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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

woow ...porolg is awesomeee...
luvd the concept ..maaneet's journey in jhalak ..
really interesting ...would love to read more ..
plzzz continue soon...

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nice start, business man MSK shaking his legs on jhalak and geet is his choreographer. Waiting to see how their journey is going to be

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Superb Pro !!
Do continue behen 😉

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LM1991

@LM1991

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Lovely prologue! Can't wait for the story to start!

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

congrats for new sory dear
interesting concept
geet is choreographer ..maan body paining..
waiting for more dear

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

U know ... I always thought why the writer font write on it... And holaaa... U wrote it... Here it is.. So happy to read it... Prologue seems very much nice... So again a hatred filled journey towards love ... Will love to read more ... Do update soon ... And after this if u get time do write on bigg boss too... I always had a thought of it ... But alas... Couldn't get time to share ... Update soon..

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Can I have one dance in the upcoming update ... That one which gurmeet did ... Actually its two... One that Dracula one ... Song was from emraan hashmi film... Don't remember the name and second one was a sensual number... Choreo partner had wore a white dress ... Umm... Name of the song bhool Gaye..

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Nice concept! Do continue soon!

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Oh di this concept is just so fresh aur so wonderful, eagerly waiting to read the next update aur waiting to see ke kaise our this maaneet fall in love here 😳

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krishna.

@krishna.

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Very interesting starting.
Waiting for next.

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