OS SERIES on Maan and Geet: TORN BETWEEN LIFE & DEATH updt on pg14

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tabby999

@tabby999

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

lovely os ...

full of maneet love ...care and passion ..

thank u

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

😳*blush* ... It was a really sweet part...

its an arrange marriage right?? And I love arrange marriage concepts... They have their own charisma and attraction...it was beautifully written... Maan .. A gentleman ... Getting to know that his wife is too shy ... Did his best to make her comfortable enough... They submitted to each other in a very beautiful manner..u should make it a ff .. Please .. Its really a great start... Journey of their wedded life ... How they work out this relation and getting to know each other .. Will love to read more of it ..

Edited by doll.12 - 9 years ago

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Ooo... Will there be more part into it??

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Congrats for new story and nice os maaneet are married and maan geet ko aur uska nature ko janta hua kitna acha sa situation ko handel kia and apne new life start vi ki.. Waiting for next parts..

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

beautiful OS yaar..maaneet starting their marriage life..with full of love & trust..

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priyasree

@priyasree

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Congrats for your first attempt

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Dona

@Donnaa

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

a beautiful os ila...
i really really enjoyed it...
its so well written...well put emotions...
and you became me daring ila...while reading it i just feel maan and geet's pure love ...
never ones it came out as vulger anywhere...