru karein.. " Geet got embarrassed listening to this and hugged him and buries her face in his chest... Maan Laughs at his wife... and hugged her tightly. After a while Geet asked him "Suniye! Apko ldka chaahiye yaa Ldki...hmm..." Maan looks at her " Hmmm... Well Geet! ldka ho yaa ldki muje ek healthy baby chaahiye jo ki iss ghar mein khushiyan laaye voh b dher saari bche ki awaaz se iss ghr mein jaan aa jaayegi voh chaahe ldka ho yaa ldki doesn't matter at all... but haan tumne pucha hi hai toh main chaahunga ki ldki aaye toh acha hai as i don't have sister and i want a girl child as she will be a princess of this house... i love girl child i always wanted a sister ab sister naa sahi daughter se hi apni saari wishes puri karunga... Vaise tumne yeh kyu pucha?" Geet smiles and feels like she has done something good that's why she got a gem like him "Nhi vaise hi... bas man kiya?" Maan smiles " Chalo ab humein double shift krni padegi ab tumhe bche itni jaldi jo chaahiye" Geet flushed and hit him in chest and said " Aap bhi naah" Maan laughs and scooped up in his embrace and led to the bed for another round for love. They spent another night in loving each other.




"-----The End-----"





Part 3




Hi

I have updated this OS PArt 2 hope you liked this part and please do comment and review it thoroughly. I will be highly obliged to you.

With Regards
dhruvika


Edited by dhruvika1991 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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😳 Really a nice update...geet woke in maan's arm.. Feeling contented.. their morning romance was ahm ahm...
maan really loves her.. Geet made kheer for all... And maan also praised her... All are happy ... Thats really bad thing.. Her MIL wants a grandson as it is in hands of her duhh... Geet became so tensed about this if she isn't able to give then what... But loved the way maan consoled her ... Telling her that he only wants a healthy baby.. Sweet of him ..
Edited by doll.12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvika1991


Yup it is OS series it will have OSes in it...

Yayayyy... So u will continue it or new concepts...

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