Dil ..ki...Kalam se/th#2 added

index

Concept on page 1 (1st post)

prologue & character Sketch on page 1 (4th post)

part 1 on page 1 (7th post)

PART 2 On page 15

PART 3 ON PAGE 25

part 4 on page 37

part 5 on page 46

part 6,7,8 on page 59 (GHSP THREAD)

PART 6,7,8,9 ON PAGE 65

teaser on page 73

part 10 on page 73

PART 11 ON PAGE 85

part 12 on page 92

part 13 on page 102

part 14 on page 110

PART 15 ON PAGE 118

part 16 on page 127

thread 2

Prologue

My dairy

My only friend

Today am going to married with Maan

Again am fearing

If some happen bad with me

You know everything na

I wish this time destiny don't test me

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She closed her eyes, Tear fall on page...

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Maan is so nice person, you know dairy I like him from our childhood...only you know dairy about this...tumhare alawa mein ye kissi se kh bhi kaha sakti hu... but always fear to go near him... if, due to my bad shadow, I lost to see him too... then what I do... you know everything about me dairy.. But dairy I don't write one thing here too... I not only like him, but start loving him too...really dairy I also now know... But... when uncle come and said he fixed my marriage ... I feel again something break here...she pointed towards heart...but thanks to god this time... Uncle chooses Maan for me... dairy we talk later...

She signed at below on page...

Geet

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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana : 24 years old, young handsome guy.. But destiny play cruel game with him... he lost the parents in young age...

At this time surinder Handa give home to him and treat him as family member...

For Surinder handa he does anything...

Geet Handa : 22 years old, sweet ,bubbly girl... but with the phase of time her bubbliest lost in sadness... but she always try to smile... one by one she lost her parents... First she lost mom in younger age then after five years she lost dad too... his uncle surinder handa take her into own house ...

Mohinder & Rano handa : geet parents

Surinder Handa : younger brother of mohinder Handa

Pammi Handa : wife of Surinder handa

Brij Handa : Son of surinder & pammi handa

Pari Handa : younger daughter of Surinder & Pammi handa

Ada Khan : Maan best friend or ????😉

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Congrats On New Story
Concept Is Interesting
It Seems Geet has endured a lot of pain in her life
Character Sketch is also Interesting
so both Maan and Geet are orphans

Congrats for the new story Priya ..
All CS look interesting !! But that Ada already giving me negative vibes !!
superb prologue .. hmm geet is getting married to maan n she is in love with him ..
n having fear losing her happiness ... hope maan doesn't love someone els !!

sorry I commented middle in your update ...

Part 1

Maan sitting in mandap & priest chanting mantras...

Priest : ab aap vadhu ko bulaiye

Geet come to mandap with pari & pammi...

Priest : ab var vermalla ke liye khade ho jaaiye

Suriender give garland to maan , and pammi give garland to geet... both exchange the garland and again both sited in front of holy fire... suriender & pammi done kanyadhan...

Maan filed geet partition with vermillion, and then tied holy chain i.e. mangalsutr around her neck... pari tied the knot; both stood up & started taking phera's... in each phera , each mantra , give so happiness to geet, her face is glowing , all time she looking him lovely...

Preist : vivaah sampan huya

Ab aap dono apne badho se aashish le

Both bend to touch surinder feet, but he stops both and hugged both tightly...

Suriender : am so happy my children

He break the hug and cupped geet face ...

Beta aaj bhaisahab aur babhiji bhut khush honge

Tumhe khush dekhke

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She happily cried...

Na beta

Don't cry

Ab aur aansu nhi

Maan tujhe har khushi denga

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Maan bte

Aaj maine tumhe apne bhaisahab ki aakhri nishani sop di hai

Iska dhyan rakhna humesha

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He nodded...

Pammi papers leka aayo

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Surinder give file to him...

Surinder : ye geet ki amannat hai

Jo mein tumhe aaj de rha hu

Isme handa constructions ke shares hai

Aur Handa Mension ke papers

Jo aaj se geet ke sath - sath tumhara bhi huya maan

Maan : uncle ye sb aap geet ko hi dijiye

Surinder : maan tumhe hi sb dekhna hai

Pammi : ab vidhai ki rashm bhi puri kr lete hai

Surinder : hmm

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Geet hugged one by one and cried so much... brij held her by shoulder try to console her...

Brij : kya huya geet

Geet remember something try to go inside...

Pammi : geet tu ab wapas ghar ke andher nhi jaa sakti hai

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Kuch rh gya hai andher

She nodded...

Pammi : kya

She tries to tell, but how she said she forget her dairy in room...

Pari : mom

Par di ka toh sbhi samman already car mein rakhwa diya hai

Brij : geet look here

Kya rh gya hai

Surinder : hum batate hai

Aap ye dairy bhool gyi thi na

She little smiles and takes her dairy, placed near her chest tightly...

Surinder make her sit in car...and both left for new house...

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Both reached to Handa Mension, one watchman open the gate, whole house deepen in darkness...

Maan open the gate and come outside...and sees all around... all side is darkness or dust ...

Watchman : sahib aap thode der yhi rukiye

Hum cleaning krwa dete hai

Maan : rhehne do

He handover the key for opening the gate...

Maan : driver tum tb tak samaan nikalo car se aur andher leke jaayo

Driver : ji

Maan : geet

Puri raat yuhi car mein rhehna hai kya

Ya fir andher bhi chalna hai

She opened the car door, & come outside, her one foot place on some small stone, due to heel her foot bend, she going to fall, but he held her securely in arms...

Whole place lightened on same time, watchman on the power button...

Maan : aaram se

She thought wow what a good welcome in new life in our house ... He makes her stand properly...

Maan : let's go

Both come up to door, he going to take step inside, she held his hand, make him stop...

Maan : what happen

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Watchman : sahib aap thode der yhi ruk jaaiye

Hum grah parvesh ke liye kuch samaan le aate hai

Maan : ye khud ke hi ghar mein aa rhi hai

Toh koi grah parvesh ki jaroorat nhi hai

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Tum dono jaayo

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Driver : par sahib

Ghar ki safai

Yaha aap dono rahenge kaise

Maan : kafi raat ho gyi hai

Safai ka subh dekh lenge

Tum dono jaayo

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Both left...

Maan : geet

Am so tired now

Please leave my hand

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Abhi toh sone ki koi jagah bhi dekhnhi hai

Aur safai bhi krni padengi

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Geet my hand

She up her right foot and he too, both enter on same time... both feet make prints on floor due to dust... she stop him in mid, make him turn & pointed towards print...she feel so happy , she some after many years here with her husband , with her love, finally grah parvesh completed...

Maan : now can I see any place for my sleep

Geet held his hand again & take him upstairs...

She shows him three room one by one...

Maan : geet

Wo last corner mein kiska room mein hai

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Let's go here

He opened the door and sees one huge photo frame in mid... geet come near to this, wipes the dust from her dupatta...

Then she come near to maan , held his hand , take him near to photo, pointed one finger to photo then own...

Maan : your parents

She nodded...

Maan : hmmm

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This room is really amazing

She smiles...she again held his hand take him near to window... she opened the window and from her e you see on right side huge lawn, and in your left side pool ...

Maan : very nice

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Geet I like this room so much

Mein yhi rahunga

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I mean if you have no problem

Without saying any word she left...

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house pics i don't get if anyone posted here ...some deserted house which go perfect with this situation...so thanks in advance...

Originally posted by: ArchanaRoy

Congrats for the new story Priya ..
All CS look interesting !! But that Ada already giving me negative vibes !!
superb prologue .. hmm geet is getting married to maan n she is in love with him ..
n having fear losing her happiness ... hope maan doesn't love someone els !!

sorry I commented middle in your update ...

Interesting story...having a feeling tat geet cannot speak...pure part mein usne kuch nehi kaha...pata nahi confused hu...maan is different here...pata nahi kaisa hai...part one mein toh sab samaj nahi ayega...lets wait for the nxt part...priyanka di congratzz for the new story give the nxt update soon...

congrats for new story

Fabolous starting 👏
Both maan n Geet had painful past
N Geet happy to get married to man as she love him
Bt wht about maan??
N why Geet not tell or speak anything 😲
Is she fine
Waiting for nxt
N Congo for new Ff 😃