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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats for new story...
Interesting prologue..
Curious to read further..
Continue soon..

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats for new story

Nice prologue

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

Very interesting concept
eagerly waiting 4 more

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

its obvious that u should continue it. its an awesome concept

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

congrats for new start ..

story is promising ...

maan in jdj and geet is his choreographer ...

dadimaa wants maan to participate in dance show...he is not liking it but had to do it for dadimaa..

maan having backache and geet there to solve that out ..

thanks for update

waitingfor next

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Akku

@akkub.92

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome concept liked the start how geet maan meet first time..so continue it and waiting to read next part so update soon

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Super - Duper Amazing
Fabulous Promo
Loved It
Continue Soon
Thanks for the PM

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

interesting pro maan in jhalak n geet is his choreographer loved geet best match for him plz cont soon

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

wow interesting...

waiting to read more of it...

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing concept. Eagerly waiting for next.

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